Tokyo: They Are Really Just Comic Material!

It's a good book. Both the male and female protagonists have their own characteristics. The character creation is very lovable. I hope it can continue. It is much better than the arrogant male protagonists and AI-like abstract plots written by many authors. It can be seen that it is well-written and thoughtful. Personally, I hope there won't be too many female leads, just the three in the introduction. And please don't engage in partisanship. Since I wrote these characters, just make sushi. I don't want to get a stomachache.

First of all, let's give an overall evaluation. The pace of the whole book is good, the characters are well drawn, and the light breeze is very strong. However, the shortcoming is that the author has too many monologues. , Sometimes it is very confusing to watch. I suggest you change this. Secondly, there is no very clever conflict between the male protagonist and Xia Jian. The conflict is all based on the male protagonist's youthful illness. It is a bit unreasonable. This character will dissuade many readers. I suggest that the author can portray Xia Jian's help to the male protagonist's psychological growth in the future to make the character fuller. Otherwise, the Golden Retriever's appearance is really not interesting. Third, here I am emphatically suggesting the direction of the overall novel. As a Japanese-style novel, naturally there is no need for battles and suspense to promote the development of the story. The author is very traditional in developing the storyline through meeting other heroines in the timeline. This is naturally correct but too ordinary. The author can develop through intertwined lines. The development of a female character does not have to be one after another. Several people can be sent first to create the plot development, and then Through interactions with important characters in the chapter, the characters of other people are gradually improved, which makes the appearance of other heroines in the future more logical and natural. Moreover, the author's description of things is a bit sloppy, and there is too little interaction with the heroine. However, there are many monologues throughout the chapter that seem a bit top-heavy. I hope the author can change this, but the author can control the rhythm of the article. I hope the author can keep it up. Come on! ! ! [Love]

It's beautiful. I haven't seen such delicate writing in a long time. Compared with those in Tomato, it's a dimensionality reduction blow. Moreover, the plot of the male protagonist is also very interesting. Now the female lead and the second female actor have appeared, and they are all very distinctive. Can you just open the Crystal Palace instead of the party fight and stomachache plot?

It looks good and I feel like it's already in the shape of the author❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ ️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

The character arcs are designed very well. When creating conflicts in Chapters 36 and 37, the male protagonist and the female protagonist's left and right brains are fighting each other like in the video. It conflicts with the characters created earlier, but then it becomes normal again.

It was so healthy for me who was new to reading. After reading it at four in the morning, I writhed crazily on the bed like a maggot growing in the dark. I finished reading it in more than three hours and felt so empty. Could the old thief author please hurry up?

I am a shady vampire who swarms at the sight of blood and violence and dies as soon as I see the light. Could it be that I am just a rat in the gutter, and I can only secretly lick other people's happiness? [I'm about to cry]

It's okay. I've found that I've read a lot of the author's books but they're all unfinished. I hope this one won't be discontinued or get involved in party disputes. I'm just a novel reader. I came to Tomato just to eat some craft candies so that I don't get stabbed for stomachaches [crying]

Very good, no problem 😃 56-57 I think I will give two to seven stars more.

It's nice to watch, it has a light romance anime feel to it, it's very good [like]

It's so delicious, everyone comes to eat it. I can't be allowed to eat alone.

Has the on-base storyline been deleted? [What]

Fortunately, I only picked up the book when I saw 40. I read the comments and there are amazing people after chapter 50. I retreated early to leave a good impression. Anyway, I have almost forgotten what I wrote more than ten days ago.

Is it really written by one person these days?

Wow, I found a small number of novels among a large number of memes.

Nice looking, plain everyday style

Look how long I've been watching

Very beautiful and humorous

It's okay, but it always gives me the feeling that my left and right brains are fighting each other [face covering]

A very interesting book and very nice to read

Very nice and feels very comfortable

The light novel genre is very well written, and the template is probably similar to "Changing Dolls Fall in Love". It is worth reading.

It's good-looking, really good-looking. I've seen a few good-looking heroines with multiple heroines (must update it!) (Cowba's crying face)

The feelings are very delicate. Anyway, I personally like this tone very much.

It's very good-looking, both the male and female protagonists have very good characters.

It's really well written, and it's very light in Tomato, and I'm not allowed to have a bad ending [laughs]

A very good love makes the corners of my mouth spin, a rare good book from Tomato [Like][Like][Like]

I hope it doesn't end badly, it's so well written😋

This is my favorite romance novel, Hao! 🤓

The author should have revised it. The problems in several chapters mentioned in the negative reviews have been eliminated. Now it feels quite good.