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Who Is Eating the Fine Chaff of Zongman! !
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Let's Have Something Purely Erotic, No Pornographic Comics, No Pornographic Comics, No Pornographic Comics!
It's best not to cut off the great teacher. If possible, I want a single heroine Yukinoshita.
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This book is really good, especially the description of Lu Bu's fight for Mink Cicada and Sun Wukong α fought for hundreds of rounds, but Xue Baochai really It's too strong, if it weren't for the Noxian with an outer ring + Noxus Guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing will kill you, other than that, I I appreciate what Zhuge Liang said about the 108 monkeys in Huaguo Mountain. "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", performance It shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey who knocked him to death with three sticks. (I am serious about everything after that) All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the plot experience is like being there, and the character descriptions are in place. It is worth reading. In short, you will not lose money if you invest in it [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
Well, five stars. It's been a long time since I've given a full score. It's undisputed. It's a very good fan novel so far. ^ω^ I think when I read other manga novels, I would always start a harem. I picked them all up. Some even deleted the original male protagonists, and even later added female protagonists from other anime inexplicably. And there was no system. I didn't know that the plot was really special. Perfect, the most important protagonist is not that kind of perfect protagonist. The protagonist also has flaws. I hope that everyone in the service department can save the protagonist later. I am still looking forward to how the author will chase Yukinoshita Haruno [laughing] and how to convince Yukino and her parents and two daughters to marry the same person [laughing] Well, I am really looking forward to the story behind [Like]
It can be seen that the author is really careful in shaping the characters. I read the anime first, then the novel, and finally the manga. The author has considered many details. As long as the quality and quantity are constantly improved, he will definitely become famous in the tomato porn circle [crying]
Although this book is a bit immature, the writing style is also average. But I can really see the author's true feelings and the thought he put into creating it. In fact, you can try to construct a good story logic, because sometimes the behavioral logic is not very realistic. The development of the storyline is a bit nonsensical, so I just write it as far as it goes. I hope it can be written along a logical line, which is better this way.
This is the best Harmono novel I have heard on Tomato so far. I hope the plot can continue a little longer. The original plot of the three fathers in the bar and then everyone talking to Hikigaya. I think the writing is very good. I hope the anime plot will be mixed with some original plots, or that some original plots will be continued after the anime plot ends. I hope it won't end too soon. Don't stop updating, it will be very painful for me. The first season hasn't ended yet, and the progress between the protagonist and Yukino seems to be a bit fast. What should Harano do? I hope it won't be changed to a single female protagonist. I feel so ashamed to say this [face covering] In fact, there are many similarities between this novel and my own thoughts. Fantasy is fantasy after all, your book is very suitable for me [Like][Love] Come on, author, I may read new books in the future. Let's do it [salute] Hmm, eh, eh, after the protagonist and Yukino become boyfriend and girlfriend, isn't it a bit too sweet? Why don't we quarrel? Do real lovers really talk sweetly like this? To be honest, I'm not used to it. [Shocked] What should Yangno do?
Personally I think this is a good Harmono fanfic. Although the title of the book is average (I looked at the title several times and didn't come in) the early part of the book was too sudden and I felt like I got straight into the theme. The main character's background and family are not mentioned at all here, but the later part is pretty good.
The writing is really good. Although there are occasional dissonances in the middle, the overall completion and plot advancement are very good, and the daily love life is also very heartwarming. The main reason is that the plot is original and does not completely follow the original plot. The author really put his heart into it.
Oh, I deserve it. I want to see the little devil school girl
The logic of this book is very good, the rhythm is tight, the plot is reasonable, and the characters are described in detail. It is the best among the books I have read. Unfortunately, the number of words is too short and the meaning is not exhaustive. I wish the author good luck in writing the book and good luck to my book friends!
It's not bad, it has the feel of the original work, and it's very advanced among the Harmono fandoms.
A rare youth story fanfic with a good theme
Are there only two heroines?
At present, this book should be rated 9 or above. Don't crash. Content comes first.
It's very interesting. It's the first time I've read a Harmono novel that truly redeems Rumi. The interaction between Yukino and the protagonist is also very interesting.
It's looking pretty good so far.
It looks good so far
Not bad, looking forward to future developments
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Come on, bastard, as long as you're not dead, give me a hard update, Kou Ya Still saying that I haven't seen your update for a day, and I feel like there are ants crawling all over my body.
Very good, this book is okay.
Listen to me, thank you, you warm the four seasons
It's so good that I finished reading it in one night. I added it to my bookshelf and plan to keep it for a while. I hope the author will work harder so that I can enjoy reading it all at once [laughter]
Not bad, it's the type I can watch, come on
Good news: the character fits perfectly Bad news: It's as hard to read as Riqing [face covering]
The structure is compact, the action trajectory of all employees is clear, and the logic is strict. This is a good work.
Not bad, much better than many so-called fan novels whose characters are actually just crazy.
It's a very good Dan Chunwu fanfic. There's nothing toxic about it. It feels like the original work. The emotional changes are very delicate. I support it.
Hey, why doesn't Tomato have the function of 4.5 Points? Giving 5 points is too much and I feel sorry for the author if I give 4 points. After rounding off, I still chose to give 5 points. You must write well🫵🏻
The book is very good, but there are few updates! [Crying] I always add a chapter every other day, and the number of words is not many. I am worried that the author will disappear one day.
It's very well written, and the egoism is well written. It's too short, please write more.