Practice: Start from the Valley of Ten Thousand Beasts

I saw it was updated, and overall it's okay. It's above average. It's not particularly stunning, but it's not ugly either. It basically doesn't hit any bad spots. It's quite satisfactory. It's still fun to watch while passing the time. The choice of spiritual pets is also pretty good. Centipede plus iron fire ant queen. Now I'm about to choose the third one. I'm still looking forward to it. But the master of the protagonist feels a little uncomfortable to the readers, and it is not very refreshing. The protagonist becomes a registered disciple. To be honest, I have not seen many benefits. I feel that the amount given to the protagonist is not proportional to what the protagonist pays. It is equivalent to a task tool person. Every time he comes to find the protagonist, he will give the protagonist a task, which is a bit I'm tired of always looking for things for the protagonist to do, so I can't develop in peace and contentment. Although I know that this is the need of the plot and needs to lead to the following, but it is a bit stiff. I still hope that the protagonist can go out and wander around by himself. The last mission of the zombie demon was really boring in the middle. I jumped several times. This is a bad sign.

It looks okay, there are no poisonous points, it is not an ordinary trash start, and there is no abstract plot of family discrimination. This may be the reason why I joined the sect when I first came to the family. I hope the author can write better. I caught up with the latest chapter, but I didn't see any bad points. You can read it. It would be better if there were more updates.

It's okay. I rarely give five-star reviews. It's okay. Maybe it's because I read quickly, so I ignore some of the possible poisonous points. But I think it's nothing. But there are still some, such as you and that weapon spirit. To be honest, it's best not to let this kind of thing Anyone knows, but it may be that the protagonist is too confident in his cheating, so he can get over it. Some people may not be interested in the plot of the girl from the Long family, but for me, I watched it quickly, and these poisonous points can be ignored. They are not big poisonous points. To be honest, it's not impossible for you to invent a talisman, but you can't be so casual. If the protagonist succeeds just by casually following the plan he saw in the novel, then do you think that everyone in this world is a fool? You can invent a talisman, but at least there must be some research process. What should I say when the author writes a novel? There are a lot of narrations and a lot of explanations that have nothing to do with the main text of the novel. It's not that you can't write it, but it's a bit too much. And then why do you, the vortex, say that you have never come back? Let's not talk about the whale and the protagonist's ancestors. I feel that it is not particularly dangerous to go in, and it is not particularly difficult to come back. If it is difficult, forget it, so it's not right. I feel that this is especially important for those crystals, which is similar to ascension. Another point is that the higher the realm, the less fighting. How can I explain the death of the octopus? But to be honest, the serious injuries you described are not serious enough in my opinion. At least in my mind, it can still crush a monk in the liquid condensation realm. So if you can avoid fighting with people in a higher realm, it is better to avoid it. Changing the map is too rigid, and if you want to change the map so quickly, you have to crystallize it first and then change it, right? Because it is a very important and refreshing point to show the saint in front of others, but as soon as I mentioned the information about this small world, you immediately changed the map. It is probably the one without an outline, and you kept saying that the original world was not good, which made your impression of the original world no longer good. It shouldn't be like this, it's boring to change.

This book is very good, the language is humorous, and the writing is smooth. I personally think it is very good for this kind of beast-controlling novel. The pace is moderate and just right. There is no mentally retarded plot. I feel there is a lot of room for development [Like]

It's great to watch, the plot is advanced in an orderly manner and the pace is orderly. Although it is inevitable that there will be some classic plots, they are not very long. But so far, the overall beast-controlling component is actually not particularly large. I hope there will be more in the future. There are basically no emotional lines, and there are very few pretentious slaps. Those who want to watch these plots can come here for a change [laughing]

Wow, ram, ram, great, come and read it [like] [like] [like] This is the best novel I have read in the past three months. It combines traditional cultivation of immortals with beast control, it is great [Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's good-looking, gradually getting better, and for me there is almost no poisonous point (I originally thought that the male protagonist would learn dual cultivation very late, and it was earlier than I thought, but the author laid the groundwork very well, and his handling of the subsequent steps was not sloppy)

Very good, Golden Finger is similar to card cultivation. The card's passive analysis of all things is very similar to your Yin-Yang Mirror. There are also character cards, skill cards, prop cards, etc., Which are much stronger than yours. But your plot is good and the pace is relaxed and relaxed. I hope you can keep it that way.

It is a very classic classical article about cultivating immortality. I don't say it can surpass the biography of ordinary people cultivating immortality, but it is almost the same. I will write more in the future.

Overall it's good, but the writing is still a bit immature. In terms of plot, it's okay. From the current point of view, there's no need to worry too much about the collapse of combat power. The writing in this aspect is quite good and quite stable.

It's quite good-looking, but I don't really like the protagonist's name, but it's actually a bit refreshing. I still like the content so far. I just don't know how the author will write about returning to the previous world. I feel that there will be less plot when going back because the upper limit there is lower, which will make the feeling of returning home in glory less. But it's probably still early, so you can still look forward to what happens later.

The writing is okay and the plot is rigorous, but it lacks a little excitement. I hope the author can write an ups and downs copy next.

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It's worth reading. The author has written books before and the quality is guaranteed.

The author's writing is clear, his ideas are clear, and he writes well. There is no female protagonist, but she is most likely a eunuch. She has a lot of pet animals and handles her family and sect very well. Keep up the good work!

There are no restrictions on the use of yin-yang mirrors Any exercise is so easy It incorporates many legends of mortals cultivating immortality Chapter 170 is only the second realm, and the advancement is a bit slow.

I won't say anything else. Author, I like the rhythm of your story very much. I'll give you a reward.

I support it. Although there are many places that are a bit inconsistent, the plot writing is okay.

In the latest chapters, there is no loot for beating the Yunmeng Saint? If you win, you gain nothing; if you lose, you have to return the crystal treasure.

153, 154 Are extremely poisonous, and then the map suddenly changed for more than 200 maps. After seeing the crystal, I no longer had the desire to look further. In fact, from being accidentally teleported to this poisonous world, there is a tendency towards this.

It's really possible to write

"The compound surname is Tantai, with the single character Gui." Wouldn't this be embarrassing for the writer? Especially since it has happened twice while listening to books, and no one would emphasize compound surnames in daily life.

No killing, no profligateness, no shame. It's rare for normal people to practice cultivation

I have now caught up to the latest chapter 388. In fact, there is a little bit of poison at the beginning, which makes me feel like I don't want to read anymore, but it is just a little bit of poison. Later, I saw that the whole chapter is very good, and it can be regarded as a ration. Please give me more updates.

Very good. The settings are good, but the upper limit is still very high.

Personally, I think it's very good. I hate those articles that completely lose their humanity. This one is different, it's great [blowing kiss]

The content is substantial and the structure is clear, not bad.

Very good, the plot is smooth, there are no big poisons, only a few small poisons here and there, not very violent, but it can be considered decisive in killing.

So far, this is the best immortality novel I have ever read on Tomato.

Yes, the plot is relatively not poisonous. It's a cool article. It's pretty good among Xiaobai's novels, in my opinion