Transformed into a Tianshan Child, Aiming for Immortality

The writing is quite good and has potential. It's just that it may be a bit of a big deal, and everyone has it, such as those who like to read invincible articles, semi-invincible articles, various kinds of immortals, and those who like to lick people to repay their kindness. It seems that there are many dedicated people nowadays, and they are all people without selfish desires. It's great [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon] In a simple martial arts world, science is used to explain metaphysics, and many strange things are added, such as gods and ultimate creatures like super bacteria. Moreover, I feel that the protagonist has basically no real feelings and treats most people like NPCs. He is out of tune with this world and has not integrated into it. Originally, the number of updates per day was small, but most of the article starts with explaining various theories, then demonstrates whether the results are correct, and then forcefully adds them into it reasonably. It is very boring. It can only be said that you have chosen the wrong material. It is much better to write these in a cyberpunk or wasteland world than to tinker with them in martial arts. The taste of martial arts has begun to deteriorate

The writing is very good, and some people like it (such as me), and it has a great and knowledgeable feeling, and I feel that I can gradually write the feeling of the protagonist leading a major event.

It's quite interesting. Those who are used to reading the same martial arts novels can give it a try, and those who can't stand it can quit. Some people who don't read the introduction and the author's explanation think they are too awesome and won't let the protagonist with character flaws go straight to it🐴. As a good reader of novels, I have to watch you guys vent. 🍅 There are really all kinds of xxs. Let's not mention that the protagonist's soul is a repressed male doctor. If the protagonist complains selfishly in his heart, it will be xxn? I usually don't know how many evil thoughts I have in my heart, but I know in my heart who has double standards. I can't do to others what I don't want to do to others. I don't see the evil label? I don't want to read the transformation stories. If you read them, you have to be hardcore. Are these people really adults? I'm very curious. Although sometimes a bit watery, the author's writing is good and beautiful.

I have read Chapter 95 and am currently one chapter away from catching up with the latest progress. Let's talk about the reason for deduction of points first. I came to see martial arts. The author tried to use a lot of non-martial arts elements to explain the martial arts world in the book. I was very surprised when I saw it, and I could only skip large sections when I encountered it. After all, skipping such an explanation does not affect reading. What I want to see is the plot and the interaction of the characters. I really can't stand this long theory. Let's talk about the advantages. The quantity is large, the taste is good, it is very Jianghu, and the character is round and round. The author is very thoughtful and can write a long story. Putting aside the above-mentioned shortcomings, it is worth reading in one sitting for a while.

I am used to reading cookie-cutter martial arts novels, but many of the novel settings in this book are eye-catching, incorporating the author's understanding of martial arts and combat. As for the conspiracy theory, it is just a setting and does not violate the original work. Almost all Honghuang novels are conspiracy theories and no one can say anything wrong.

There are hundreds of changes, and most of them are currently ambiguous objects. I haven't read the original work about martial arts, but I think this article is logically logical. Regarding the part about Xiaoyaozi in the early stage, my opinion is that if you look at the early stage alone, you will feel that the protagonist is double-labeled and ungrateful, but when combined with an incident in the mid-term, it makes sense (similar to being raised by an enemy, no spoilers, it is actually a bit complicated but reasonable), but in the early stage, I only said that there was a conjecture like a conspiracy theory. It is recommended that you tolerate the discomfort in the early stage, and the feeling will be very good in the middle and later stages. The protagonist is very strong in creating spells, but is limited by his semi-obsessive internal skills and body. He can crush the weak ones, and he can stay open for a while and run away against the strong ones. He will be at a disadvantage if he is attacked and restrained by the first mover. Now look at it, if there was no internal strength limit in this state, the protagonist would already be at the top of the column.

It's easy to put readers off at the beginning, but it's interesting later on. Theory + practice are carried out, and I have not suffered any losses. I look forward to seeing more apprentices in the future. If there is another hundred, it hasn't appeared yet, maybe it will be Master and Disciple [Admiration]

Very exciting martial arts setting. I haven't seen such a reasonable but not complicated martial arts novel for a long time. The content and plot are also very smooth. Why is there so much content about changing the world in the back? It reminds me of a book by Guo Xiang, but the title of this book is "Pursue Immortality." If you change society, don't you deviate from the topic?

I saw the shadow of an old friend. There is an author next door who wrote a 9-million-word Naruto story, all of which is similar to preaching. Later, he wrote a story about a vixen in the Conferred God Period, which is also written in a similar way. This book should be that author's vest, right? I came to the free Internet to publish millions of words of private sermons, which finally gave me some conscience. 3 Stars plus one star for you.

It's pretty good so far, a bit bland but not boring.

It's well written, and you can see that the author is very attentive.

Yes, the more you read, the more in-depth it becomes, so it is suitable for people like me who are half-understanding.

