Terraria: Save Toyokawa Shoko at the Beginning!

I've caught up with the big team, let's talk about the reviews. I first read this book because of Terraria, so I came in to see what kind of sparks Girls Band (There are some spoilers so read with caution) The shortcomings or shortcomings are mainly in the first 30 chapters. I agree that amnesia is not a poisonous point. After all, it doesn't matter as long as the look and feel are not so bad. However, the first 30 chapters at the beginning will look very subtle because they did not grasp the proportion of the plot and did not combine retrieving memory with exploration. Moreover, it also involves the crucial process of going into the mines in the early stage of Terraria. It is a pity that it was not written well. Things got much better after Chapter 30. The go group and the chicken group gradually gathered together, as well as the subplot of turning into a fisherman, and the male protagonist's problem were all solved well. The design of the boss that I found interesting was the design of the Knao Mutou man. Because of his many personalities, Mo Mo took over Knao. These designs of Tis, Hutou, and other personalities controlling the little eyeballs are the reason for me to continue pursuing it. Really, this is a small effort by the author. Although the two groups are almost finished gathering, I still hope that the author can come up with more designs that combine this kind of combination in the future. Come on!

It is a novel and beautiful work. It is a rare combination of Bondoli and Terraria. The change of Xiao Xiang's mentality is also quite well written. Little by little, he changes from a breathy Daxiang to a soft and glutinous Xiao Xiang. He successfully writes out the most contrasting and cute characteristics of Xiao Xiang. The rhythm is also well controlled, and the overall look and feel is very comfortable. It is rated as a superior work [OK]

Note before reading: Although this book is about Terraria, the content has been magically modified and it is basically a different world with Terra skin. Therefore, those who specialize in Terraria do not need to correct the differences between the book and the original game. They can just treat it as a different world using the Terraria world view. I At present, I feel that the writing is okay. Those who have not played Terraria can also read it. The NPC authors in the game seem to have given different settings, which are different from the original work, such as the skeleton merchant, and there seems to be no guide. Maybe I didn't read carefully enough. Anyway, I didn't see the guide. I am very curious about how to summon Roshan.

I give myself four stars and explain some situations in the book. I hope everyone can be a little patient. Let me first explain some of the problems with this book: 1. The protagonist's family background and amnesia: To be honest, I didn't feel it was appropriate when I wrote this. I first considered letting Su Shilai be the younger sister, as she happened to be from a single-parent family, but in order to make the protagonist more miserable, I still arranged for an original younger sister to die. Of course, this is not a pure background board. There will be scenes of her later, but it won't be too big. After all, this is considered a fanfic. I hesitated for a long time when posting those two chapters, but finally posted them, but the prompts for more chapters dropped so hard that I was so scared that I added another chapter. The amnesia will be almost better from the end of the first volume to the beginning of the second volume, and it will be completely better by the Mu chapter. It's not too long, it mainly serves a dramatic purpose. On the one hand, I have thought about a "True and False Chuhua". If the protagonist loses his memory and it is Chuhua who comes to that island, no one will know about it. It will be very interesting if that Chuhua comes back again. (But I'm not sure whether to write this yet, as I feel it's not very friendly to Chuhua.) 2. Promote the plot: In fact, the first volume is still the initial stage of the story. The title of the volume also mentions the beginning of the adventure. It is mainly a process of adaptation. In this book, Toyokawa Shoko is positioned as a warrior. In the real world, it is impossible to be proficient in close combat, so she came first. Those who come later will have remote careers, and the threshold will be lower. Everyone knows that Terraria is more fun in the early stage and its strength expands slowly. After the meat is released, it becomes a crazy bossrush, and the rhythm will naturally take off at that time. The previous chapters are mainly to explain the background, and to "train" Toyokawa Shoko so that her awkward personality will not affect teamwork. 3. I will throw everyone over as soon as possible. There is a short story in the other world, so I plan to simplify it here and skip it quickly. 4. When everyone is here, I have solved all my knots in Terra, and defeated the boss, I will open the door for everyone and go home, go to Tokyo to take care of the Toyokawa family, and this book will be finished. If you have any questions, feel free to ask the author and I will explain them. As long as I see any comments, I will reply and give my own thoughts. If there are any mistakes, I will also modify my plot. The author did write it for fun, but he also hopes that more people will like this book. It can be done purely for self-pleasure in the mind, but after writing it, I still have to accept everyone's criticism.

I've never played Terraria, but the author's writing is pretty good. I quite like the soothing rhythm. I just want to ask a few questions. 1. Is it over just to solve the darkness of the Toyokawa family? I always feel that the ending is a bit sloppy, that is, there is a poem about adventurers at the beginning, and then it ends with returning to the real world, and then it disappears. I always feel a bit lost and lost😌 2. Is there a love line in this book? Is there a female protagonist? Single, many? Is the author not very used to writing emotional dramas? But I'm just asking. The author can just follow his own pace. I hope he can answer it🙏 3. Does Xiao Mu plan to appear? Will other characters be added? Will my sister appear again? What's your attitude towards Bai Cang? I'm very curious (if telling her will affect the subsequent plot, it doesn't matter if you don't tell her)

The subject matter is relatively new, so come on... To be honest, Terraria without a guide and amnesia at the beginning is too underworld.

When I was a kid, I lost 591 platinum coins while watching this episode.

It looks good and is not toxic. I recommend it to those who like to watch Terraria.

Rare subject matter, as long as the author is willing to write about it, I am willing to read it

It's great. I love reading it. It would be great if the author could have a burst of inspiration and write twenty chapters a day.

It's really well written, but I don't know any of the girls, but that doesn't matter.

When did you start fighting the boss [laughing evilly]? I want to see warrior Xiaoxiang's teeth!

Interesting new book with potential

It looks good, I hope it can be finished

Not bad, nothing bad. It doesn't look like there's anything poisonous about it at the moment.

I've never played Terra, but I think it's pretty cool.

Very little subject matter, but a very good story

My favorite game plus my favorite anime, awesome

It's really good. Of all the girl band themes, this is the best I've ever read. The story's connection, the relationship between the characters, and the handling of the plot are all very good.

It looks good, but why does it feel like there is no one there? [Think]

Perfect for my taste

Did the anchor add disaster? [Thinking] It doesn't seem to have been added, which is a pity [face covering]

I found a good seedling. This is the best new mygo book I have read in the past week. Support the author

Good book, so good that I went to experience Terraria(¯ㅂ¯crimin)

Good looking, good luck to the author

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Great, come on author

It's okay, I hope it doesn't cut.

Good luck, good luck to the author [shy]

Delicate description of emotions