A Time-Traveling Immortality Game, Starting with a Simingxuanjian

The writing is generally okay. The protagonist's character is a lively character that is rarely seen in fairy tales. There is no inexplicable plot such as slapping the protagonist in the face. The only problem is that the protagonist's golden finger is a fate type, and the protagonist's own Qin Neng Bu Cao Fate is not seen how he uses it, or the results of the protagonist's use of Qin Neng Bu Chou Fate. Generally speaking, it can be seen.

It's quite interesting. At first, I thought it was just another story about the development of a few foundation-building tribes, but it turned out to be a powerful existence in this "end of law era". The male protagonist has great talent and super thick thighs, and his family has nothing to worry about. But the current chapter is too short! [Facepalm] I really don't see much of the male protagonist's subsequent development, it's just the beginning of farming [smile] The author should update quickly [punch out] Your readers are waiting for food [angry] [almost crying]

It's reasonable and logical. The protagonist group is sunny and cheerful, and there are no plots that involve bitterness and hatred. Update soon. What I am writing now is a plot for ages 6-11. The children are really lively and cute [laughs][laughs]. Update quickly [Like] [Like]

Lively protagonist, super rare. I didn't expect this to look quite comfortable. I feel much more energetic.

Every time the protagonist sees a powerful boss in the future, his face changes drastically [what]

It is currently available for viewing. It's just that the protagonist's character is a bit naive. What do you say? This is considered poisonous! But it's not a big problem. The plot is okay. It's okay to watch and pass the time.

It's pretty good, the content is of good quality, and the character of the protagonist is also good. I haven't seen any bad points after writing about seventy chapters, and it doesn't forcefully suppress the protagonist's strength. The protagonist's personality is also good, not the traditional brainless strong one. He has a bit of an optimistic personality and is serious about his work. He is one of the few protagonists who has a good outlook on life. The title of the book is just a bit confusing. But worth a look.

It's very interesting, but as of Chapter 74, there's nothing super. Although the protagonist is a bit naive, there is no description of how powerful the protagonist was in his previous life. It feels like he is just a male who likes to play games. After being reborn as a child, there is no such thing as being innocent and deep at other times, which is quite consistent with the character. It is written in the article that the protagonist does not plan to find a Taoist partner because of his own secret. He hopes to have no cp. Regardless of whether he is a male or a female, when it comes to the love line, it will collapse and become ugly. It is better to keep pursuing the career line. Although it seems dull at present, it is interesting. If you haven't improved your cultivation level, you can only stay in Novice Village. There should be secret realms, competitions, and participation in various major events later. Seeing in the comment that I don't hope that players will enter later, it's easy to write down the fourth natural disaster. After all, the game is about players first. As for the protagonist, I don't see any strategizing IQ at the moment, and he can't follow the behind-the-scenes flow. His talent is just hard work that makes up for his shortcomings. But this kind of ordinary and innocent daily life is very suitable for passing the time. None of the author's other books are finished, so I hope this one sticks.

It is a very interesting novel about cultivating immortals. The protagonist is a rare gentle and lively type. There are not too many bloody plots. The protagonist is a child from a small family in the beginning. The patriarch is also very open-minded. After entering the sect, he recognizes the teacher and is not bullied. He is not aggrieved.

Goldfinger is quite novel. It is not too big and does not limit the growth of the protagonist. The pace of the novel is very comfortable. Each character has his own characteristics and there is no cliche plot. It is very interesting, but there are too few new books and it is rushed.

It looks good, thank you for the comment section. After reading it, it really looks good. The lively protagonist is rare, and it is very smooth and enjoyable.

It's nice to watch. I haven't seen such traditional immortality cultivation in a long time.

Write well, the author thinks you will become popular

Not bad, I hope there won't be any plot 🐞 in the future

After reading it, I feel it's okay. It's just that the protagonist's personality doesn't look like a person from two lifetimes.

It's quite good-looking, hard work can make up for a poor destiny, and it feels like a bit of proficiency. The male protagonist has a good personality, and he has emphasized several times that he doesn't plan to have a wife. I hope it can be maintained in the follow-up. If everything else is the opposite, a female protagonist will suddenly appear. I believe the author's introduction of no female protagonist, and make a wish to avoid the fourth natural disaster.

This is a good book about cultivating immortals, but it's still too young. Please do your best, author👍

The writing is superb👍🏻, I look forward to the story of the revival of spiritual energy in the future [blowing kiss]

It's a very interesting book so far.

The author is Da Da, Modo Modo [Love]

Smooth and non-toxic, it is the essence of this product

Very well written, I like it

The writing is generally okay

Okay, it's pretty good-looking

Very nice looking forward to it

Full marks, write quickly! ! !

It looks great. I love watching it. Come on!

So far so good

Nice, warm and healing, ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑

It's pretty good looking. I'll give it a try.