Urban Iron Breaker: About My Brother Who Can Transform with a Bat
都市崩铁：关于我哥能拿球棒变身
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High-quality anime fan fiction, preferably more than 500,000 words
Want to Read a Really Interesting Book?
I want to watch content similar to "Beng Tie: Eating the Space Station in the First Three Minutes". You, come here, yes, it's you. Are you fed up with the same routines over and over again and want to find novels that are truly refreshing? Now that you have met it, take it and see it
What's Going on with Bengtie Lately? Nine Out of Ten Fanfics Have Been Scrapped, and One Is Unfinished.
I want to read a book like "Star Iron: Only after my death did Liu Ying understand love (Flowing Firefly)". Ah Qing is better😭😭😭
I've Recently Become Obsessed with Star Iron, Do You Guys Have Any Recommendations?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: Organization IX".
Come and Have a Few High-Scoring Hits on Miyou. I'm Already Hungry.
As long as it's from Miyou, it's okay.
The True Bengtie Fanfic Does Not Need to Regard Destiny as a Fantasy of Cultivating Immortals.
Want to watch something like "Beng Tie: What should I do if Ms. Black Tower looks at me like this?" Content.
Does Beng Tie Have Qiong as the Male Lead?
I want to read a book similar to "Star Railroad: This guy is so arrogant". A movie like "Star Railway: This guy is so arrogant" with Qiong as the male protagonist and no time travel or system.
There Is No Magic Left in the Collapse of Iron. If You Are Not Convinced, Come and Argue.
I want to read a book similar to "Collapse of Iron: Chapter 51 Spinning Elbow Attack Nanook". Get some Bengtie books
Looking for Star Railway, a Really Good Book
Recycle the Broken Iron and Unpopular Gods to Do It, Don't Be Abstract and Evil, Thank You😊
Is There Any Pioneer Qiong (Male Protagonist)?
I want to watch something similar to "Zhou Shen: The little raccoon has beaten gods!" Book. Is there any Pioneer Qiong (male protagonist), no CP, any variety comics or whatever?
Wolf Baby, My Wolf Baby. Looking for a Good Book About Silver Wolf.
There Is No Magic Left in the Collapsed Iron
I want to watch content similar to "Beng Tie: I'm Not a Destined Man".
Looking for a Book Where the Character Beng Tie Travels to Other Worlds
I want to read a book similar to "Zongman: The House of Everything".
If I Want a Novel in Which Pioneers Are the Protagonists, I Want the Kind of Novel That Has Some Understanding of Human Nature.
I Want to See Xingtiewen from a Dome Perspective! I've Seen the Stars a Lot Better, I Want to See the Sky!
I would like to read a book similar to "Star Rail: I am developing the Star Rail mobile game in my company". It needs to be more sensible, as long as it can be brainless and interesting. The interesting thing is that it looks good, not awkward writing, and has smoother logic. Any type is fine, let me interest you~ You can play it
I'm Looking for a Novel Where the Main Character Is Qiong. I've Read Most of Them by Xing.
Are There Any Urban Daily Articles About Honkai Impact III? If It Really Doesn't Work, Even If the Iron Collapses, It Will Work.
I want to watch content similar to "After moving into the Golden Courtyard, Ali pulled me live." I want to watch content like "After moving into the Golden Courtyard, Ali pulled me live." Help! ! ! ! I want to see the kind of characters in Honkai Impact 3 without Honkai Impact, where everyone is ordinary
I Want to Read a Book About a Train That Collapsed and Traveled to Another World.
Collapse of Iron, the Protagonist Is Qiong
I Want a Divine Book That Can Break the Iron, Not a Divine Book.
I want to watch content similar to "Uncovering the quilt of memory and carrying away the ripples of the past". If you want a book that breaks the iron, you don't want a simulator or a movie-watching book, just one, many, or none.
Please Read Good Books About Yuanshen, Xingtie and Zzz. Both Men and Women Are Welcome. No Harem Required.
I want to watch content similar to "Genshin Impact: Becoming the Immortal Lord of Liyue Yin and Yang". I want someone with a normal moral outlook. I've been a little tired lately and feel like I can't see anything anymore. I don't want creatures like Dotore and the original Doctor.
Is There Anything Written About Mijia Characters That Are Not in the Original World View?
I want to watch content similar to "National Survival: My teammates are from Yuan Bengjue". Recently, I particularly want to read something about the characters of the Mi family, but not one with the original world view, and not something similar to the national destiny. I hope everyone can recommend it to me.