This novel is actually well written, there is nothing poisonous, and the plot is logical. But I personally think that a large part of the latter part is rather cumbersome and inconsistent with the main subject. For example, there is a lot of content about reforming politics. In fact, I don't think it is wrong to have this kind of content in the ancient martial arts world. On the contrary, a modern person who gains great power and comes to ancient times wants to more or less influence the surrounding environment. But I personally think that there are too many things about reforming politics, and it has subverted part of the previous tone. In fact, we can put less emphasis on these contents. Social transformation can be carried out, but we can't overdo it. Maybe we can write about it during the rest period of a large chapter, or maybe mention it sporadically. Anyway, whatever the author wants is to completely change the tone. , If martial arts and immortality are supplemented and social transformation is the main focus, then it is better to be more thorough and write about the transformation in large sections (and most people who are attracted by the early plot cannot accept it, but this kind of half-and-half... Maybe it feels uncomfortable for people like me who are unwilling to skip the plot) There are also a large number of new settings in the later period, such as gods, sea monsters, etc. Their appearance itself is quite abrupt. In fact, this is nothing. They are just used to explain these new settings and are narrated in a didactic way, resulting in a very poor viewing experience. The plot always has to be bigger than the settings. Telling a large number of settings in one chapter really affects the viewing experience. Generally speaking, it is recommended to read it. If you think it is interesting, then read it. It is a novel that some people may like, while others find it unbearable. However, there is nothing poisonous in itself, and the logic is relatively self-consistent. The characters are also well-shaped and the plot is coherent. However, the problems are also very serious, but most of them are structural problems.

Very good. Although the protagonist's understanding and martial arts are a bit too exaggerated, but they are all protagonists and there is no system. If you don't open some other plug-in protagonists, you will cry. Overall, it is still very good.

Taking Jin Yong's "The Eight Parts of Tianlong" as an appearance, it is actually the core of science fiction. The Kraken civilization appears in the article, which is completely different from human civilization. Unlike human civilization, which is built on an illusory common imagination tied by blood, there is the hardware foundation of the same species first, and then there are social relationships based on common imagination. The Siren civilization is built on the same software operating system. Any species that accepts the Siren's operating system will be transformed into a new Siren and will not be reproductively isolated from the original species. Using the analogy of electronic devices, humans are equivalent to computers with the same configuration, but without an operating system installed at all. Kraken is equivalent to various models of devices equipped with the same operating system. Including the source of martial arts in the article is a strange existence tentatively called "god". Its existence form is similar to the will of Gaia, and its size encompasses almost the entire biosphere. In ancient times, wizards could communicate with gods. Some wizards communicated with gods and changed the rules, which greatly lowered the threshold for communication with gods, which later led to turmoil in the world. Later, the wizard Zhuanxu Jedi Tiantong greatly raised the threshold for communication with gods.

I have to admit that it's really fun to save books and read them, but I'm afraid the author will stop updating them. But in the end, quality comes first, and from this book it can be clearly seen that the author has put a lot of thought and thought into it, especially the multi-dimensional analysis and application of philosophy. I hope the author can keep it up and don't give up [got it]

Very good, I feel like I can get an 8.0 I feel like the author must have practiced Yang Qigong, and these theories have real-life prototypes. And it explains these things in detail, which is obviously different from some mindless and cool articles, and has certain reference value for the study of Jin Yong's martial arts.

This book is not bad, and it can be seen that the author wrote it very carefully. [Eat melon]

It feels good. After watching it now, I feel that the pacing is well controlled. Even those who have not watched Jin Yong can understand it without being confused. There is no problem that others say is too much explanation.

Although some of this is a bit biased, overall it is a good novel

If you are so awesome, why not write a Journey to the West? After all, it looks like the Golden Elixir Method. It is simply the three cultivations of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism. Tianshan Child Mother ≈ Bodhi Patriarch. After all, the protagonist also likes to have disciples

The writing is good, I think it looks good, but I don't know how strong the force value will be in the later stage. Come on, author!

This book is very good. Why is the score so low? I read the book based on the ratings. Didn't this delay the book?

It's very beautiful, please write it quickly.

It looks good, but why is it a new book? I really want to read it all at once, but it will take me a while to read it. If I am a book reader, I tend to forget the previous plot and give up on the book.

It's still pretty good. There are a lot of classical Chinese sentences and a little bit of fun.

I haven't read the original work, but I think it's a good book [Like]

I don't like watching martial arts, but the author's martial arts with modern twists is so exciting.

The writing is very good. The author has his own thoughts on the martial arts system. It is not a simple "gamification of the martial arts world". It would be better if the author could be locked up and updated ten chapters a day [smile]

The writing is very good, the overall logic and direct IQ are there, but I personally don't like the child-like appearance. I will come back to read it when I grow up [laughter]