Done! My Pokémon Are All in Conspicuous Bags!

The content is generally very interesting and fun. The only flaw is that Sirona's character is a bit broken. Sister Baicai obviously has difficulty choosing, while Lu Chi is exclusive to the officially designated strongest champion. All in all, it's a very nice book. I hope the author will keep up the good work and do his homework well so as not to ruin the character [Like]

Although overall it is a refreshing novel, the writing style is pretty good. The plot is not too mentally retarded. Except for the harem (that's you, Sirona) who are a bit hasty in showing affection for the protagonist, everything else is within the acceptable range. Another point that is a little bit poisonous is that the current economic system looks like a mess. I hope that the overall economic plan can be planned in the future, and there will be no abstract plot where the protagonist obviously has a cheat to get rich overnight but always lives in poverty. Also, although I have nothing against harems, it's okay if you don't take the girls in the world of Pokémon. If you take them, it's easy to write OOC and get scolded. After all, the portrayal of these supporting characters in the original plot is mainly focused on the side descriptions of some major events. The more detailed characters are all made up by everyone's own imagination. It's easy to be chased and scolded by readers because they don't conform to the readers' own imagination. Instead, I am more optimistic about the follow-up development of original characters like the profiteer Xiaolan. Originality means that the author has complete creative freedom.

Ah~3.5 Stars A daily article about urban beasts wearing Pokémon skins that you can read Although all the settings and tactics are Pokémon, it is completely incapable of bringing in the fun of just watching Pokémon. It pulled the banner to attract readers, but at first glance, it was a high imitation. This is also the reason why this book has a low rating. If this banner was not raised based on the plot direction and writing style, it should have a rating of 7.2-7.5. Of course, it may not be accurate since I have only read more than 30 chapters, but so far my evaluation is fair and too bland. Chapter 30 happens to be the screening range for readers. This review is dedicated to readers who want to read the review before reading the book.

Very nice, especially the Red Flame Roaring Tiger and Gardevoir. But it would be nice if Lucario could be modified. He always has a special middle-class look. If it doesn't work, add one later, and he can really cultivate aura or something like that.

First of all, I have to say that this book is well written. Although some characters are not three-dimensional enough and the shining points of small characters are not written, the author describes the bond between the trainer and the elf very well. As for the emotional line between the protagonist and the heroine, there are many small holes that have not been filled in, but the process after meeting the protagonist is quite appropriate and more gradual. Come on, the specific pitfalls depend on how the author fills them in later. If you fill them in well, the grade of the work will rise. If you don't fill them in or fill them in poorly, it will be a big poisonous point. The logical relationship of the story is relatively clear, but some small details have not been handled well. However, although Pokémon is mainly about the bond between people and Pokémon, the relationship between Pokémon Combat, as well as the training between trainers and Pokémon, is also an indispensable link. It is one of the shining points of the Pokémon series IP. The author focuses too much on the storyline or daily life. This ratio needs to be controlled well, and some cool points should be added appropriately, or some knives should be added to the small characters or supporting characters. Of course, there is no denying the contrition here. The author's understanding of PVP. As for some people who say that there is nothing wrong with writing about daily Pokémon, I don't deny it, but there is a hole to be filled here. Why should the protagonist choose the training system instead of the breeding system? Many branch lines are not handled well. Let's see how to fill them in later. I think this link conflicts with the dream that the protagonist said, so let's leave it like that. (˵¯͒¯͒˵) @ ( ⩌ - ⩌ )

It's good-looking, nothing bitter and grudge-y, it's mainly entertaining and funny. It's just too little, not enough to see

The narrative is humorous, the protagonist is an up master of battle routines, and the Pokémon web is a unique and interesting article. It blends real school life with the Pokémon world, and there is nothing out of the ordinary. Is there really anyone living in a world without Pokémon? [What][What][What]

It looks great! I don't know how to comment because I am a relatively objective and one-sided person. From my own point of view, it looks good. The only thing that confuses me is that Lucario can learn to beat with a bone club. Does this skill count as killing people with a sword?

Did the author forget that Giratina was banned in the PWC World Championship? How could Sirona still use Giratina?

I saw an AI comic about running on your own on Little Black Box

In fact, just a few elves are enough, there is no need to write more heroines

The fire-breathing dog in Chapter 452, and how many chapters is that? It's the chapter about giving away the doll. The names are all wrong, and deducting this star is because it is wrong and it has not been corrected. I started reading novels in the 5th grade of elementary school and now I am 18 years old. This book is still quite good.

Open this book and what you will see is - "Sword Fairy", "Cooking Tiger King", "Super Queen Yandere" and "White Devil". It can be said that it is very life-like.

Yes, yes, this novel is very good. I just hope that the author will never stop updating it twice a day. Please, Vadasi, I can't live without this novel (⋟⋞)

Not top notch, but good enough. It has shortcomings, but it's not bad either. (At least it's okay in tomatoes)

Non-toxic (I think), good-looking

I think I saw this comic on Little Red Book

The author is really a genius

The knife pulled the buttocks and opened the eyes

I have to say, there are not enough problem children, how about another girl with a princess disease?

Come on, author, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

This novel is so interesting, it made me laugh so hard!

It looks okay, but it always smells like AI [face covering]

It's a good, very enjoyable Pokémon novel, a five-star recommendation. [Laughs][laughs]

Beautiful, love watching. Drive the car faster.

Can anyone tell me who my heroine is so far? Has anyone taken longer to read than me? I have replayed the previous plot several times. [Sinister smile]

It looks like Teacher Lu meant it.

Good

Come on! Keep writing, author, I believe in you

I remember it so much when I saw this [face covering]