One Punch: Aokiji Template, Treat Tatsumaki to Eat Ice Cream

It's very good. I've read so many books and it's the most reasonable one to evaluate the combat power in various anime movies. Isn't the author an experienced Wangba user?

My review is that it is good-looking and quite funny. From the above, it seems that the author did not intend to overwhelm the competition. All I can say is that this is another potentially good book! Brother. This is really beautiful

Well, it's great to see a very good fan. 😊And the protagonist ate so quickly that she felt happy🥵

It's a very good One Punch Man fan novel, and there is no cheating to pressure the combat power. You have to eat what you need, which is more enjoyable. It also obtains the power of a template character. This one is handled well. There is no such thing as completely imitating the character's words and deeds to gain power. This book directly has the power of the template. If you want to be the next model It only needs to meet the requirements of the template. Compared with other types of novels, it doesn't look like squeezing out toothpaste, nor does it look like a split personality. In other novels, when you get a template, you will lazily clock out and get off work, and then you will finish the struggle. The characters will not look separated, and the protagonist will remain as shaky as ever [sneaky laugh]

The writing is very interesting. I haven't seen something so satisfying in a long time. The character setting is also very interesting. I feel like it really comes to life [code]

Very qualified fan fiction 1. The character is not OOC, and there will be no tone that is out of character. 2. There is no classic look down on him, and he is always vicious and sinister. 3. The settings in the plot are close to the original work, and so are the minor changes in some places. 4. There is nothing to say in terms of combat power. Go back and forth above the tornado, and hit casually under the tornado. 5. The writing of recruiting girls is very natural, and the emotional scenes come naturally, as if they were drawing people to life. 6. The weirdo appears, and the commentary by passers-by is very characteristic of the original work. 7. For unfamiliar characters, the author will provide pictures and explanations 8. The overall combat power is not broken, and the setting and explanation are not too weak. 9. Although there are some dirty words, they are very measured. 10. It has an original plot and is well integrated into the world view. As for future hopes 1. Don't use ellipsis in the driving plot. Even if the Luotuo Xiangzi section is not required, you can use poetry instead. 2. Keep your overall combat power intact and don't let yourself suffer at the same time. Either you can't have a strong character, or you can't let the protagonist face you early and then do a big handicap to impress yourself.

It's great. It's the best one-punch fanfic I've read in the past few months. There are no inexplicable girls, no random weirdos, and no lines that I don't understand. It's all pretty good, but it's a bit lacking.

Yes, I saw a good one-punch fan work, and I just want to give the author some advice. Try to write the template as slowly as possible. Once the template progresses too fast, the author may not be able to control the subsequent rhythm. Of course, if you are originally writing fast-paced, it doesn't matter, but I guess this book will be finished soon.

It's still very interesting to watch, but I hope the protagonist can be more proactive in relationships, either licking her or teasing her. From what I've read, I feel that the protagonist is completely passive. It's hard for me to imagine how such a character can have a harem. As the introduction says, he won't even let go of mosquitoes. Everything else is pretty good, whether it's the plot or everything else.

Very high quality fanfic! I think the quality in 🍅 can be said to be of the highest quality. The character descriptions can make people smile knowingly. The plot advances with ups and downs, but it does not climax continuously without giving people reaction or rest time. The rhythm is appropriate. The author has a certain writing ability, and I am very optimistic about you!

I have read Chapter 54 so far, Thunder Gossip! It's so well written. The protagonist's template plug-in is well integrated with pirate elements. The first Aokiji ability and the second Kaido ability have just been obtained. The original character of One Punch also fits his personality, and it completely feels like a derivative plot of the original character. There is nothing wrong with the plot of the novel. The disadvantage is that I worry that if I write too fast and my combat power increases too quickly, I won't be able to write anymore, so I won't have to read it. It's not yet seven points, which is too little. If it doesn't collapse in the future, nine points won't be a problem. The writing style and so on, it doesn't feel like a Tomato book. It was discovered too early and there were too few updates.

The book is a good book [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]. Although the templates are stacked and there are tasks and so on, it basically does not overwhelm the male protagonist's combat power. He is invincible and recommended all the way. It is a very interesting and enjoyable book. However, the male protagonist is very strange in the way he treats the female protagonist. This book is definitely excellent in terms of astringency, but the male protagonist's personality It seems like there is no emotion at all, just for Sese, and Fubuki and Tatsumaki have never confessed their relationship with the male protagonist to each other. If it was for Sese, it would be enough to do dozens of chapters, but after that, it is so touching that it is basically full, but it is still pulling, so it is not interesting.

It is a rare One Punch Pirates fanfic. It is on a dessert level. Compared to most novels written by Yang Persimmon, the combat characterization is better. The emotional line is a bit missing, but it does contain a lot. You can read it and it's an invincible and refreshing novel. You won't be able to say a word after reading it [Sneaky laugh] [OK]

The overall writing is quite good, although it feels a bit weird to have to eat a tornado all of a sudden, but I still give it five stars. I hope it can be completed and don't stop updating suddenly. I have read many books before that suddenly stop updating or update every once in a while [laughs]

Ranking among the top two among One Punch fans, the writing is really good. Worth recommending. The details written by the author are very good, the writing is profound, and there are details of education and training. Please read and cherish it. The author is also great, so don't stop updating.

