After traveling to another world, Lin Xuan became known to everyone as a martial arts loser. He was even regarded as an abandoned son by his family and was pushed out to bear the humiliation of the talented young master.
On the day of the assessment, the talented young master sneered in public: "Lin Xuan, are you a waste like you worthy of embarking on the martial arts?"
The next second, Lin Xuan raised his head, his eyes like eternal ice:
"Your technique is wrong."
He flicked out his finger, but no spiritual energy fluctuations were seen. The young master's body-protecting aura instantly shattered, and he vomited blood and flew backwards!
The sect elder stood up in shock: "Impossible! What kind of magic did you use?!"
Lin Xuan stood with his hands behind his back and his voice shocked the whole audience:
"Demon method? This is the perfection of the 'Body Tempering Realm', and the physical body can break all laws!"
"The inheritance you are so proud of is, in my eyes, full of loopholes and vulnerable to a single blow!"
"From today on, I will tell you what is the true martial arts!"
Why is this better?
1. The climax is at the beginning: it cuts directly to the most embarrassing scene, full of conflicts and extremely fast-paced.
2. The dialogue body has strong impact: using direct character dialogue and system prompts, it has a full sense of picture and a strong sense of substitution.
3. The cheat takes effect immediately: the system is no longer a background board, but is displayed immediately
