Mortal******

The writing style is like Jian Lai, but the writing style feels better than Jian Lai. Although it has the shortcomings of illogical plot logic and first-person perspective, it still has its flaws. There is no doubt that the writing style is top-notch, at least in my opinion, this book is a half-step to a fairy tale (if it ends later, I will pretend that I didn't say it) Okay, I take it back. The writing style and writing style are the only highlights of this book. In other parts, there are some problems, whether it is the plausibility of the plot or the respect for the original setting. Most of the plot developments are too taken for granted.

It's a very interesting book. It's based on the story of a mortal cultivating immortality. The protagonist is indeed a bit like a character written by Mao Ni. It's quite interesting. I hope to continue to work hard and maintain this level.

I enjoyed reading it and it suited my taste. I have not read the original work, but I would like to say that if you pursue the original work too much, you will miss a good book.

The author Han Li's master in Huang Maple Valley was Li Huayuan, not Lei Wanhe. Lei Wanhe saved Han Li once

In fact, with the author's writing style, there is no need to write fan fiction, but it becomes a constraint

A very novel protagonist, very innovative

Nice fanfic

Does the author have a female protagonist?

I have never read Mortals, so I have no idea what they think is wrong with this fan fiction. Overall, this book is relatively comfortable to read, and it's a good review.

It looks good. It looks very good. It's very elegant. I hope it will be updated continuously and not stop.

The writing is very good. It adds Jianlai's training system to the Mortal style's power system. It cultivates Haoran's righteousness. It's very novel. I have collected it with five stars.

It's great. It's the most enjoyable mortal fanfic I've ever read. Come on.