Teyvat's Spark

"Look around you!" Lin Zhou waved his arm and pointed at the magnificent buildings around the square. "The warehouses of the Knights are filled with grains from Liyue and treasures from Daoqi. And you, the people who protect this city, how many moras do you still have in your pockets to buy tomorrow's bread? Original text, Overthrow of the Knights. I only know one of the Knights of Mondstadt, the Knights of the West Wind. Could it be that they were the dogs of the nobles during the Falgar period?

Two stars because one star will not be included in the rating. The reasons for the rating are as follows 1. After reading the first three chapters, you can know that the author is not writing about Teyvat at all, at least not the Teyvat in Genshin Impact we played. By the way, the author is writing about Mondstadt when Jean Gunnhild was the acting leader. During this period, there was a revolution in Mondstadt (it made me laugh to death) 2. With 47 World War II soldiers and the M1 Garand, the author dares to overthrow the free Mond. Do you really think that Qin, who can kill the one-eyed Xiaobao in seconds with his bare hands, grew up on hard work? 3. Use research explosives to seduce Keli and divide the Knights of the West Wind. I can only say that I have never played the game. Think about how many seconds it will take for Alice to land on your face. 4. Among a bunch of demons who are even better than nuclear bombs, what do you want to rely on to achieve revolution? WWII technology? The King of Human Law shattered the two moons with one blow, and raised his hand to throw away the frosty moon. Do you think about it? The four shadows are still looking at Teyvat. Have you not seen the limitations of God?

It feels like artificial intelligence mixed with a little bit of AI. Sometimes it feels like it was written by a human. At other times, it smells very strong of AI. But when I read it, there is nothing wrong with it. In the early stage (roughly before Chapter 15), I brought myself into Lin Zhou's perspective. There was a feeling of traveling through time and bringing an AI to constantly give guides during the coup. It was really cool; but there is one thing that can be explored. The protagonist Lin Zhou's temperament changed drastically after merging Guderian's soul. His emotions/emotions were suppressed, and he became an absolutely rational Mondstadt sword bearer. Is this kind of Lin Zhou really a college student who has traveled through time? He is constantly assimilated by the soul of Guderian. Can this be regarded as a kind of "seizing of the body"? I think that an excellent novel protagonist should not just be an absolutely rational head of state, but should be full of emotions and be able to bring emotional value to readers. 🧐 (Come on, author, use AI less and be optimistic about you 😘)

All I can say is pull it, the fight is almost over, and then the white flag is raised for peace talks to take over, and then Keqin turns into an underground party again, leaving a hidden danger, forget it, maybe it's true, I don't understand, and the most important thing is that there are fights here and there, everything I see is to suppress the protagonist 😂

This book is very good, the pace is not sluggish, the development is fast, and the interesting points are relatively dense. Overall, the plot and other aspects stand up to scrutiny. It's a good book worth reading. But I hope the author can focus on the bottom layer. Otherwise, what if the protagonist looks a little less like Starfire and more like Tokusan? In short, there is nothing poisonous about this book. It's a good book to read.

The writing is okay, but the protagonist is a bit aggressive. Even if there is a system cheat, you may not be able to win against a lady. The strength and speed alone are beyond what humans can react to. He can directly run into the crowd with his shield on and start killing.

Although I kind of want to complain, nuclear weapons are a sufficient threat to the people of the gods, but they will probably not have much impact on the gods themselves. After all, concrete structures are extremely severely weakened by nuclear radiation, and as a wind god, it is definitely a big threat to weapons that rely on aerodynamics. However, this book is still quite good. Except that the protagonist is a bit led by the system, the upper-level narrator is a bit heavy, but I still like it.

The so-called war means the death of a few nameless NPCs. Is the war that the author understands just a game of chess on the sand table? Those who rebel against the old class and are not part of the movement will not be killed. The original protagonists will not be killed, but will be played.

It's very beautiful, it's a war-related theme, it's rigorous.

There's nothing interesting to watch. I can't stand the fact that the main character is suppressed. There's also the Extraordinary World. Isn't it a bit too funny when you talk about technology? Modern weapons have no concept, they are written randomly, and they look very unpleasant.