Youyu*********

I couldn't sleep at night, so let's write something small. The novel itself is a very nice little story. I like every character, every storyline, and every ritualistic admonishment scene written by the author. Perhaps this is what admonishment novels should be like in the first place. As for the characters, the characters in the author's works are not single and boring, but vivid and three-dimensional. The characters may have contradictory personalities, but contradictions are what constitute the human being! Youyu is well-behaved and cute, and at the same time has the unique brightness and publicity of a young man. Under his father's strict teachings, he has not lost his original intention, and he is still the same sincere and clear young man (doesn't this also confirm the results of Li Panqiu's education). Being too well-behaved actually makes people feel distressed sometimes, and their hearts twitch, feeling that Li Panqiu is so inhumane. Li Panqiu is a principled, old-fashioned, and stern father, but in fact, the love and care for Youyu Heyuan can be seen in many details. The drum kit he bought quietly, and the father who sincerely shouted out under "coercion and inducement" may be more admonishment than warmth, but warmth is also a strong feature. It is a father's love, which is true for Youyu and He Yuan. He Yuan is a poor little boy. His poor background and childhood experiences have made him cautious and even a little worried about gains and losses. He Yuan's growing up experience has probably meant countless comforts and deceptions to himself, and he has always been kind and friendly to others. In fact, He Yuan is one of my favorite characters. The experience the author gave him makes his character quite expandable. Perhaps this is the best foreshadowing laid by the author. As for Shang An and grandma, they are probably the most affectionate parts. The gentle and considerate mother is the foundation of Youyu and He Yuan. I feel that Shang An is really a good mother, maintaining He Yuan and mediating the relationship between father and son. The storyline is often the soul of a novel, and it is also the best means of shaping characters. In my mind, the criterion for whether the plot of a lecture novel is excellent may not be whether the story is complete or ups and downs, but whether it is coherent and reasonable, and whether there are foreshadowings. In this novel, we can see that the buttons laid in the previous article are being untied bit by bit - why He Yuan only calls Li Panqiu Uncle Li, how the flint with jade will end, etc. The various foreshadowings laid by the author in advance are the driving force for the development of the plot of the novel. As for the future direction of the story, it also leaves us with a lot of expectations. How the master-disciple line between Xiaoxi and Li Panqiu will develop, what will happen to Li Panqiu in the future, and where the Qiushi Group's business will go, are all worth waiting for. Moreover, in setting the story line, the author is very close to the real society, which allows our readers to find a sense of familiarity in the virtual world. This familiarity also brings a sense of intimacy, making people happy to read on and read it completely. Finally, regarding the creation of a moral sense in the novel, I don't know if this can be conveyed, so I will try to be as subtle as possible. Exhortative novels must have a plot, a sense of exhortation, an atmosphere, and be reasonable, rather than just crackling at the beginning. This is also one of the most basic criteria for me to read such novels. I came across the author of this novel by chance, and then read it by chance. The reasonable and unobtrusive turns particularly attracted me, and I particularly prefer this kind of initiative with a dark hand and a soft heart. This is also one of the great motivations for me to read and write this article now. In addition, as a proactive perspective, I will also pay special attention to the proactive educational concepts and admonishment concepts in the book. Li Panqiu is very recognized by me. It is the duty of a father and master to treat his son and apprentice strictly, and to provide a certain degree of tolerance and favor. This kind of serious but not oppressive, strict but not tender admonishment is the best. Finally, the author's writing skills are very strong and solid at first glance. He is able to describe such scenes with ease. He is able to write such immersive words within the reasonable scope of the platform, which is really comfortable for people to see! I talked about so much at once, but in short: it's good to watch, come and see it. The author will update soon! ! ! !

