My name is Zenyuan Naoto. Before I traveled to this world, I just wanted to go out and buy some food. However, I was invited by a kind-hearted Universiade driver to attend an underwater party hosted by Qu Yuan.
However, he accidentally traveled to a world where magic returns and became the son of Chanyuan Naohito, Zenyuan Naoto, and started his own journey of magic.
Reader comments
So far, it's pretty good. The only drawback is that the article looks more like the text in a comic than a novel. There are a lot of things that need to be remembered while reading, which makes me a little tired.
I feel okay so far [thinking]
Overall it's okay, but one question is whether the writing can be changed. Sometimes I don't know who said the sentence and I have to figure it out.
Why was Hui still violently beaten by the second-level curse spirit, and the protagonist couldn't get over it. [Laughing and crying]
So far, it's pretty good. The only drawback is that the article looks more like the text in a comic than a novel. There are a lot of things that need to be remembered while reading, which makes me a little tired.
I feel okay so far [thinking]
Overall it's okay, but one question is whether the writing can be changed. Sometimes I don't know who said the sentence and I have to figure it out.
Why was Hui still violently beaten by the second-level curse spirit, and the protagonist couldn't get over it. [Laughing and crying]
Personally, I feel pretty good, come on!