Reborn Tongmo Rejects the Script of His Wife and Children Breaking Up

God... I dare say this is the ceiling for Tong Qin fandom... The writing is solid but not dry, vivid and vivid, and most importantly... It is not aggrieved. On the premise of restoring the character of the character as much as possible, there is no arrangement of some people who are forced to make choices because of their kindness. This is boring to watch. I have read two other Tongqin fanfics before, and most of them have this kind of plot. After reading it, my affection for Kotonoha dropped all the way to the bottom. I won't go into details. Anyway, this book made me feel the charm of Kotonoha again, and I couldn't help but write down the mysterious text: Tongqin 99...

I still like this one, and I've really become obsessed with fan fiction recently. It's really delicious, five ants, five ants, five ants

I like this book very much. To be honest, I'm looking forward to the follow-up development. Well, the old man is now in a semi-enlightened state. Pseudo-humans imitate humans. But I'm also curious about the circumstances under which Kotonoha discovered each other. Anyway, this is one of the few updates I've been following. Dear teacher, your writing is very, very good. Don't be unconfident. I have read this score, although I am not sure. Will giving full stars have any impact on the books? But I still want to give you full marks. Anyway, some people said it might not be good to give full marks all the time, and some said it was okay, so I just gave it this way for the first time. What you write is very, very good, my dear, you are very, very good, my dear, keep writing!

I really look forward to the follow-up development. Although it seems that the essence of Momo Tou has not changed so far, he still cannot understand the concept of life and does not feel that his behavior is wrong. He is just pretending to like her in front of Kotonoha. I'm really looking forward to the follow-up development, whether she will keep pretending like this until Kotonoha's death, or whether her secret will be revealed and she will continue to be entangled with Kotonoha. Thank you for your hard work, madam, please continue to update! !

The characters such as Tongmo and Kotonoha are very vividly depicted, not OCC at all, the plot is very good, and the emotions between the two are described very delicately and richly, making the story of the two colorful, full, and full of life!

So happy... I finally saw Xiao Qinye and Tong Mo so happy, and it was the kind of happiness bit by bit. Although it was buried in lies, it was like the moon in the dark. So happy, so beautiful, I don't know how to describe it. This is my favorite children's book, my favorite. That kind of divine compassion, that kind of extraordinary attachment, that kind of shining beauty, even listening to horror songs will make you feel beautiful. I like them very much and wish them well in another world!

This is the first book I have reviewed (ง •̀_•́)ง No, after reading Big Tongqin, I have to put the rest behind me! Not OOC at all, the description of the emotional process is very accurate and feels very consistent! Because the main drama hasn't arrived yet, I don't know yet, but it's very, very good to watch so far! Come on! ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆC) I dare say that it is definitely Tong Qinwen's ceiling, absolutely number one! ! ! !

Super good-looking, not OOC, the character analysis is very thorough, I can't get tired of it, it's very sweet, the writing is good, there are no flaws, it's a super good-looking fan article, and Zhu Tongqin99 [love] [love] [admiration]

Damn it, this is Tong Qinwen's masterpiece. It's so beautiful, ehhhhhhhhh…! ! Tongmo, who has memories of his past life, decided to hide it and live his whole life with Kotonoha. The days when the two of them raised children together were so cute to me...! ! But after all, this identity cannot be hidden forever... I really want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see, I want to see how the future develops... In short, it is a very sweet daily life of a couple with a baby. The writing style of the goddess is very good and the relationship between the two is described very delicately... The future score will definitely be above 9.5. Don't worry about reading this book😭

It looks good, I think it's good. The emotional line is quite thin and flowing, and it feels like a small dessert that is not too sweet, suitable for reading when you have nothing to do. There is also a family line, which is also very delicious😋The author's adaptation of Yi Kui's cp really made me taste it again and again, it is very delicious.

The author's writing is very good, and the writing style is also very good, but why is the ending "be" [crying] If the author writes "be" next time, I suggest you mark it in the introduction, otherwise it will just trick people into killing it, especially when the title of the book reads "he" at a glance.

Personal opinion This book is very close to the characters. At present, the story will not go in any wrong direction. The two characters in the plot are also sweet. [Sending my heart] In fact, I feel that although the original book always emphasizes Kotonoha's maternal love, I hope that her personality can also bloom. It is not just for the love of Inosuke. I would like to praise the author's writing of Kotonoha.

It is a completely masterpiece, the writing style is natural, delicate and vivid, the author has a thorough analysis of the characters, and is not OOC at all. In the end, it must be hehe, and the lifespan theory will not work! The emotional line is really delicate and sweet. I would like to call the author an old foodie because he is so good at writing. It is not an exaggeration to say it is a state banquet.

Starting from Chapter 129 is the end of the rebirth chapter and the beginning of the present chapter. This book is really well written [crying][crying] and it is not procrastinating at all, and there is no OOC at all. In the end, Mo Mo Tou went to hell to atone for his sins, Kotonoha took over the church and died, and came to hell to find Mo Mo Tou. There is only one chapter about the decisive battle that is a bit sadistic, and the rest are sweet.

