Apocalypse: Forced to Become a Magical Girl

The book is very interesting. For my personal taste, I like it very much. Regarding egoism in the apocalypse, I personally don't think there is a big problem. After all, I am just playing the role of a magical girl, and I don't really become a magical girl. There is no need to be true, good, and beautiful. The protagonist can have his own personality. I think Very good, please keep it up, I hope the main character will not be reduced to a background. In many role-playing articles, there is basically no information about the main body in the later stage, just like the vest has become the main body. Don't let the magical girl take over the protagonist's body when the time comes. The protagonist really becomes a magical girl. That would be a bit too boring. (For the following plot, I hope the author can make the protagonist independent and strong enough without being attached to any force, instead of passively falling into crisis and chaos.) Finally, I wish the author that his writing skills will get better and better, more and more people will read this book, and the book will not be too censorship. (A little selfish thought, after all, we also wrote that the main body is a male. If the book is going to write an emotional drama, can it be Narcissus? [Discussing the main body and the clone])

It looks good, the protagonist does have the feeling of being the only light in the apocalypse, and she is also a loli 👍

It seems okay so far. The protagonist is currently thinking about himself. I hope that he will become better in the future and take on the responsibility of saving the world. After all, he has the power and has seen many tragedies in the world. There must be some changes, like a beam of light that illuminates the world! But saving the world comes at a cost and sacrifice, and that's normal. After all, even if you do hundreds of good deeds, it doesn't matter if you commit one sin. But for all the good deeds, one still needs to pay for that sin.

Five stars to myself, everyone is welcome to comment! Not many people read the first novel (should it be long?), So I mainly practiced writing rhythm and plot. Now that I have written more words, it is a bit difficult to revise the previous words. If you have any comments or suggestions about the latest plot, you can tell me ~ I don't have to change every item. If it doesn't affect the outline, I will try my best to change it! I have been very busy recently, so the update may be late, but I will try my best to update it every day!

It is recommended to add a setting. The protagonist has a happy family in the original incident and has parents, friends, brothers, etc., So that it is more reasonable for the protagonist to be suddenly abducted by the system and feel angry and rejected. (I like the setting, but the writing is really not good, sigh)

Strange, unexpected and good, this novel Something feels wrong

Not bad, the character of the protagonist is still okay

It's actually quite good, but since it uses a magical girl as the title, at least show me an orthodox magical girl! Don't make excuses anymore. As an ancient magical girl cook and a great friend, it's really hard to watch, but the author's writing is pretty good so far, keep up the good work!

I usually don't bother to write reviews, but this book is to my liking. Give me a good review and don't die.

It's dark and difficult, but it's a story that Sambo will love