Congratulations to the protagonist for getting another complete pirate template Chapter 52, the author said it yourself, 'Their templates are integrated into Qiao Yi's body. ' It's okay so far, don't let the protagonist suffer Five-star praise, please go to the author

I have caught up with the progress, and I have to say that it is a very outstanding existence among the one-punch fanfics. Whether it is a partial restoration of the original style or a depiction of combat power, it is very good. The fishing monster chapter is considered to be of a very high level. The discussion in the latest chapters is also a very exciting battle session. The author needs to work hard.

Quick update, can't sleep at night m9( ｀д´ )!!!! The writing style is mature, not like a new author, but like the reincarnation of an old author. So far, the characters have no OOC, the protagonist has a three-dimensional image, and there is no left-brain conflict. So far, I don't know whether the heroine is multiple or single, but it doesn't matter, as long as the emotional line is clear and don't be irritating from the beginning. The only drawback is that there are too few. Author, are you reading? ! Get up and code! ! How can you sleep at your age? ! [Anger]

I think this book is quite good. First of all, it is different from many books. It does not follow the plot flow. He started writing it when the Heroes Association was just established. It is a brand-new story. Secondly, the author's writing is also good. There is nothing poisonous. The original plot is also quite interesting. It is much better than most of the same fans.

The character of the protagonist is also very suitable. [Like] The description of the character is very good, and the plot of getting along with Tatsumaki is also well drawn. At present, this novel has great potential. [Blow kiss] Some nonsensical parts have the feeling of the original. This is the level that a fan should have. I hope it can be maintained (but please don't show the Starry Sky Wolf, that is too ridiculous)

Yes, the character creation is pretty good at the moment. The original character image will not be out of place. The set template only has One Piece characters, which is also good. The appearance of characters like Dragon Ball will not lead to the collapse of the combat power. I am looking forward to the future development.

🌟This novel really made my eyes shine! 📖You get the ability of the general Qing Pheasant at the beginning, the setting is novel and exciting 🔥The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and the characters are three-dimensional and layered 💬Every turning point is addictive and the sense of substitution is super strong 🎯The reading experience is smooth and natural, you can't stop at all ⚡The overall rhythm is just right, it can be called a recent favorite

Liu Beiwen is still rubbing his hands, one word is cool, he is almost invincible at this stage, after all, everyone who reads the fandom should know that there is no absolute invincibility

The writing is really good, witty and interesting, and the overall flow is relaxed. I finished reading it before I knew it. Later, after Kaido came out, I didn't like it very much because his character was too low. I don't know if you have watched anime. Even the most basic falling meteorite is very stressful. As a result, the overlord color is scattered, and the black and red lightning should have resounded through a big city. The deterrence was overtaken by the author's words. Whether it's the original One Punch or the original One Piece, the character's ability image is simplified, and I don't like it very much.

The rhythm of the writing is relaxed and relaxed, the dialogue between the characters is chewy but not empty, the characterization is appropriate and vivid but not exaggerated, and the combat power can also generally maintain the overall logical flow. Overall, the reading experience is very comfortable, not bad.

It is a fanfic with great potential. The characters are very unique, the interactions between the characters are humorous, the plot development is logical, the writing is skillful and there is no AI, the interaction between the protagonist and the tornado is very interesting, and there are no poisonous points so far.

I saw Chapter 63 on December 26th. It's really good. The protagonist is not a prisoner (the tornado has been eaten), but he doesn't just accept women when he sees them. He has the arrogance of a time traveler but not arrogant. I haven't seen the poisonous points, especially the behavior and attitude towards the hungry wolf. I think it is very good, and I can fall into the trap. The author has two books (this one is a one-punch world cheat with a pirate template, and the other is a one-punch world cheat with a Saitama enhancement template). I am confused about which one to choose. As a reader, I am curious about the pirate template. No, after the protagonist is semi-invincible (except for Saitama, Apollo and the God of Earth, etc.), There is Liu Beiwen. Either the protagonist is interfering in the field or someone is targeting the protagonist Ou Yanjun, inserting several plots into the pornographic paragraphs

When I first looked at the title, I thought it was another endless novel, but after reading it, I found that the writing is pretty good, the writing is not bad, it is very smooth, and the handling of multiple female protagonists is also good. There is no female protagonist who is determined to share the male protagonist's highlights. The male protagonist's semi-passive attitude is very suitable. The male protagonist time travels earlier, and I should still have a lot of time to write the invincible novel.

I saw the author said that some colleagues gave negative reviews, and I couldn't bear it. This book is like gold in the One Punch fandom. Although it is a consistent one-punch invincible article, it is more focused on the plot of One Punch itself than other junk fans who write about going to other worlds after the collapse. Both the character creation and the plot design are very coherent and have the original flavor of One Punch itself. Of course it's cool, but it's really cool. It's a rare good book among the best.

It's so well written that it made my app jump [laughing evilly]