Broken Iron: the Scholar Behind Ompharos

Lift the blanket of memory and take away the ripples of the past. Abduct the saint of destiny and capture the stray cat. The weaver who teases the holy city, the miracle doctor who carries the morning light. Defeat the chess-playing monarch and capture the fish swimming in the abyss. The maid who embraces life and death, listens to the sighs of the arguer. Caress the necessary pain and wipe away the tears of the burning sun. Embrace your immortal companions and write a new ending. [Praise]

When I first opened this book, I was about to lose my mind when I saw the name, but I quickly picked it up after reading one chapter. A very good Beng Tie fan, still highly recommended. In my mind, this book is the well-deserved number one in this field. First of all, if you read this book with the mentality of playing galgame, you can go. This book is not one of those otaku idiots who go crazy over the original characters. It needs to be felt with the heart and understood with the brain. In this book, the author truly understands destiny first and then explains his ideas. The setting is rigorous, breaking down the obscure concepts of destiny in the original work and feeding them to readers without making them boring. He added everything that was not explained or made clear in the game plot. If there are too many red stones in Tomato and there is a shortage of books, and you want to read some good books with non-brainful and logical plots, then you can stay and read this book. This book will never let you down.

Perfect, it's been a long time since I've seen an article that respects the plot, respects the worldview, the writing is good, and the understanding of the ending is exactly the same as mine. The plot of eternal return should be heavy and powerless, resisting fate in the background of nothingness. Deconstructing it with deus ex machina and cynicism can only be disrespectful to struggle and sacrifice. Then I found that the author looked familiar, and when I clicked on it I saw that he was trying to deceive the immortal, so that was no problem.

The most reasonable issue of the Beng Tie fanfic, with truly large-scale battle descriptions. I don't want other fanfics to give me the feeling of fighting in the original scenes of interstellar wars. For example, the movie "Star Wars", and it is a gradually rising trend of writing, especially since the late Ompharos. It has become better and better, and it has started to rise straight out of the universe. Of course, the description of the basic aspects of emotion is still not enough. I only saw the constant exchange of elbows with the romantic ancients. There is some sublimation of the protagonist, but they have "carried away the ripples of the past". At least I should see the emotional bond and sublimation of the friendship with the characters. Don't keep falling into the cycle of upgrading and making jokes. The author is great. A story must have plainness, passion, feelings, knives, and jokes. If you add them up, you can become a god. This is what Muli wrote!

The author has also written a fanfic before, which has been completed. As of the time I posted the review, it has received 7590 reviews and a score of 9.5. Don't worry about the strength. The content respects the original work very much. It has a historical structure but is well-founded. The plot is not mindless. The author is highly educated in literature and philosophy. He has some ingenious ideas. I was touched by many places. Inspiration flows through my brain that has been damaged by short videos (cultural workers must be literate) I don't know what to say, but the author has improved in this book, and his writing skills are ten paragraphs high! Worth a look! No matter if you understand or not! Just watch it! Follow up, author, please consider changing the name. I read it several times but didn't want to read it because of the name. I just saw it when I had nothing to do and looked up if you had any new works [face covering]

It's beautiful, and the logic is tight and interconnected. It's a masterpiece. Although the meaning the author wants to express is obscure, everyone has their own understanding and can see the answer they are looking for. For those who are unwilling to place their hopes on the outside world as a savior, there is a heritage called self-improvement. Just like history, we are unwilling to place our hopes on outsiders. We believe that we can create the entire world with our own hands. This is the pride that only belongs to us. Everyone likes good memories, but if you want to ask how much are you willing to pay for them? My answer is all. People live for hope, the hope for beauty. Our ability to love others is not innate. It is because someone loves us deeply that we learn how to love others. For those good things, we are willing to give everything, even our lives are insignificant.

This book is so beautifully written, it's not like other fan fictions that have super cheats and just a few sentences about conquering the Golden Descent without much depth. Instead, a mortal without any golden fingers uses mortal wisdom to solve the dilemma of Ompharos, and uses 30 million lifetimes of time and wisdom to save the Great Chain. This is the warmest, most rigorous, and most realistic Ompharos fanfic I have ever read. It's so beautiful, I highly recommend [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

The writing in the fanfic is okay. The protagonist joins 30 million reincarnations as an ordinary variable, finds a way to retain his memory, and gradually becomes stronger. First he struggles and then becomes numb. The turning point is that the protagonist tears apart part of his soul and throws it out with the help of Yi Ting. He finds the Black Tower, enters the mystery with the help of a genius, and then has a passionate exchange with Lao Gu. The author's plot is quite reasonable. You can take a look. It was a bit deviated from the planned route at the beginning. I thought it would get better and better after embarking on the mysterious destiny, but I was disappointed. The plot left Ompharos directly. I even had to start the plot from Yaliluo. I thought it was developing around Ompharos and then directly elbowed Gushi. As a result, Onfalos's role became less and less, and the gap was quite big.

