Laying Low in the Sect, Immortal Maidens, Stop Imagining Things About Me!

Don't say anything else, maybe the plot is old-fashioned, but the character of the male protagonist really has a bad temper towards me, and the setting is very normal, yes, normal, because the male protagonists in today's novels basically have no normal things. This male protagonist knows what he is doing, and he is not crazy. He is stunned, which is good.

First of all, I want to say sorry to everyone. I really failed to meet everyone's requirements. Many plots and designs were not ideal. What I want to write about is the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist. It feels like a college campus. Because I am a sociopath myself, apart from the handsomeness of the protagonist, I can understand his other feelings. It is because I am not good enough, so I want to get attention from others, but I am afraid of being noticed. This is an extremely contradictory thing... The novel should be reader-centered, but I have entered it myself. After writing it now, I seem to understand that everyone just needs to enjoy it reasonably! Rather than being a yes-man, it's my fault, because in reality, I am a yes-man. Around Chapter 60, I basically stopped reading book reviews, because everyone's criticisms really touched my heart. As a newbie, I understand, and I am willing to make corrections, but I am afraid that I will not be able to persevere. I still believe that sincerity is the last resort. So I like to interact with everyone and reply to you very seriously. I estimated that this book would be about 700,000 to 1 million words. The outline was revised again and again, and the coding speed was not fast. I sent out all the manuscripts the day before yesterday. Finally, I want to say that I am very grateful for everyone's encouragement to me. I will never forget the support of my good friends. I bow. I will work hard to get better. I will work hard to write the rest well. I will not give up. Sincerely thank you, thank you.

The heroine was so well described! I love watching them fight over each other! There is a slight flaw in the plot, but it does not affect the readability of the book. The characters are very detailed and each person has his or her own personality, not a superficial supporting role. At present, I hope the villain can appear as soon as possible, and then continue to describe the emotional line! Come on!

The writing is okay, and there are more psychological descriptions of the characters. The protagonist is a saint who doesn't even want to have a relationship, so it's a bit depressing to watch emotional dramas. But what's interesting is that Gu's character setting is a bit like the female channel Bai Yueguang Wen, who refuses to confess (dismissing the relationship), and goes abroad (the protagonist joins the movie theater to take up a role) If it is written according to the female channel, it would be time for an "agreed boyfriend". After all, the previous psychological description of Gu is either broken or frozen, Jie Jie Jie... Someone should warm her heart and then the protagonist will open the crematorium after returning (the way the female channel writes it) Jie Jie Jie, I feel like I have been marinated by the female channel...

There is a lot of inner description of the female character, it feels very real, and her love is also expressed. When the protagonist likes the heroine in the 70th chapter, he doesn't deny it anymore. It feels good not to delay. If you keep denying and escaping, you will have a bad impression of the protagonist, because others have expressed their love for the protagonist, and basically all eyes are on the protagonist. If you don't admit that you like the heroine, you will feel like Aquaman is trolling others. There is also the protagonist who goes out in the plot and encounters strong enemies every time. For example, although the first blood corpse he encountered won, he was beaten to death. The second mission with Yue Li was basically a pure escape. I basically skipped that part and didn't want to watch it. I think there can be more protagonists who kill enemies. I want to see the protagonist show off. Then the level is improved a bit too fast. I feel that it is difficult for the author to write because the protagonist is now in the middle stage of Yuanying. If Dabi directly reaches the peak of Yuanying, then some heroines will have to open a super attack for the heroine after the golden elixir. Otherwise, the heroine will collapse in a few times and it will be very difficult. I think the heroine and the hero can combine special skills such as Tsundere and Gu, and directly use swordsmanship to coordinate perfectly. How cool😏

The emotions in this book are very delicate, and it is indeed a bit uncomfortable in the later stages of the plot, but it can also be seen that it is for emotional foreshadowing. The characterization is still very immersive, and the author is still very good. I would like to give my opinion that it is better not to add that kind of foreshadowing. Especially after the relationship is established, the author's level is still awesome. I hope the results will get better and better.

Overall it looks great. Finished reading it in one sitting. The psychology of the male protagonist is very consistent with the character of social fear. The plot is also very good. The rating is just too low. Anyway, I like to watch it. 😘😘😘

The overbearing president tore open your fleece trousers, cotton trousers, woolen trousers, and long johns, and threw two pairs of cotton-covered snow boots on the ground. Then he tore open your cotton-padded jacket, sweater, sweater, autumn coat, and thermal underwear to expose your dry, dandruff-covered skin. The chapped skin on your heels hooked his silk sheets into tassels. Then he turned off the light and you both lay on the bed together. The electrostatic cell from your synthetic sweater illuminated his sharp face. He said helplessly and dotingly: Can the baby be changed quickly?

It's not bad, come on, the author (I like reading novels about cultivating immortals. This kind of subject seems to be more of a daily comedy type [laughing]) After all, in other novels about cultivating immortals, the protagonist has too many inner demons to have a baby [laughing]

It doesn't matter if one person says yes, but if many people say yes, it shows your ability. This book is good and remarkable. Most of them are not bad. Five stars should be regarded as encouragement to the author. I hope the writing will get better and better 💕