Military Medal? I'm a New Recruit and I'm Soft on You

It's refreshing and tearful at the same time, which often makes people's scalp numb [Like][Like][Like]

Good book, good book, the author still has some sense of justice [smile][smile][smile]

It's really good. By the way, has the author really been a soldier?

Shao Yun heard someone calling: "Little doll... Here... Here!"

Looking at the part where Shao Yun's team was established, the content of the novel is still so real and interesting, and the characters are full. It's just that I feel that Shao Yun's time travel system is really unnecessary. Is it better to have this set flow rate? The novel feels like a fusion of previous novels. The characters have many similarities, especially Liu Zihan. Basically, Wang Zixuan has changed his name, but his image, personality and even his occupation have not changed. The novel must have been cut in half. I feel that this novel is not as well-planned as the Paratrooper novel. The protagonist was given a time travel and the system settings were a bit baffling, and the follow-up was basically ineffective and a bit fragmented. The character settings are repetitive, especially the protagonist and Liu Zihan. It is better to continue writing from the previous novel. In the early stage, it mainly talked about the military life of Shao Yun, Nie Fei, and Jiang Yang. After writing half of the story, five people were suddenly added to form a team to perform the mission, which resulted in the lack of roles for each character and the creation was relatively flat. For this kind of multi-protagonist group, it is recommended that everyone appear from the beginning to deepen the bond. Either appear one by one, and when the characters are almost written, add a new character to add freshness. The original Zizixuan was very successful. In the middle period, he replaced the old squad leader and brought a new atmosphere to the team. Personally, I suggest that since the time travel system has been written, we should just relax the world view and give the protagonist group more permissions and maps. For example, the protagonist travels to a parallel world. The protagonist's team is a national special operations team that performs various special tasks. There are various maps, various combat modes, and the characters' personalities are more open.