I have read all the chapters in this book. It is beautiful, concise and not repetitive. It has its own story and does not deviate from the main line. It is so beautiful. I am Shennong, family members. I promise you, this is the fairy grass. After Bai Mo, I have found the most good-looking book. \(//∇//)\ Ah ~ Lord of heaven and earth, the evangelist of words, you are the blessing of readers and the lock of the soul. Maybe you have been waiting here for too long. That miracle was born in the world, and the miracle people regard it as a miracle. Please let the story extend to a new chapter~!

A very good novel, the characters are basically in line with the game, and the plot logic is clear and rigorous. The most amazing thing is that the author has a very deep understanding of concepts such as destiny and star gods, so the plot of the whole book is both wild and reasonable. When I was playing Star Railroad, I had a vague but reasonable sense of epicness about this setting (I can't fully understand it, but I have an instinctive feeling, just like the various sequences of Lord of Mysteries, which are profound and rigorous, which is the greatest charm of the game), and reading this novel also gave me a similar feeling. Astonished.

Beng Tie respects talented authors the most. The author's description of the protagonist's plot against Yi Lao Gu Shi can make you feel powerless and insignificant. He has truly written with the gold content of the first genius. Xi Lian is over [laughing and crying] There is no plot in daily life. There are still a lot of people outside Ompharos who may cuckold Lao Lian at any time, but Lao Lian doesn't even have the ability to know [laughing]

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It's good-looking, and I agree with the author's point of view that "you must read fan fiction to see the original characters, not just the original characters." It is a rare book among Bengtie fans that follows a logical flow. The characters of the original characters are well grasped, and the plots of the original characters are not forcibly weakened in order to highlight the protagonist's bad temperament. Lagus's father is still the most stern [like] The level of the villain is the level of the protagonist who directly responds [laughs]... Except for the small head controlling the big head when meeting Xi Lian (some plots) and the bad perception of some words, there are no shortcomings. In short, it is worth reading.

A growth-oriented genius novel, the first 30 chapters have a salvation atmosphere, and the last 30 chapters are galactic comedy. The writing is very good. It took me one night to read it to the end. The logic is clear and the settings are complete. Good-looking, love to watch, like to watch [Chigua][Chigua][Chigua]

This is a book that is delayed by its title - romance is not the main theme of this book. (The author once "picked the book by its name" and ignored this treasure reading) Since it is Ompharos, the main plot must not escape the two topics of "growth" and "salvation", and the most commendable point of this book is also among them. Let's start with "growth". Although the protagonist in the book is a time traveler, he does not have any innate advantages except memory. All the protagonist's acquisition of abilities and all improvements in cognition in the book are well-founded and reasonable. Just like a fragile seedling gradually growing into a towering tree, the whole process is disassembled and shown to the readers step by step. The reading is friendly, natural and rich in storytelling. Let's talk about "salvation". Unlike most other Star Iron fanfiction, the protagonist's combat power is extremely limited, and at the same time, the villain is in full swing - the villain's ingenious calculations and insightful decisions, the protagonist's despair of having nothing to do, the wavering of repeated reincarnations, and the pain in the face of unavoidable sacrifices... It can be said that "dark clouds are about to destroy the city", and all the beginnings are at the end of the road, making readers heart-wrenching and gripping. The final writing, two points. First, there is a lot of psychological analysis in the book. The psychological description in this book is unique, and it is like analysis: from phenomenon to dismantling to judgment and decision-making, the logical operation is smooth and natural from beginning to end; it is also lyrical: where does love come from, why does it grow strong, and why does it go away, all of which are meaningful and resonant. Secondly, even though the main plot is tense, the atmosphere in the book is not overly depressing, because there is always just the right buffer zone in the book. Sometimes it is Xi Lian's little bird, sometimes it is the protagonist's whim, sometimes it is the author's bad taste... Various easter eggs are arranged into the serious text, cleverly enlivening the atmosphere of the main plot. There may be some problems with the expression, but this is not a sadistic article. Although the first thirty or forty chapters are a bit depressing, I read them as enjoyable articles afterward.

