Childhood Sweethearts with Children

Judging from my 1760 hours of experience, the theme setting is average, but it is particularly beautiful. The main reason is that the author's writing style is very good, and the characters are well written and vivid. To put it simply, it is the same character as Gojo Satoru in Jujutsu Kaiba. The book Sex Feeds currently has too few words, and the platform has not promoted it very much, otherwise it would have become popular. It is a TO level in Tomato Demon Slayer. If there is no overturn later, the potential can be said to be very high, and it can become the top Tomato Demon Slayer work.

God [I'm about to cry] It's so beautiful, so beautiful. The heroine has a kind of temperament that makes everyone in the world right when they do wrong. She has a strong sense of deservingness. It's so satisfying for people watching it. It's completely amazing. I feel like she's one of the top ones among all the Tomato Demon Slayers I've read. It's a great work, and the combat power settings don't have a strong sense of fragmentation. The author's writing style is very good, and it feels very coherent when reading without any nonsense. The villain is excellent [shy] It's a pity that Tomato is a weird promotion, but if it is written so well, it will become popular sooner or later! By the way, will the author consider writing about movie viewing in the future? [Sending my heart] Don't stop updating, I will wait for updates every day...

[This is really a book with great potential! [This is my first time writing a review of a Demon Slayer fanfic. It's very interesting and different from many Demon Slayer fanfics I've read before. About the protagonist: The protagonist Saya is a very pure egoist. She will not wrong herself for anyone (pretending certainly does not count). She does not have the integrity and kindness that the Demon Slayer protagonist often has, but it can be seen that she is a very realistic protagonist. Follow-up expectations: I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot of turning into a ghost. I feel that if Saya becomes a ghost, it will be a type that I like very much. I am also looking forward to the emotional line between Saya and Tong Mo (it has not been fully developed yet, but it has a little beginning). It can be seen that the author loves Saya, and I believe that Saya will have the life she wants to have in the future. About the plot: I was really surprised again, because I read a lot of fanfics, and few people in them could write about the point of "do women have to marry?", But among the authors with better writing skills that I have seen so far, only this author has written this point of view (this kind of originality is really refreshing to me). In fact, the author's level can be seen from a novel. A good author is not only about writing, but also about values. Later, when Saya repeatedly rejected Yoko's request to "get married", I was already shocked. Later, after Saya was deceived into marriage, when I thought Saya was going to start suffering, the author surprised me again - Saya not only ran away, but also came back. I admire this plot very much. Even when Saya said she wanted to kill Yoko later, I thought she did a good job (the lack of inexplicable family affection is another highlight). I think women have no obligation to marry, nor do they have the obligation to forgive others. Favor can be repaid, but they will not hurt themselves or do things they don't want to do because of kindness. So so far, Saya is a very realistic protagonist that I like very much, except Yu Ling, the protagonist of another book. To the author: Thank you for recommending me to read your article, because I have read a lot of Demon Slayer fanfics. When I clicked in, I had no expectations. Your writing style has left readers and traffic for you. Thank you for letting me see the real Shaye, and thank you very much for knowing you. I wish your traffic will get better and better, and your fans will get more and more. [Others: I will review it again when it is finished. Good books deserve to be recommended.

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I admit this is really nice. I usually don't read serials without ratings or with few chapters, but this is indeed the first one. The teacher's writing style is very good. Saya's stories are all told eloquently. In my opinion, there are no flaws, except for the occasional typo. As far as Demon Slayer is concerned, I hope humans win. But in terms of character setting, Saya is a born bad, a beautiful bad woman, and an arrogant egoist, so I hope it is Saya's personal victory. She could stand on other people's corpses and enjoy herself. Originally, I could not imagine how the emotional changes would occur between the naturally emotionless leader and the self-centered Miss Saya. But then I got it! The leader is really attracted to the emotional Saya. I think if Tongmo really derived more emotions, it must have been generously given by Miss Saya. This is really great! Teacher, come on and write! I will always support you!

After three hundred years of book shortage, I finally found a book that suits my taste. [Blowing Kiss] The writing is very good, and it will definitely shine (I am stupid, so I will omit the 800-word essay here) [Shy] [Making faces]

The teacher's writing is really beautiful [sending my heart]. I first came here for the touching characters of the heroine Baobao and Tongmo, two villains. In the early stage, the psychological description and actions of the heroine's baby as a child were so well written [crying]. It's really cool. You can do whatever you want to a beautiful and evil person. If you are liked by others, you have to have a bad temper. Of course, the person who is looked down upon will have to support her... [Shy] In the later period, the author's writing was still online. But it seems not so evil (?) (It's just my feeling! Because the heroine's baby character is very three-dimensional in the early stage, why do you treat me like this? I just don't accept it. Why do you have a better life than me? Because the writing is so good, so I hope that the temper will become more and more difficult in the later period. If you don't like it, go to Si [I also strongly recommend]... It's just my feeling! Everyone has their own opinions!) Just like going to Yoshiwara, some presumptuous words. The feeling would be, how dare you mix me up with other people? You don't have the eyes to see me (from my temperament, the fabric of my clothes, my demeanor...) And you dare to categorize me together. The later part is a little dull, maybe because from my (!) Perspective, I felt that the early stage was too exciting, so I felt this way. The writing is really good! Chef, your food is so delicious. I will follow you forever! ! ! [Cry][send heart][send heart]

It's very interesting. This is the fourth novel about the villain chef that I'm satisfied with. But I have a feeling that the ghost camp will lose in the ending, but will Tong Mo and the heroine go solo? Maybe they will live in peace, but this is unlikely. If the ghost camp wins, Wu Misan will be another threat to the heroine. I'm a little curious about the ending. It's not OOC. The heroine is both evil and cute, and the emotional line is relatively clear and delicate. There is no such thing as love at first sight. Both parties are slowly getting wise to each other, and I don't know who will take the initiative first. The heroine's early personality is a bit like a healthy female version of Wuhan. She has strong vampire skills, which can be regarded as a dual strength. The writing is also good. There are no funny jokes, but sometimes she can feel happy and exciting. Anyway, I am twisting in bed😊 The heroine turns into a ghost and cannibalizes people. She likes to eat children. Those with high moral qualities are advised to be cautious.

