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The writing style is okay but needs to be improved, and the subject matter is relatively new. But the first three chapters are too cumbersome. If possible, it is recommended to change it to one chapter or half a chapter. According to the golden three-chapter rule, many people may not have the patience to read on. I will skip the first three chapters directly, because most old bookworms can basically judge the rhythm of the article, or the style of writing, by reading the first three chapters. If they are not interested or have no appetite, they will just jump away. They will not care how good the plot is unless it is a popular book. It's Chapter 81 now. The plot progress is too slow and there are too many scenes for supporting characters, such as the local snake in Notting City. If the part in the village is for cultivating feelings, then adding the plot of the village and the academy is too cumbersome and will make people impatient to read on. I have skipped several chapters because I only saw it because Xina traveled to Douluo Continent and was CP with Tang. To highlight the point, Zina traveled to Douluo Continent and Tang was CP before traveling to Douluo Continent. Too many emotional scenes will not make this article more exciting, but will only be cumbersome. The author spent so much pen and ink probably to describe the unique properties of Tang, Wu, Qi, etc., But, well... I don't know how to put it, anyway, it feels unnecessary, or it is an ineffective description. Overall, the flaws do not hide the good points. It is a pretty good novel with a good idea. The writing is not particularly good, but it is not particularly bad either. In addition, the above is only my personal opinion. I commented after reading all the chapters of the novel I am reading now. If you are wrong, you are right [Sending my heart]

Good looking! The writing and settings are all great! I think the author has chosen some examples: the setting is good but the writing is not good (because most of the time it will end later) or the setting is good but the writing is frustrating. It is obviously good at the beginning but then it feels like it has been penetrated! Wait... Forget it, but! The big article is beautiful from beginning to end! I like them all very much! ٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤

The author's writing style is really good, but if you avoid lightning, it will be like worshiping the master as your disciple.

It's so good. I've been obsessed with Douluo Dalu fanfics lately, but I can't stand a lot of them after reading them for a while. This one doesn't work at all! There is no OOC to express Xiao Wu's agility and cuteness, Tang San's calmness and the other team members' character traits! The heroine Zina is also tough, but she also has her own soft side. She adheres to principles and has strong skills. But actually I think there is a slight flaw. When describing, I want to highlight a certain aspect. Sometimes I describe too much and reiterate the key points (only my personal opinion). But fortunately, this is not the case. Up to more than 170 chapters, I seem to have only met two or three. Don't give up. Don't give up. The writing is very good. I heard that fanfics need to be scored, so here I am.

@ Author, where can I go to read the follow-up? This broken tomato actually took the book off the shelf [cry] [cry] This book is so good, I haven't updated it for a day, and now this one comes to me, I'm so angry [cry] [cry] [cry]

I've finished reading it. The author writes well and the characters are very thoughtful. I like the author's character Xina. The pace is a bit slow. I really want to read the story that happens next [crying]

It looks good. I hope the author will work hard quickly. Please, please. Good-looking and good-looking.

What's wrong [crying] Why was it suddenly taken off the shelves?

It's a good read. I highly recommend it. I was a little embarrassed when I saw other Ye Luoli characters entering Douluo Continent, but not this one. It just felt like a surprise. It was really great.

Super good-looking, novel subject matter, no meal replacement yet, please don't give up, [like][like][like]

Why don't you really open a new book and continue writing? Great author! Can you please reply [Crying] I've spent all my flowers waiting.

It's good to watch, but it's a bit lacking. I finished reading it in one go.

It's so beautiful that words can't express it [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]. Unfortunately, the author was heavily targeted and was forced to take it off the shelves. What should I do?

Why not updated?

Very nice. But I looked at the bookshelf and saw that it was removed from the shelf.

It's beautiful, big, come on, I wish you more and more success in the future, don't give up [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very beautiful. It's the first time I've seen this type of story. The author wrote Zina very well. Score!!!

So why was it removed from the shelves [crying]

Why should such a good book be taken off the shelves?

The reason why I didn't give it five stars is so that this book can continue to stay, so I'll give it a little [shy]. But it really deserves five stars! ! The perfect combination of Ye Luoli and Douluo. When I look at Ye Luoli, I feel that Zina is very pitiful. I hope he can shine in Douluo's world. Pressure points, pressure points! !

I like it. The writing and plot are okay. I don't blindly repeat the original text. The author has some innovations in the plot and characters.

It's beautiful, the subject matter is novel, and the characters are very similar

Very nice, this is one of the few books I like No, why has it been taken off the shelves? I saw it was suddenly taken off the shelves, what does it mean? Don't take it off the shelves, this is one of my favorites [crying][crying][crying]

It's pretty, not bad.

Looks great, cheers up

Good looking, good looking, good looking 😍

Very detailed description

This novel is well written

Highly recommended, very beautiful

Beautiful, great author