Even Professor Ladio would give it perfect marks! The protagonist is a real time traveler without plug-ins, and the actions in the article are also logical. All power comes from his own efforts. There is no OOC in the whole character. Hajisaku also has a very deep understanding of Bengtie. He has added a lot of reasonable speculation and thinking. The writing style is very good. Occasionally, when I read it, I have the same experience as when I read it in earlier years. All in all, it is a masterpiece, and you will be amazed by it. Also: This is a book you can read with your mind

The plot of Ompharos in the first volume is very well written and complete. The author added his deep understanding of the world view of the Star Iron Universe to the original plot. I can give this part a 5⭐️ rating. The second volume of Belloberg can still be read at the beginning. The interaction between Qi Ji (the protagonist) and the Black Tower Space Station and the train is very interesting. The various original or self-created theories of Star Iron are also very interesting. I can barely give this part a 5⭐️ in the fanfic. However, the quality of this part has seriously declined since the planning of Beloberg. The article is full of various theories and annotations that are like a running list or obscure to me. It is full of various Riddler-like sentences, which makes it difficult for me to swallow when reading. If you like this kind of writing style, I will not say it, but in my case I can only give this part about 3⭐️. I haven't read the third volume of Immortal Boat, so I won't comment on it. Overall, I give it a 4⭐️. The summary evaluation is that the first volume is very good and the second volume is unsatisfactory. I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes, his grades will steadily improve, and his writing skills will become even better. If there is anything wrong, please correct me, thank you.

Tomato 🍅 is a rare article not written by AI The writing style and plot logic are very good. However, in the plot, the birth of Xi Lian (Mi Mi) begins when the pioneers go to Ompharos, and the resonance of the two star cores. Without this node, the plot of Ompharos would not be established. I look forward to how the author will round it out [laughing]

Very good, a rare five-star review, because the protagonist has really worked hard, rather than being a hard-core pioneer who uses the title of savior and does nothing as a camera. This is the real romantic story.

The heroine Xi Lian, the super savior, surpasses the genius with a mortal body, and lives up to the name of Qi Ji. The opening thirty golden chapters are full of surprises. The middle part is more relaxed and funny, so relax a little. The next one hundred chapters lay out the galaxy🌌, explore and seek knowledge, and the power that does not belong to tomatoes is really amazing. After a long absence, the feeling in my brain is back. Some chapters supplementary explanations of technical settings are a bit obscure and high-end. The game with many star gods (mainly the big machine heads) is very good. After careful understanding, the latest chapter of the four crowns so far, the unparalleled beauty bursts out, and the look and feel is excellent. The first few hundred chapters are on par with The Disguise Genius of Black Tower Space Station, but because of the distinct original plot of Omphalos, it is slightly better. The relationship with Black Tower, Feng Jin and Huang Quan is also well written. There are no bad plots with no sense of favorability, and the experience is excellent, but since it is a mysterious envoy... Hehe. In short, I finally struck gold, hahahaha, I have found a good book about Tomato! Hahahahahaha It is a work of genius, and it may not be as popular as others who write comedy or watch movies, but the logic is much stricter than other fans, the imagination is wide open, and it is lively and interesting. This is high-level interest. The character setting is very suitable for me, a reader who pursues the arc of the character. It can be said: a miraculous leap, the world is shaken. This really makes me happy. I hope more people can see such a treasure worth seeing, and I hope the author can add more plots about the Black Tower. Ms. Heita is extremely smart! Ms. Black Tower is unparalleled in the world! Ms. Black Tower is in trouble! [The masterpiece of bird food]

The writing is quite good. It's deeper and more logical than other Star Iron fans. It's not just fun. I want to ask who the heroine is, and whether there are multiple heroines. Omnivores can accept a single heroine or multiple heroines. If you can't accept the flirtation but not marriage, your favorability level is maxed out, and they also have that intention. But in the end, you said you wanted to have pure love, and the girls' love ended in nothing. Except for Xi Lian, Feng Jin and Xia Die should have good feelings for each other. They have done so many things silently. It is impossible to expect their friendship to not deteriorate. The descriptions in some chapters of Black Tower are also wrong. Yin Lang doesn't know if he likes them or not. There should be no ambiguity about the others.

