HP: How to Raise a Loyal Dog

The two of them are very sweet. No clues were found. There's nothing OOC about the characters, which is pretty good. The writing is very good. The introduction of childhood sweethearts and men chasing women is totally my cup of tea. I hope it won't be too depressing when fighting Voldemort later on. The writing is very good. There is a bit of Zhan Li in it, but the proportion is okay. After all, I am not interested. If you like Severus, don't read this book. I think this book is a bit unfriendly to Severus. The male and female protagonists are very sweet. (I can't even recognize this book after changing the cover hahh)

I read two HP books by the author in a row in the past two days. I first read George's book. I thought that although it was the first book, the writing style should not be too different, so I started reading this one. In addition, I was shocked. This book dealt with all the subtle points that I usually read in other fans very well. The first one is about Peter. Peter is never told about Lemmy's furry problems in this book and is left out early on. There is also the matter of attitude towards Snape, for me personally. Snape's attitude toward Muggle-born classmates at school, except for Lily, was that he had nothing to do with himself and would attack them. Nowadays, when many fans write about Snape, they always glorify him, and there are also some who stand on Snape's side. But this book does not have it. Thea has always been neutral. She is not familiar with Snape, but she is concerned about Sirius, James and Snape's struggle. In fact, Thea always maintained that he was at fault and that he could be punished, but it could not be an excessive punishment. This was a very fair attitude. Also when dealing with whether Lily and Snape will be friends in the end, the author very kindly made Snape realize the problems between him and Lily, which can be said to have given Snape a good ending. And Thea, in fact, I have always hated the protagonist who knows the future or who travels through the book to tell his lover all his secrets. However, the author did not do this, including the previous book, which just made everyone think that the heroine is a walking elixir, and the heroine did not tell George that she traveled through the book. In this book, the author lets Sirius know everything, instead of letting the protagonist and no one except Sirius know about Thea's tragic experience, so that everyone can live a happy life in this world without any other worries. Also when dealing with the Black family, the author did not portray Sirius as an image of someone who was extremely fed up with his family, especially his mother, through some things. Sirius would maintain the relationship with his brother very well, and he would also know that his mother loved him, and did not completely break up with Wolgab in the end. Through these two articles, the author may have similar views to me on many controversial issues, which makes me happy. I haven't seen such a beautiful HP fanfic for a long time. It's a pity that it has no rating yet. I hope more people can read these two articles.

If you like the gentle little sunshine girl, come here! It is also a rare HP fan article [Blowing Kiss]. I won't go into details about the author's great writing style. You will know it just by reading the article. The whole article is very warm and bright, and the writing style is comfortable. If you like sweetness, you will be blessed! The male protagonist is Sirius, and he and the female protagonist's sister Bao are childhood sweethearts. For Sirius, Thea was his beam of light in Grimmauld Place. Every encounter was a redemption and an unconscious heartbeat [shy] In front of Thea, he would restrain his edge and be willing to lower his head and become Thea's loyal "evil dog"! Our heroine Thea is a cute badger. She has her own story, her own close friends, and her own style of dealing with people. Every time you come into contact with Thea, you will fall in love with her even more! Great exaggeration here again! The main text is finished. Spread flowers and recommend it! Please work hard to update the extra chapter [please update]

It's a particularly good-looking novel about family members. I feel that some of the supplementary settings of the plot are also very interesting. It is a little different from most self-made heroines who save the world. The characters are not very OOC. It gives people a very comfortable feeling. I hope the author will not abandon the trap [Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

I've basically finished watching it. The heroine is an indigenous character and doesn't have a lot of cheats. The interaction with Sirius is also very sweet and the writing is smooth. It's one of the better novels written in the pro era.

I'm not a fan of the original work, so I don't know if there is any character plot, but overall there are no surprises. It's a very warm little story. It's just that the Internet slang that sometimes appears and our oral habits or colloquialisms make people a little bit embarrassed. Also, when describing a person's expression, the "smile" feels too simple and repetitive. It would be better if the description of the character's mood can be improved a little bit.

It looks great. I feel like the only bug is that the British undergraduate program lasts for three years. Hehe. In fact, everyone is working hard on each other, but the article only describes a very thin stream of water that defeated Tom like an ordinary wizard~

It's really good-looking, especially to my taste, and has a happy ending. I think the characters are not OOC at all, and I may have my own personal opinion, but for me it's really good-lookingˊᵒ̴̶̷̤ꇴᵒ̴̶̷̤ˋ Please give me more food, I've seen your HP, and it all suits my taste (ᐢ ⸝⸝ᴖ ·̫ ᴖ⸝⸝ᐢ)

It's super good-looking, the plot is smooth and not laggy, and the characters are completely non-ooc. Accidentally, I couldn't hold back and tied it directly. Please update the author quickly and don't give up.

Sweet young couple What I like most is that the author did not transfer neutral words. Although there was this problem at the beginning, it was immediately changed after it was pointed out. Great praise! ! ! Sirius's character really fits the original work! !

It's good-looking, sweet, and the plot is well rounded. It's not easy, but Thea has paid a lot to achieve the perfection of this life.

Beautiful, very attractive to me [admiration]

This book is so beautiful

Great, well written

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Author: Did you know that two of your books are written by me, Brother Mengjiao? I really love you to death.

I just realized that I've read the author's second HP book, it's so good [top post]

Very nice! I particularly like the relationship between childhood sweethearts Thea and Sirius! The author also writes very delicately! The direction of the entire world has also changed very reasonably.

It's beautiful. It's beyond imagination. The writing is also very reasonable. The gold finger is not too wide open, but it is very comfortable to look at.

It's so beautiful. It's a treasure book.

So perfect... So warm... Such a beautiful story...

The writing style is very good and sweet. The whole story has no surprises and is very beautiful. There are no skipped chapters in the whole process. There are so many extras. Can there be more?

It's very well written, a very heartwarming story, everyone is cute つ♡⊂

It's very interesting, the plot logic is quite rigorous, and the emotional line is very comfortable. I like my childhood sweetheart the most (>^ω^<)

I was attracted to read this book after reading the book about George. Both books are really great. I hope you can add a few more chapters about their children in the back of this one. I really want to read it [Sending my heart]