About Me Playing Wendy in Bump

The writing is quite good, but once the author started writing about the fighting, he became so ruthless that he became completely obsessed with the battle he described and couldn't extricate himself [face covering] [face covering]

Delicate writing style is a major characteristic of the teacher. It would be nice if there could be less fighting and more plot advancement.

I feel like the characters are pretty good, not particularly OOC or anything, and Wendy is also very cute. However, the plot may be a little delayed, and there may not be anything substantial in one chapter. There are too many long paragraphs of description. I can only say that the author has a very good literary talent, but for the novel, it may be better to be more concise^ω^

No, it's so beautiful. Except for the fighting part, the other characters are really detailed. If you're more selective, you can give it a try.

Overall, it's okay. The battle descriptions are really thoughtful and detailed. If you come to read Wendy, you can try the first few chapters to enjoy yourself. The redemption of Reiner in the later period is also good, with a detailed description of Reiner's psychological transformation and inner struggle. Those who like Reiner can also check it out. Regarding Zi Tang Huan in this book, if you are Huan Chu, congratulations, you can see many highlights of Zi Tang Huan's self-awakening. But there are also a few big problems that I think: 1. The pace is a bit slow, mostly because there are too many battle descriptions, and I feel that no matter who I am fighting, the scenes are very shocking. The expressiveness is enough but a bit too much, giving people a feeling of excessive force. This situation does not matter in the early stage, but in the later stage, the description of combat power may collapse. It depends on how the author controls it. 2. There are more descriptions of Zi Tanghuan and Reiner than of Wendy. In the current chapter, Wendy is mainly a behind-the-scenes figure who protects the protagonist group. She will only come to the rescue when the protagonist group needs someone to save the situation, and then there will be highlights. I understand that the author wants to write every character well and give them a good character image, but is it too much? This question is not just raised by me. The Zi Tang Huan created in this article is indeed good, with a lot more opinions of his own, but there are some words and sentences that are used repeatedly when describing Reiner. For example, "It was so heavy that it almost crushed Lena." It can be seen that the author likes this sentence very much. It appears for the first time in Chapter 52, once in a changed sentence, in Chapter 53, the original sentence appears twice, in Chapter 61, once in the original sentence, twice in the original sentence in Chapter 63, once in the original sentence, once in a changed sentence, and once in Chapter 69. (I laughed when I was searching, did you laugh, author?) This will make the reader feel bad. I hope the author can change it in the future, because it will appear that the author has nothing to write and can only pull out old sentences. 3. This is the biggest problem I think. It is said that I am playing Wendy, but I am just playing a shell of Wendy. Every word and action is full of labels. For example, the words "wind" and "freedom" appear too frequently in the protagonist's speech, which has reached the point where I am bored. Chapter 1 There are many deep and meaningful sentences with wind and freedom in it. People who read them will probably think that there are many, but in Genshin Impact, the frequency of the words wind and freedom appearing in Wendy's words and deeds is very low. I am not a Wendy chef, but I feel something is a little weird, so I went to unify it. I counted the frequency of these two words appearing in the main storyline of Genshin Mondstadt and Wendy's lines in Windless Land. Excluding the words Wind Field and Wind God, wind appeared 7 times and freedom 9 times. However, the content of these two words in this article is so high that every other character has to say one or two sentences about wind. No matter how profound the Riddler's sentences are, it will also appear that the author's Wendy is a bit flat and superficial. Some people may say that this is an acting and not the real person, but even if it is an acting, there are similarities or dissimilarities. After reading it, I feel that there is only a superficial resemblance, and there are enough stereotypes. Generally speaking, it's okay. At present, I think these are the things that can be improved. The author in the group said that he will start to make changes. I think it is pretty good. Author, please continue to work hard. I hope you will write better and better in the future. I will give it a four-star rating first and see how it goes in the future.

(I actually wanted to give it 4 stars, but after thinking about it, it's actually pretty good overall, so I'll just give it this rating) Okay, let me do the talking 1. There are a lot of adjectives overall, which actually leads to some procrastination and word reading fatigue. 2. The allocation of roles is unreasonable. I can understand that the author likes Zi Tang, and it is normal to add roles to his favorite characters, but it is completely overdone. Most of the chapters are written around him. What we read is basically directed at Wendy, not Zi Tang. In the middle and late stages, it starts to focus on Lena. I really want to ask, who is the protagonist? ? It's okay to add scenes to your favorite characters, but please also distinguish between the protagonist and who the audience is watching. 3. We finally got back to the main plot... There weren't many highlights in the first season. I just wanted to finish the unnecessary main plot chapters as soon as possible while adding original plots, and only focus on the key highlights of the main plot. 4. To be honest, Wen has changed his major, have you considered changing here too? Also, Wen is also related to time, but seeing that he can only use the power related to time once now, will there be a chance to show it again in the future? (Although it feels unrealistic, it will overdraft the price after all, so it is better to do well) (That's all I have to say, and I look forward to the follow-up. I have endured it for a long time every time and insisted on reading the book, so that I can read several pages at once. I hope I can write more and update more, and don't give up! Please stick to it until the whole book is finished, please!!)