A very perfect and concise novel I avoided a lot of mistakes, and I didn't write in a hurry, or shove some useless shit into it. The author must have read his novel over and over again, and then improved it. There were no problems in the beginning, and the quality is getting higher and higher later on. He must be very motivated to write, and he also went out of his way to understand the subject of iron collapse and checked a lot of information. The content is not as mindless as the original one, but the writing is very bold, with my own opinions and my own way of writing, and a unique line. It is written very seriously and concisely. I won't transfer adjectives here without thinking, or some stupid words. This problem accounts for 80% of the cases. There is daily life and the growth path of the protagonist. The fighting is also very concise but not direct. It just won't be mentioned in one stroke. It is very well written.

This is an excellent work that perfectly resonates with me and satisfies my fantasy - how does an ordinary person without cheats travel to Omfalos to save the girl who has eyes for you and who will give everything for you. The early stage is a bit boring but realistic enough, with basic symbols and an ironclad worldview. I'm looking forward to the author's creations, please keep reading, I can't get enough!

The author's ability to construct history is top-notch, and he understands Beng Tie better than Lao Mi. This book is truly a masterpiece. Seeing the insurmountable history of Beng Tie fans, I have to read this masterpiece of history composition. The protagonist is also a miracle in the world of history composition. Don't miss the good old history when passing by, take a look, have a taste

Already keeping up with the main force. It's a very good book. I wanted to review it when I saw the end of the first volume, but I didn't do it until I pressed the yellow button. I think it's suitable for a single girl, but I don't think I'll continue watching it if there are multiple girls. This is my subjective opinion. You still have to read the book to know whether it is good or not. [Think]

In fact, I have read almost all of the Ompharos-themed ones. Most of them are the same, which makes people forget about them. If it weren't for the book shortage, this book might still be waiting on my bookshelf. I am glad that I clicked on this book. This is the most unlikeable fanfic I have ever seen. The logic is so strict that my brain lost its wrinkles. I couldn't bear to skip a chapter, but it's very sad. This book is slow-paced. Chapter 200 just came out of Belloberg, which is a bit too harsh for me who likes fast pace. But the author's writing hooked me very well. Sir, it's too painful to wait for updates every day, so I'll give you a hundred chapters to appetize my appetite [Send my heart][Send my heart]

This is really impressive, not comparable to some historical works, it is a pure masterpiece, but the emotional line is a bit unclear, like a single heroine Xi Lian, or multiple heroines, I hope the author can confirm it soon.

It is well written. The first volume is the core but it is also easy to dissuade people. The content is not bad, on the contrary, it is an indispensable shaping. Otherwise, it will be too empty, but it still requires patience. Generally speaking, it is still a problem of too few words. I will update it soon.

(This review is purely hand-written. There may be some grammatical errors and some spoilers.) First of all, this book gave me a very good impression, including respect for the original work, respect for the world view, and the author's whimsical ideas and writing style. These are the reasons why I stayed and read it. In fact, in the current Bengtie fanfic, all the protagonists who have traveled through time basically have so-called golden fingers, and most of the golden fingers can be declared invincible at the beginning or after a period of time. The improvement of the protagonist's strength depends entirely on the golden fingers, and there is no learning or consolidation. However, this book does not. If we insist on saying that it is a golden finger, it can only be regarded as the "immortal golden nature" that provides an opportunity to escape from Ompharos. However, the fixation of the "immortal golden nature" requires the persistence of tens of thousands of reincarnations decided by Qiji himself. It is basically useless in the early stage, and it will be reversed in the later period. The "immortal golden nature" can also be regarded as a small trap left by Bengtie Universe for Qiji. From this we can also see that this book will contain a lot of foreshadowing. The author has many whimsical ideas (it is said that the author glanced at Aha, so Aha could become the Happy Star God of the Iron Collision Universe (this rumor is not sure of its authenticity)). You can read the specific content in the book, and there will be no spoilers here. Well, this is the review for now (I will write it again when I have perfected my writing)

There is no doubt that the rating of this book should be 9.5. The author's writing style has undoubtedly improved from his previous works, and the most important thing is that in the case of Bengtie, a hodgepodge of fates and riddles per capita, the author can put forward an explanation of the fate and justify it. He knows very clearly that fan fiction should not be like many works with inflated scores now - the same plot character is dragged through the plot of the original work by an inserted invincible protagonist and then does not know why - this is too boring. Just as Miracle (please allow me to call him that), what he is doing is to propose new possibilities, what the author of Qunyuge is doing is to expand the possibilities of the current Bengtie universe, in the form of a reasonable if line like the same person.