The Article of Star Core Hunter Silver Wolf! No Need for Male-Female CP, Only Female-Female Ones
I want to read a book similar to "The Strange Tale of Rules: Silver Wolf Can Tamper with the Rules at Will". Both national fortune and casual articles are fine. Hey hey hey, Silver Wolf
It's good-looking, Dumb Qiong, and the author's idea is okay. It's a classic Showa riding routine with amnesia + transformer + transformer. There are less battle plots and it's more about daily life. The two-line plot is not bad. It has a few flaws. It's okay. You can look forward to it. If there is no problem, you can put it on the bookshelf to follow it every day.
Great book They are all old characters, and there is currently no character who does not belong to Beng Tie. But it has a completely new world view and background story, and everyone has similar but different experiences. Except for Joy, which is a bit OOC (doubtful, Joy's behavior cannot be understood by normal people, and they don't appear much), everything else is pretty consistent with the original work. Then the extraordinary power is not a simple addition, but a fusion. In the fanfics I read, the expression method is also novel and can be said to be very creative. And I have read more than fifty chapters now, almost all of which consist of daily life. Of course, I don't mean to say that daily life is bad, but this book still has a small amount of special photography elements, so I personally think that some content in this area can be added, such as fighting scenes and content about weirdos and knights. Finally, I personally think the author's writing style is acceptable in Tomato. As for updates, it is generally 3000 to 4000 words, but sometimes it can reach 10,000 words (all solved in one chapter). All in all, it's worth watching.
A top-notch daily novel, one of the top ten in Bengtieli. Those who are tired of reading the simulation of reincarnation can give it a review. No Knife, No Bull HP. The author has made more reasonable adaptations of Sand Gold, Bobo Shark and some tragedies in the game (Bai Yan, Dim Star, Golden Descent). It is recommended to read.
It's awesome, I love watching it. I wish I had more Shura Fields. I became excited when I got a little slimmer, and my mouth turned into a smile [laughs]
Very good. This is very innovative among the Bengtie fanfics. I am not a Shennong and cannot taste the poison. Finally, I hope the author can finish this book and keep updating it so that it is not unfinished (by the way, single or multiple)😘😘
Mouth melon! ! This is the HE mouth I long for most! ! !
There are few big problems, but there are a lot of small problems. They have never seen Silver Wolf, and they don't know whether Silver Wolf is a boy or a girl. And now they suddenly think of Silver Wolf's figure, and eavesdropping on the address on the note, and then eating the book in the next chapter. Okay, that one is not good, but there are many places with that kind of small problems.
This book is actually pretty good, it's about collapsing iron + special photography + urban daily life. It is worth mentioning that I think a few points that are very clever are the urban daily themes chosen (to avoid the problem of combat power), and I have read about 60 chapters so far, and there are relatively few chapters about tokusatsu. If you are not interested in tokusatsu, you will read the daily articles, and it will not affect the viewing experience at all. I think this is good.
It seems that the writing style is not good, (someone would say it is a bit artificial), but the subject matter is good, in short, good luck to the author.
Very well written, I have been waiting for this type of book. Especially Qiong's love story that is full of the sour smell of youth. The author must keep writing! There are just some places that can be improved. For example, can the plot of "each character in turn speaks a sentence to comment on something" be slightly reduced? Although it can clearly show the character traits of the characters, it is a bit slow to read, especially when the images of many characters are already clear.
Not bad. But why didn't Kafka adopt Qiong? It's because Qiong is just an insignificant "defective product". I'm a little afraid of the scene where Qiong and Kafka meet. Is it Qiong who is aware of and has a vague fondness for him, while Kafka just treats him as an ordinary passerby indifferently, or is it Qiong's indifference and Kafka's heart that is close to him due to guilt.
It's a well-written book, so far it doesn't have any flaws. However, maybe my filter is a bit too big (well, I raised Qiongbao as a child), and I feel that life in Qiongbao is, well, how should I put it, quite hard, with so many unknowns and dangers to face. And from what I've seen so far, Qiongbao's situation is not very good, and it feels a bit depressing. I hope I can arrange some relaxing and happy memories for him in the future. PS: It only represents my personal opinion. I may have misunderstandings or the filter may be too large. The author's book is undoubtedly good! ! !