It's pretty good. In fact, I also want to give it 4 points. I just saw someone in the comment area who seemed to be like this. He wrote it well, but I still feel that the description is a bit too much. I can't describe it well. There is a feeling that the text on the entire screen seems to be gradually changing. Zoom in, I'm on the face, but the story plot, anyway... I don't know what to say, mainly because there are too many descriptions, and the plot may be slower to advance, but it is still well written, but it would be better if there were less descriptions and more storylines [Like] [Like] [Like] Of course, this may be a writing style, but I'm not used to reading this type of writing, but in short, it's well written, come on

I only wrote a review when I was halfway through it. It really shocked me. I have also read a lot of novels or sequels related to depression, but the transformation of Zitang Huan was written in such a layered way. Although his growth was helped by others, not everyone's growth is supported by someone encouraging him and helping him. But any of the most important decisions were made by himself, which really shocked me. The writing was so delicate, and I felt that my soul had been sublimated. Genzhen is a very good child, and so is Miss Lena. They are both good children.

The writing style is delicate, full of twists and turns, and the logic is harmonious. Just as the author said, writing Wendy well is not just about writing about a person. It makes me feel that the growth and transformation of Zitang Huan and Lena who are strangers in other humanities are always surprising. The author has a good idea from a broad perspective. He likes the narrative aspect between the battle plot and the relationship between the characters. It flows as freely as the "wind". Wendy does not appear much in the later chapters, but the concave and convex competition affected by the "wind" is re-portrayed. Zitang Huan and Lena beside the passers-by are like collected story books, shining, and write about the sense of sight of Wendy who is always by his side, like the tenderness and compassion of a god. Just like "The wind will bring the seeds of time and cause them to sprout", you can feel the author's understanding of the characters after reading it in full. It is not limited to one-sidedness, but cuts through the innermost essence. The slow-paced narrative method is like listening to Wendy telling a story. Worth the second brush The whole thing is a bit of a group novel, with the protagonist (Wendy) as the main character, and describing the growth and transformation of other characters. The author defines novel writing, and the long description of rhetoric should be due to hand fetish. The quality of this fanfic is very good, the plot has no plot points, and the battles are exciting.

It's so beautiful. Like the new book. Please give 3~4 likes for the new book. Otherwise it will be easily removed from the shelves

Why do you all write such long reviews (embarrassing) I personally feel pretty good because I haven't seen the character and the story, so I won't comment on that part of the characters and story. As I said at the beginning, it's inevitable to play Wendy. A little OOC is inevitable. The degree of acting is gradually increasing, and she is getting closer to Wendy. It's okay. Wendy's character is not very different. She is the kind of person who is very happy and jumpy, looks very chic, but is also very reliable at critical moments. The man is drunk, and you will cry when you play the role. It looks very out of place. There is no concern. When I look at you, there is a trace of divine compassion in my eyes. You are so beautiful. That's all. Can Lao Mi strengthen Wendy and his modeling? I'm crying. In front of the new characters, I feel like Wendy has become yellow and black.

Looks good! The characters are not OOC, it feels like Wendy has really traveled into the concave and convex world! It's very novel. I have never seen this kind of subject matter before. The writing style is also very delicate and the plot structure is complete. It is very suitable for people like me who prefer plot and logic.

In fact, it's very interesting to watch and deserves 5 stars, but maybe it's because of my personal reasons. I can't accept Zuma's departure from the traffic light squad. The author created it very well, very smooth and with good reasons. I watched it very smoothly, but maybe I just can't accept it in my heart.

Teacher, teacher, you wrote so well! I'm addicted to watching it. The characters are not OOC at all, and the plot is coherent and logical. Can there be more teachers? It's really not enough [sending my heart] (in fact, I already know that the teacher is working very hard)

It's okay. I feel like the protagonist still lacks a touch of Wendy's aura and is a bit rigid. After all, she still plays the role.

I love it so much😍 I am a person who loves watching battle scenes. This book satisfied me and I really enjoyed reading it. I can never find a book with many such battle scenes (please recommend it to me if you have any recommendations). I'm very happy to see other people's growth. I have been reading books for nearly 10 years, and I still love reading fan fiction. This book is not OOC, and the protagonist is not awkward at all. The protagonist is not awkward in it. The most taboo in fan fiction is that the awkward protagonist is separated from the world view. So far, I have not seen these shortcomings in this book. It's OK [laughing] I hope to see the completion of this book.