This book is really good. I really like the daily life of Tong Qinyi and the three people written by the author. The interaction between father and son is warm and funny. The author is good at writing about children. Only during the decisive battle did Zhuzhu realize that Tong Mo was not his biological father. He was really a child who grew up in love. Tong Qin The interaction between the two is also very interesting, I can't stop talking, ah ah ah ah, I really like my CP. The author's writing is really good. Except for a little bit of abuse near the end when he found out that Tong Mo is a ghost, the whole article is sweet. If you like Tong Qin, you must read it. In fact, I read this article when it was first serialized, but because it was not finished, I gave up after reading a few chapters. I picked it up again yesterday, and the more I read, the more fascinated I became. It is so good. Now that I have finished reading it, I will immediately give it a five-star rating. The author is a god who writes about daily life! ! !

"The false god's son met the true saint, and the lotus flower under his seat showed his true heart." This sentence is not false at all. The true believer is Tong Mo. Tong Mo is the one who asks God to look down on him and ask God to give him love and eternity. [Kotonoha's smile is like a pool of spring water, and its gentleness contains vigorous vitality. "The leader is a child who is deeply loved by the gods. He has given you a pair of eyes that can penetrate all things, giving you unparalleled wisdom. He has taken away your emotions and freed you from the pain of the world." "You are a blessed person. Maybe He chose to take away your sense of taste because he guessed that he would meet me one day, so you wouldn't have to be tortured by my poor cooking skills."] These words were thrown down at the same time. Not to mention Tong Mo, I felt like I was being purified in place, as if I was gently nailed to the spot by something gentle and irresistible. It's no longer about falling in love with Kotonoha in Tongmo's eyes, but truly experiencing Kotonoha as a person. The biggest feature of this article is that they really live together as a family of three, which satisfies my fantasy. Tong Mo also loves the whole family and is very good to Inosuke, so good that he doesn't even know that he is not his biological father, and always thinks that Tong Mo is his biological father.

321 Everyone started chanting: I seem to have seen your face somewhere. Listen carefully to what people have to say. I was impressed by her pretty face, she is really pretty and can sing very well. The Song of the Civet Cat is not to mention how cute it is, Hui Zhilan has a happy heart, and he will keep her by his side until the end of his life. She will be a stupid girl until she dies. Has Kotonoha ever had a happy time in his life? Who does the warmth in the memory belong to?

So sweet, so sweet, I love it, Tongqin99

I really have no choice. People watching this want to cry and laugh at the same time. It is really very realistic. The only person Mo Mo Tou and Koton Ye can fuck may be in the next life. It is so uncomfortable. In the Demon Slayer timeline, Momo Tou heard that Kotonoha wanted to be a human and committed suicide. He committed suicide after being refreshed. Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh.

The first 30 pictures are ugly, and the last 30 pictures are super ugly. They are ugly no matter how you look at them, so I suggest you update 200 chapters tonight and let me take a closer look. Well, yes, the leader of this book is a very good leader, as nervous as ever. The character's OOC is not serious, and Kotonoha's mommy is also very gentle. If she could wear a book, she would compete with the leader for her wife's bag. Also, I would like to ask what kind of sacks Zhuzhu likes? Prepare to pack up and take away tonight

Ahhhhh, no ooc, the character setting is very good, hahaha, delicious

Delicious, delicious, delicious. It's super delicious. The author is really good at writing. But I hope the author will write about movies in the future. I want to watch Lunch (No Misfortune) and Incompetent Fury. Never run away with a bucket, never run away with a bucket, otherwise I will cry [almost cry]

It's a great book, with no bad characters at all. I was a little skeptical when I saw the good reviews in the comment section, but after reading it, I realized that it really deserves five stars!

Very good, very good. Unlike many authors who follow the trend and write about Tongqin, the author obviously wrote it seriously. The characters are not OOC, and they are basically sweet throughout. The most important thing is that Tongmo has been a good father to Inosuke, unlike many bad articles that write Tongmo as a annoying guy who only gets jealous of children. This is great.

What the author wrote is really sweet! ! Although the later stage does not feel as interesting as the previous stage, the daily life in the early stage is really sweet! ! ! ! It's so sweet that I'm squirming like a maggot on the bed. Hehehehehehe. The three of them are very cute. Hehehe, and there's no OOC at all. Very good!

The number of chapters is a bit short at the moment, but it's very interesting. The old man was reborn once, and finally found the correct way to open the special CG in the corner. Finally, it was no longer the shabby man-eating novel hunting CG. Under the guidance of Kotonoye, he developed some feelings (although this emotion mainly focused on It depends on Kotonoha, plus Inosuke), Inosuke is also very cute, and can already call him daddy. Although Tongmo is a ghost, I still feel that the pig has a relationship with the Demon Slayer Squad, but I still hope that the family of three will be fine in the end.

I found it very comfortable to stay up late and read this book ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

It's super pretty and not OOC at all. I hope Inosuke becomes the crown prince in the end, but it's not over yet.

It's delicious. Those who like to watch Tongqin are in luck.

Great... So great. The characters are so realistic. They are flesh and blood people, not flat images. Delicious [full]