Kaitan Game: Stop Being Onii-Chan!

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Become a hundred, the writing style is excellent → The writing style is excellent, there are few descriptions of women's clothing and female bodies, and almost no descriptions of female abduction. The start is quite interesting, combining the arrival of strange copies + Western sequence settings. The second female lead is actually very well portrayed, but unfortunately the emotional line is too slow, which is outrageous. Instead of changing her character into a hundred, it would be better to write her into a single character, and just raise her as a daughter. There is nothing wrong with the heroine's idea. In a world full of dangers, love is indeed just a drag, and the author has created a very complete world view. According to this setting, the final form of the heroine's "Lies" sequence is the spirit of words. Once the words come true, I don't know how to write the follow-up. If the love line is advanced faster, the deer will sacrifice for the heroine, and the heroine determines that the fact of the deer's death is false through the ability of lies. Looking forward to it, this writing is worth it, but it's a pity that there are still few post descriptions ~ I hope there will be more posts, after all, the world framework is almost introduced!

666. I said before that I was going to the library to look for clues to see if I could find any clues that could lure my sister away. Good to get the pendant. Then he suddenly said that he got the pendant the day before yesterday. It felt like the author suddenly attacked the right brain with his left brain, which was a big departure. I don't have any brains, but you can't treat me like I have no brains either. Forget it, stop reading. It feels like the protagonist is a typical bully and afraid of the strong. The purchase price of a profiteer was 150, and the price was 500. The product was defective and he was eager to sell it. The protagonist, knowing this and being extremely short of money, successfully reduced the price from 500 to 450. For a very honest and responsible uncle selling porridge, the money for the first two bowls of porridge was not enough. Even if I was anxious for you to give me the change, I wouldn't say anything. All I would give you was change. In the end, the boss was kind-hearted and didn't ask for any money from them. I really can't stand it any longer, so I'll withdraw first.

Zeruo is so short, not enough to look at...

Gkd The plot has just started, my sister has just been brought out, and the yellow shit button is pulled out sad [cry]

It's good to watch, but it's just stopped. It's a pity that it's stopped indefinitely. I don't know if it's true or not, but it's probably true. The author has said so. If the traffic gets better later, I may continue to write.

So far I have come across a shitty yellow button, which looks great but is a bit lacking.

The author's writing is very good but a little lacking 😭

Not bad, no poisonous points found so far

It's a nice book, but it's a little short.

Nice looking meow, not enough to look at meow meow, come on meow meow

There are so few people, so the author won't fail to update, he needs to make up for this kind of thing [crying]

Still acceptable

Promise me to keep writing, okay?

It's beautiful, fast-paced, and this book doesn't even have a rating. It's just that the repetition rate of one or two words is a bit high, but it's not harmful.

The writing is okay, the protagonist has a brain, is this sequence borrowed from the Lord of Mysteries, it seems, wk

It's also very beautiful when I lose it.

I feel like I can get free gifts every day

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good