The most treasured author I have encountered this year is Dada. It is a super nice book. Youyu is gentle and humble, but he has a stubbornness that cannot be concealed in his bones. Although his father is strict, he really loves him. He is never cold or violent after punishing him. His mother is gentle and considerate, and he has an unrelated brother He Yuan who is better than many brothers. In fact, I think what makes me most distressed at the moment is He Yuan, the tragic experience in his childhood, and the inferiority and estrangement that have been hidden deep in his heart for so many years and have never been expressed publicly. Of course, he finally opened up his heart and regarded Panqiu Shang'an and Youyu as real family members. You must be extremely happy~ In fact, it is difficult to write good training texts, because many of them are written as mindless training, or training for the sake of training, focusing only on the training itself and ignoring the things behind it. All the lessons in this book correspond to the growth and transformation of the characters, as well as the meticulous psychological descriptions and sincere and rich emotional interpretations in the process, which are very moving. And as a purely motivating text, in addition to the impeccable motivating part, I was surprised to find that those warm little daily routines are also very moving. Whether it is father and son, brothers or Li Panqiu and Shang An, an "old couple" who have been married for more than 20 years, the scenes of daily interaction are really beautiful and very immersive. It feels like they are really living around us, in another parallel world. I really hope that "Autumn Reality and Jade" will never end. Author, please start writing extras when We Youyu is 1 year old. You can still write hundreds of chapters, hahaha (Author: The Living King of Hell, this is it) ~ [Thinking]

This is the second time I have read this book. It is the most beautiful lesson text I have read in so many years. The author writes it really well. Li Panqiu was so angry at the beginning. Although I knew he cared about his son, he beat him too hard. Only later did I realize that he had his own reasons for training so much. . Quit. . This is the first time I have seen the role of a father described so well in this article! ! ! There is no plot where a kid deliberately seeks death. The logic of everyone's behavior is based on the character's age, education, and social status. Everyone has an online IQ, and readers are not treated as fools. The emotional descriptions of the characters are also very delicate! More importantly, the female character is finally no longer a supporting role. Our mother Shang An is the real heroine of the script! Shang An I am your dog, Shang An simply is. Host. People. Level! ! ! It's really exciting! Li Panqiu, I want to steal your wife from you! ! ! In addition, Li Youyu is too well-behaved. How did you raise such a well-behaved child? Let your aunt kiss you more! ! ! [Love][love][love] I've read it three times, and I still love it very much, it's so great, and it's coming to an end, so I can't let it go! ! !

From "The Year of Knowledge" to "Autumn Reality and Jade", the journey of the protagonist in Bench's novel is really not easy. Life has never been a miracle, and everyone is collapsing and healing at the same time. Regarding the creation of the characters in this novel, I think they are full, whether they are Li Panqiu, Li Youyu, Yang Hexin, or Qu Xiaoxi. I hope they can all continue to live happily in that unprecedented parallel world. PS: I am deeply afraid that I am not a beautiful jade, so I don't dare to think hard about it, but I half-believe that I am a beautiful jade, so I don't want to be mediocre and associate with rubble. PPS: Wow, I can't describe the bench. I think it might be the begonia flower that stayed awake at three o'clock in the morning. It's the only rose in the world. It's the forty-four sunsets in one day. It's the Klein blue under the eyes. It's the endless sunflowers under the white snow. It's the heart of 21 grams. It's the last ray of wind in midsummer. It's every glance in the crowd of people for ten thousand years. It's the look in the eyes when love is burning. Nostalgia is the heart that still beats for love even if time stops, the romantic ending of every turn, adoration and fanaticism, loneliness and snooping, loneliness and desolation, love and intoxication, madness and publicity. Although I can speak well, I still can't find the most perfect words to describe it when I see your words. Thousands of words can be summed up in one sentence: the bench is big! I! Like! You!

I gave it four stars, but I actually think the article is worth five stars. It's just that Youyu is so good, and what I read made me feel aggrieved for him, and made me feel sad.

Sometimes I really envy Li Youyu for having such a warm and serious family. I am just a depressed person who wants to be punished but no one punishes me. I can't help but burst into tears after reading every chapter of this book!

Personally, I prefer Youyu and He Yuan. I can see a lot of reflections of myself in them, but I'm not as good as them. Advantages: Many of the descriptions are very touching, and the detailed psychological descriptions are very detailed and accurate. I don't know how many times I have read certain plots. You should be able to tell by the reading time [laughing] Disadvantages: The image of the strict father is actually very good. He will feel distressed, reflect and feel guilty, but what stands out in the novel is that the rules in the family are strict, but he always takes action in anger, and as a child of a big family, he often slaps him in the face... (Maybe, maybe, I think he is right intellectually, but I don't accept it emotionally) The author, I would like to ask, isn't it set up that Youyu is smarter than He Yuan, can he still score higher than him after skipping a grade to the same class? Why does He Yuan handle many things better later on? Just a simple question, or is it because the male protagonist of this book is Youyu, and only that part of him is mainly described?