[Top post][top post][top post] To be honest, it's really shocking and delicious! [Learned] The heroine is like this, she can't bear any grievance, it's so refreshing [laughing] When I saw a comment saying that the heroine's baby looks like a little black cat with fried hair, I actually think it looks a bit like it, but only before it turns into a ghost. Later, he turned into a ghost, like a cold snake, and then he still had that feeling of red eyes [send heart] Is this really a big knock on CP? The only drawback is that it's a little short! The rhythm is very good

I really like the character of the heroine. The author has created the character very vividly. The life of low-class women in that era was mostly not easy. In fact, I had a good impression of Yoko at the beginning. After all, he was good to the heroine. Although more material help could not be helped, it gradually changed. After all, everyone changes. But the most uncomfortable thing is that the heroine has to bear the suffering that she has suffered in the past. Moreover, the heroine is extremely kind to this mother. Even if the heroine is sold by Yoko, she still works hard to come back. I really like Saya more and more. She just wants to live a good life and live with more dignity. Suddenly I think of the conversation between Xiaoqian and Saya. Xiaoqian feels that she is already living a good life, but Saya does feel that she is not enterprising (probably forgotten) and it is ironic for Xiaoqian to marry someone. Except for the heroine, everyone thinks this is a good thing, but in fact it is a very scary thing. Marrying a stranger you have never met. This may also have something to do with the awakening of the people at that time. Listen to the words of the people around you. I think it's natural to marry and have children. I'll come back and give you a long review when I'm done. It's not an exaggeration to say that this fanfic is the best one I've ever read among Demon Slayers [Blowing Kisses] The language is not organized well. [Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss] I like it. The character's character is three-dimensional, not one-dimensional. Bad people also have attractive points. As long as she is well-shaped, there will be many people who like her. Vicious Beauty [Smirk][Snicker][Smirk] The character has a gray side. I don't deny the evil she has done. At the same time, I am sure she has the beauty. Saya will not give up on herself because of others. This is what I like about her.

It's really amazing! Men see their menstruation, and women see their nerves. This is the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. She is so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. She is so handsome that tears flow from the corners of her mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. She is so handsome. It was God and it was my rose that illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so handsome that I shed tears. From now on, the world is no longer short of water!

Very well written, Tong Mo doesn't need her salvation, he only needs her to sink with him. I found that the author's protagonist's setting is very similar to my OC. He also uses an umbrella as a weapon, has black hair and red eyes, and the madness of the Silent One.

It's a very interesting novel. The tension between the protagonist and Tong Mo is very good (the only bond between the two parties). In addition, the protagonist really explains what it means to be a villain (super real). The writing style is also very good, but the updates are a bit lacking. Anyway, I hope the author will be more eloquent! [Sending my heart]

Super delicious! ! ! ! ! ! I especially like Saya's villainous character! Although the subject matter is not too novel, the teacher writes it very well. I just hope it doesn't end badly. The teacher will definitely be popular! ! ! ! Come on, teacher! ! ! ! [KISS][KISS][Please update][Add one to the bookshelf][Love]

Super super super super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! The villainous taste of the heroine's baby is so satisfying! ! That's how it should be! No one is as important as the baby himself [Shy] Evil people should be matched with evil bosses. You wrote so well (unfortunately, there are too few). I finished reading it in one go [Fear] Waiting for the second update (after peeing mark, I looked at my wife affectionately [Shy] and involuntarily gave birth to 188 babies for my wife, and then left without asking for anything in return)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't do it anymore. Why are you so beautiful? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]! ! ! The heroine's character is completely based on my xp [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] Let's keep writing this! ! It will definitely be a hit! ! [Shy][shy]

Shocking and delicious, the CP is so awesome! Saya has a distinct personality. She is the purest and most unstained ghost camp I have ever seen. I feel that she is a perfect match for Tong Mo. Tong Mo is so happy to read this article [crying]. The plot is also very smooth and very smooth to the end. I look forward to writing more and spreading more sweets~

Very beautiful, beautiful selfish Saya٩(◦`꒳´◦)۶ I hope you don't abuse Saya꒰⌗´͈ ᵕ `͈⌗꒱৩ The author's writing is very beautiful. I hope the author can finish this book smoothly while taking good care of his body. ଘ(੭ˊᵕˋ)੭* ੈ✩

Super, super, super beautiful [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

This evil girl is so happy [makes a face][makes a face][makes a face]

The writing is really great [crying][crying][crying] Promise me that I will continue to write more [crying][crying][crying]

It's very beautiful, I just like the bad character of the heroine*^o^*

The heroine is so cute [Adoration] [Adoration] The male protagonist is so cute [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration] [Admiration]

The heroine and Tong Mo are villains and it's so easy to get along with. I love my sister so much!

Super Invincible Thunderbolt looks great!

It's very interesting. The foreshadowing before turning into a ghost is also very well written.

Hahaha, it's easy to hold on 🤣 It's really rare to see articles like this that are inherently bad.

The heroine's character is so interesting, I really like it

Bad Saya, it feels like Tomie

I like... This tongmin is so delicious.