One-Punch Man: Ice Fruit from the Start, and Tornado Is Charmed

It's very good. I've read so many books and it's the most reasonable one to evaluate the combat power in various anime movies. Isn't the author an experienced Wangba user?

My review is that it is good-looking and quite funny. From the above, it seems that the author did not intend to overwhelm the competition. All I can say is that this is another potentially good book! Brother. This is really beautiful

Well, it's great to see a very good fan. 😊And the protagonist ate so quickly that she felt happy🥵

It's a very good One Punch Man fan novel, and there is no cheating to pressure the combat power. You have to eat what you need, which is more enjoyable. It also obtains the power of a template character. This one is handled well. There is no such thing as completely imitating the character's words and deeds to gain power. This book directly has the power of the template. If you want to be the next model It only needs to meet the requirements of the template. Compared with other types of novels, it doesn't look like squeezing out toothpaste, nor does it look like a split personality. In other novels, when you get a template, you will lazily clock out and get off work, and then you will finish the struggle. The characters will not look separated, and the protagonist will remain as shaky as ever [sneaky laugh]

The writing is very interesting. I haven't seen something so satisfying in a long time. The character setting is also very interesting. I feel like it really comes to life [code]

Very qualified fan fiction 1. The character is not OOC, and there will be no tone that is out of character. 2. There is no classic look down on him, and he is always vicious and sinister. 3. The settings in the plot are close to the original work, and so are the minor changes in some places. 4. There is nothing to say in terms of combat power. Go back and forth above the tornado, and hit casually under the tornado. 5. The writing of recruiting girls is very natural, and the emotional scenes come naturally, as if they were drawing people to life. 6. The weirdo appears, and the commentary by passers-by is very characteristic of the original work. 7. For unfamiliar characters, the author will provide pictures and explanations 8. The overall combat power is not broken, and the setting and explanation are not too weak. 9. Although there are some dirty words, they are very measured. 10. It has an original plot and is well integrated into the world view. As for future hopes 1. Don't use ellipsis in the driving plot. Even if the Luotuo Xiangzi section is not required, you can use poetry instead. 2. Keep your overall combat power intact and don't let yourself suffer at the same time. Either you can't have a strong character, or you can't let the protagonist face you early and then do a big handicap to impress yourself.

It's great. It's the best one-punch fanfic I've read in the past few months. There are no inexplicable girls, no random weirdos, and no lines that I don't understand. It's all pretty good, but it's a bit lacking.

Yes, I saw a good one-punch fan work, and I just want to give the author some advice. Try to write the template as slowly as possible. Once the template progresses too fast, the author may not be able to control the subsequent rhythm. Of course, if you are originally writing fast-paced, it doesn't matter, but I guess this book will be finished soon.

It's still very interesting to watch, but I hope the protagonist can be more proactive in relationships, either licking her or teasing her. From what I've read, I feel that the protagonist is completely passive. It's hard for me to imagine how such a character can have a harem. As the introduction says, he won't even let go of mosquitoes. Everything else is pretty good, whether it's the plot or everything else.

Very high quality fanfic! I think the quality in 🍅 can be said to be of the highest quality. The character descriptions can make people smile knowingly. The plot advances with ups and downs, but it does not climax continuously without giving people reaction or rest time. The rhythm is appropriate. The author has a certain writing ability, and I am very optimistic about you!