It's very interesting. Although the punishment methods are too harsh, it really shapes them into excellent people and allows them to get rid of their inner entanglements. Step by step, we will not encourage the growth of the seedlings. Behind the severe punishment, there are also father's expectations and unspoken care; there is mother's care and comfort; there is brother's company...

I have been chasing the author from "The Year of Knowledge and Action" to the end of "Autumn Reality with Jade" today. Youyu is growing, and the author is actually growing too. When reading "The Year of Knowledge and Action", it can be seen that the author is actually not good at the layout of articles, and sometimes he will suddenly jump to the next stage for no reason. But it's different in "Autumn Reality and Jade". The overall fluency has improved a lot, and the sense of proportion has gradually begun to be mastered. Let me briefly talk about my feelings after reading it. This book is not just for the sake of admonition. Every punishment has regulations. But I think this has become a small reason why Youyu did not dare to take responsibility for his performance in the later period. Regulations are restricting Youyu, and public opinion is also pressuring Youyu. It is really too difficult for a young man who is less than thirty. But I think it was handled well here. Youyu's growth is a gradual process. When he matures, he needs such a strong material to give him a push to complete the final chapter. Personally, I think there is a slight flaw, probably in the part where Li Panqiu and Li Youyue jointly provoke Li Youyu. The text description is just like Li Youyue's performance, which is too deliberate. Maybe they can use methods such as making traps instead of acting like green tea. It makes me feel so uncomfortable [laughing and crying] Written at the end, I hope the author will update more extra stories, such as the married life of Youyu and Xiaoyuan, or their childhood. I also want to see Youyue's past. Of course, I hope the author will publish a new work [laughter]

Super nice family discipline, no mindless punishments Father Li Panqiu's education method is very upright and well-regulated. No punishment is in vain for the children. Li Panqiu, Shang An, Li Youyue, He Yuan, Qu Xiaoxi, Li Youyu There are a total of six people in the family, including five little bitter gourds. Panqiu, Xiaoyuan, and Xiaoxi feel sorry for the pain caused by their original family. Highly recommended! ! ! #Admonition

The writing in Benchushi is really very good, with a mixture of sweetness and sadness, and beautiful diction. Your sentences themselves are works of art. If literature is an expedition, you are the one who quietly lights up the lamps for us along the way [crying] I suggest that Bench's writing can be developed on lofter, so that the popularity will definitely be higher [sending heart] I support Bench's enthusiasm and carry the banner [code hold]

I particularly like this kind of family affection. It's the kind of feeling that reading romance novels can't give me. Looking at Nuan Nuan, Youyu can be considered my oldest child () Let's give it 5 stars. Although I love Youyu for Youyu's good, Youyu is so obedient that I can't see him in person.

Okay, pretty good-looking

Look at the reading time Look at the length of time. . .

Looks good! I hope Youyu can be more willful and the family atmosphere is quite peaceful and warm.

The details are very nice and the action descriptions are very good, making it very easy for readers to be immersed in the scene.

It's very special. I like it very much. It's interesting. The male protagonist is very cute in my heart. I feel like there is much more to be written in the future of this novel. Because I'm imagining it too.

Highly recommended! I discovered a treasure again. It's so beautiful and I highly recommend it. I'd love to read more! [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I really like it. It's invincible. The author's writing is beautiful. I really like it. The writing style is great.

I like it so much, it's so pretty! ! !

Youyu is a good boy [almost crying]

Beautiful, very detailed writing

Push more, push more, it looks good.

The writing is great. I highly recommend it.

The author's writing style is so good, his emotional descriptions are delicate, his logic is clear and the story is compact. How did he achieve this! RecommendedRecommended[Like][Like][Like]

I really like reading it. The author will write more [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I love you author, it's really beautiful

Great. This is the most enjoyable article I have ever read. I support the author greatly.

If you look back more, you will find that this novel is really good in terms of admonishment. Please give me a lot of encouragement, author, for updating [Sending my heart] Okay okay okay

I want to know if Youyu has a girlfriend in the end?