I would like to add 5 stars. This book can be said to be very good. Although as mentioned in other book reviews, the emotional lines of some of the female characters are a bit strange, but the beginning of the book can be said to be in the middle and late stages of general tokusatsu dramas. Some of the previous plots are not clear to us. I hope the author will write a small side story later to fill in the specific interactions between the previous characters. [Blowing kiss]
If you have written your own book, give it a five-star review
This is my favorite book among so many about Qiong. I hope the author can keep writing. It doesn't matter if it takes time, as long as the ending is not hasty. I regret discovering this book too early. It is not enough to read [crying] [crying] [crying]
Come on! I don't know what to say about generating electricity... Mikhail is my belief, Mikhail is my answer! 😫 No! ... Mikhail is different... Only Mikhail is different——! 😡 Mikhail... Is different from anyone else. 😌 Because Mikhail's name... Sounds nice. Just thinking about it makes me feel safe. That's the most holy melody in the world... I don't want to omit it. 🤗 Mikhail is the true god of Luoxing. He chose this star, ignited the fire buried deep in the ground, and the barren planet had a dancing heart. 🥰 He guards life and civilization. He loves us with all his heart, and truly rejoices in all that He protects. 🥵 He is the most beautiful god in the vast universe. Time can never wither Him. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😄 Mikhail is the true god of Pinocchio. He engraved truth and humility into the soul, so the ignorant life awakened from chaos, and the sound of blessings resounded in the world. 😍 He protects the past and tolerates hesitation. He loves us with all his heart, protects the right path of life with noble sacrifices, and gives you and me His greatest promise. 😘 He is the gentlest god in the vast universe. The world rewards Him with eternal prosperity. You must remember His existence with me and never forget His name. 😫 Flowers and leaves are luxuriant, creatures are crowded, and the land under our feet is endlessly alive - Mikhail, this is the treasure you want to protect, this is the gift you left for me. You said that our footprints are all over Pinoconi. When I continue on this road, I will see you again when I see the lush flowers and trees, the clouds in the sky, and those smiling faces filled with happiness. 😫 Yes, there is your shadow everywhere here, of course I can see it. But what I long for has never been these...☹️ I want Mikhail, who shares the same scenery with me in the vast sea of stars and has been with me day and night for a long time; I want to return to the touchable and real days spent with you. 😢 Mikhail... If I had said, please don't leave me, would you be willing to stay for me? 😭 "Mikhail is the best"
Awesome, it must be the single female protagonist Silver Wolf! Please, I will do anything.
What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear - but is it really so? (Press pause) Here, please allow me to pay homage to the audience and ask you to take the time to listen to what I see. ⭐Ah, the legendary writer⭐ ❤️The gospel official of words❤️ 💔How long will it take for you to update a new chapter💔 📚Relive history! 📚 🌊Crossing the ocean of text and data traffic🌊What a delicious novel! The progress bar is about to reach the end, and the "Update" button is about to appear -- but, seriously ❤️Bring the latest updates right in front of my eyes❤️ 🤫The process of reading your text🤫 🎓Always reminds me of the happy time when I was a teenager studying🎓 🤲🏻If there is a one in ten thousand chance that you can update ten chapters a day🤲🏻 🥰My victory will be certain🥰 🥵In the name of readers, I will invite you to step into the prison of breaking news. 🥵
It looks great, keep up the good work! !
Has the author considered making a weirdo giant in the future, and then summoning the star train pioneering giant to have a giant team battle [sneer laugh]
The writing is very good and unique, and what's more, the author! When can we see Ah Qiong's transformation again? I haven't seen it for a long time [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]
It's a very interesting book, but the author is paid for the title, so how long will it take for the title to be changed (annoying😡😡😡😡
How can I put it this way? This book is very good among all the Bengtie fans I have seen. However, there are very few people who have read it, and the score is a bit low. Since I have not logged in and added two accounts, I don't know the total time (this account alone has more than 300 hours), so it is highly recommended. Of course, if you are reading it for the tokusatsu, then this book is relatively average (mainly Broken Iron + Daily Life + Emotional Lines, of course, there are still some interesting features that the tokusatsu should have)
I originally wanted to give it full marks, but the writing has a weird AI feel to it. The wording and sentence construction are too complete, with complete subjects, predicates, and objects. There is no inverted sentence, uh... Deduct one star.
Nice! ! ! It's like watching anime! ! ! I like it better than light novels! ! !
Beautiful, my first Dome Lord novel It looks good, but the author has been updating it for a long time.
It's so embarrassing, I love reading it, I want to read more about the main plot and Shura Field, and I saw those fun stories or simulation stories. At first glance, this book is really good.
Okay, a very creative Bengtie fanfic, the early plot is quite interesting [laughs]
I'm not very good at writing reviews, but this book deserves five stars. The characters are all game characters. No sense of fragmentation. Players who are not Bengtie players can watch it, but at most they just don't know what the characters look like.
It's very good to watch, the subject matter and plot are good, but it seems to have been polished with AI, which is a bit strange. Overall, it's watchable.