Starting from the Succubus, Traveling Across the Magical Continent

I beg you, author, I have only read the first part, but there are too many targets for men. I can barely read the face-stomping one, but the third prince and the target of the Four Heavenly Kings that I am looking at now. I really hope that there will be women in the back and future targets, otherwise I really can't stand it anymore. The subject matter is obviously very interesting [crying][crying][crying] It is obviously a hundred [crying][crying][crying][crying] The author listened to the advice and actively communicated with us about this. I hope this book will get better and better [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Like]

The writing is good, please support the author [please give me more updates]. However, I feel that for many readers, this system where you will die if you do not complete the task is indeed a poisonous point. Then some plots feel rather stiff, and the logic and motivations of the heroine feel unreasonable [face covering] (referring to rescuing the female knight, although using the system to force the mission and the subsequent plot supplements are barely reasonable). In addition, the author really replies/likes every paragraph of the review [love]. I feel that he is very serious and hardworking. After all, free books plus becoming a hundred are relatively unpopular, so I can't ask for too much. Please support me with five stars [heartfelt]

Save some chapters first and then read them later. It's still a very non-poignant succubus novel, but the emotions are a bit disconnected and abrupt, with a sense of deliberateness. It was as if many memory fragments were forcibly spliced ​​together. It can be seen that the author has worked very hard. I completely understand the part about the female knight. It is the result of the lack of bridge between the plot line and the emotional line. In the end, rationality was ignored for the sake of plot development. This is normal and I understand. I think that if you want to remove this poisonous point, you need to make major changes, or remove the so-called sense of human identity, and let the system give you a mandatory mission. It does not need to be to rescue the female knight, as long as it allows the protagonist and the female knight to interact. Anyway, as long as the protagonist and the female knight have an intersection, it will be considered a pirate ship. Even if there is no mission, the protagonist will be tied to the female knight. How can the Demon King tolerate a succubus who sneaks into the prison? You don't go to the Three Treasures Palace for nothing. How can you, a succubus, have anything to do with the female knight who attacked the Demon King's Castle? I don't believe it if I say there's something fishy about it. If you fall into the Yellow River, you won't be able to clean it up. When the time comes, saving the female knight will be the only optimal solution. It has changed from a multiple-choice question to a required question. As for the relationship between the protagonist and the female knight, there is no need for any sense of human identity to begin. After all, the process of the protagonist rescuing the female knight is the development of emotion. From a stranger who just wants to complete the task to an acquaintance who has experienced a life and death crisis, this is inevitable. It's not too simple to just add a little plot later and then connect the emotional line to the part where the female knight escapes from the Demon King's Castle, and then the plot can be connected. In short, it is guided by the system to create conflicts between the protagonist and the female knight, so that there is a reasonable reason why the protagonist has to take the initiative to save the female knight. This is just because I personally can't sleep at night. I know there must be flaws, but I think it looks more comfortable this way. My personal opinion is for reference only. If there is any offense, please forgive me, all handsome guys and beauties. I sincerely hope that this book that can accompany me to sleep every night can be liked by more people, [blowing kiss] but I really don't want to see my favorite works criticized by others [whispering], I hope the author can work hard＾0＾~Update quickly, so that I can see the fox girl, dragon girl, and cat lady that I miss so much as soon as possible [licking screen][licking screen][licking screen][blowing kiss]

I rarely comment, but I want to support a good book. How can I leave out comments? This book is well written. Every detail is in place. I feel that the author is very attentive. I must support it. The characters are also very delicate. Each character has his own style. Why is it not popular? I don't accept it. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

The author's writing style is very good, and the pace of the article is also very smooth. He obviously has a complete story outline, so there will be no confusing or unreasonable plot. The pace of the article is relatively slow. I saw the 80th chapter when the element of becoming a hundred appeared... Although the author's introduction has been written, the early stage clearly feels like a green tea novel (mainly because the system tasks always have to tease the male partner?). I wonder if there will be a similar plot in the future. I feel a little strange in the changing of the hundred? ... But overall it is indeed a high-quality transformation article

I am very open to suggestions on homework and will respond to requests. Thank you for your support.

Okay, this novel. I probably read it four or five times at first, but I didn't get into it. I probably stopped looking at a few or a dozen pictures. Later, I gradually got used to it, and I felt that it looked better later on. The protagonist is getting stronger and stronger. It feels so good to not have to be bullied anymore. I hope the protagonist becomes stronger and stronger. (¯▽¯)ゞ[Laughs]

Very good. If the author knows his mistakes, he can just correct them.

I'm so stupid, I finished it in one day. It's so sweet and beautiful. Why is no one watching it? [Almost crying]

Give up your brain, double your happiness, it's still pretty cool [like]. The author is very obedient and will listen to suggestions. Some of the storylines are also good [laughter].

The princess and the king really don't accept it?

We don't know what it looked like before the change, but it looks pretty good after the change ദ്ദി˶>ω<)✧

I'm asking why you don't just kill a few in max status. I'm jumping to watch.

I can feel the author's strength and driving skills, but it's a bit difficult to review later.

Well written, good luck to the author! But some plots are very blunt (escaping from the Demon King's Castle and the knight's feelings), but the current plot is pretty good, I hope the author can keep it up 😚

Luna should accept it too [Adoration] The white paper girl elf is the cutest [Blowing kiss]