The writing style is very comfortable, I can't fault the language, and there is no OOC. However, the description of the protagonist is a bit too little, and it may seem a bit top-heavy, but overall it is still very good😋

After reading the first 50 chapters, I don't know whether the main characters are Wendy, Zi Tanghuan, and Lena, but I saw these three people in the home page tags. Maybe it's because I prefer to see group portraits or like Wendy's unique beauty. Personally, I think it seems that Wendy's role is a bit less. (This is my impression after reading the first 50 chapters. Don't scold me, don't scold me, and I don't mean to say that the author's book is bad. I like Wendy in "Genshin Impact" and "Avatar" very much. This is a fanfic linked to the work "The Convex Contest", because I am half a Wendy's chef and I have loved this work since I entered Convex 800 years ago. I saw that the character I like now is linked to my childhood Bai Yueguang and there is this fanfic. I was shocked when it came to humanities. I will continue to read. My parents are alive and my whole family is happy and healthy. I wish everyone who sees this comment the same happy family, harmonious and healthy parents, and smooth sailing)🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏

Personally, I think it was well written, and the author will keep up the good work! But. For those of you who want to watch it, let me tell you in advance that the protagonist here is Wendy. It does not appear in every chapter, sometimes it only appears after a few chapters, so it is not recommended for those who don't like this type of novel. However, friends who like Zitang fantasy can come in and take a look. The author also said that he likes Zitang very much, so there is a relatively large amount of pen and ink describing Zitang. Happy watching too.

It's good-looking. I finally found a combination of Aoyu and Genshin Impact. It's so unpopular. It's so hard to find a good-looking one. [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

It looks good. The writing style is very delicate but a bit sparse. But the author is very cute. It should be updated continuously. Come and take a look at this angel.

I rarely write a rating because it takes too much brainpower, but I enjoyed watching this battle, especially each chapter has several thousand words, and some even have ten thousand words. Although it is still not enough for readers like us, it is not OOC at all! ! ! Each character even has his or her own unique understanding! It is based on the original, making it fuller and more enjoyable. I hope that the teacher will stick to it until the end, even a spin-off! Don't stop updating! (Actually, I kind of want to watch the extra movie, hehe◔.̮◔✧)

It's hard to write a rating because I'm too lazy. But this book really made me happy. The author's writing style is really good. He got Wendy's character just right, and the fight scenes were particularly nice to watch. Highly recommended! ! !

The author's writing is very good, and this is a role-playing article. After all, the protagonist is not the real Wendy, so he cannot save everyone after all, but he is also a very gentle baby. His original intention is to give others a chance to have a bright heart, turn into wind, and pursue freedom. He has always gently guided others to find themselves and explore their potential. He is slowly understanding Wendy and realizing the true character of Lord Fengshen. And the author, you are trying too hard! Each chapter is no less than 5,000 words. Do you know the sense of redemption I felt when I saw more than 400,000 words but only more than 70 chapters? Especially because the battle scene is grand, spectacular, and awesome in one word! ! ! But if you only want to read the protagonist, I suggest you skip reading, because I found that the author really likes Lena and Zi Tang Huan! The plot is more daily, but the battles are really exciting [shy], but I have a question: should the listening time be added to the reading time? Every time I finish reading a novel, I feel that I have spent a long time reading it, but every time I post a review, the reading time is so short that it makes me really desperate for a book-listening person! ! [Cry][cry]

The writing is good and the emotions are delicate, but it feels like there are many similar words and sentences that appear repeatedly, like... Laughing, and what Wendy said seems to have a lot of similarities? In these chapters recently, the word "two women" has appeared a little too frequently, and I feel a little uncomfortable every time I see it, but overall it's still pretty good.

Very good book! It is no exaggeration to say that this is one of the most attractive chapters among the 50 chapters I have seen in the Bump fanfic. Whether it's characterization, combat description, narrative style or word choice, it's all very good! A must-read book for Miyou players and old Bump fans! It is a very excellent work! ! I hope you can keep writing [shy]

The teacher's writing is really beautiful, and Wendy's character design is very appropriate. When she encourages Zi Tang Huan, she really has the unique tenderness of the wind god Barbatos. I hope the teacher can update it soon. After reading 3/1, I realized how I read it so fast, so I read it carefully and slowly.

It's not bad, it's probably the protagonist's character as Wendy in the concave and convex world, and the author's writing style is also good. It's just that I tried too hard to concave the character. I used a lot of positive descriptions to concave the character. I always relied on the protagonist's lines to concave the character. It was fine at first, but then it felt repetitive. People who are easily embarrassed will find it awkward. Wish it would be better to be sculpted at multiple angles. But this one is pretty good. I feel like it shouldn't be a 7., It should be an 8. After all, I think other 8 and 9 scores are not as good as this one. It may also be related to the small number of audiences in the two circles.

It's super good-looking, and Zi Tang finally became brave in the middle period ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️ It's so cool for me to see, because some fanfics like to describe Zi Tang as an extremely weak guy😭😭😭😭😭 Those people who saw these descriptions almost gave me death

To be honest, although I am a combat-oriented reader, the author's writing style really surprised me. It is a very poetic article, but I personally feel that the protagonist is a bit aggrieved, sorry! Author, don't take my words too seriously! The author writes very well! It's just that a vulgar person like me really can't appreciate it! I hope the author will meet more readers who like your articles! ! !