Pokémon: the Journey Begins in Hoenn

I commented after reading it halfway through. It's a very refreshing book about Pokémon. There is no system or darkness. I like it very much. Pokémon in my memory is a utopia. Now it's really hard to compare the memories of my childhood. What I wrote before is a little bit anecdotal. I can slightly enrich the battle process, the gorgeous contest and the dialogue language. Personally, I still like the dual cultivation of the gorgeous contest and gym battle. This depends on the author's intention. Another thing I like very much is that there are no Pokémon characters making vulgar jokes, such as describing the Snow Demon Girl as a wife, who is a family instead of looking at individuals, and there is no demonic modification of Ash Ketchum and their characters. I also like [Love] It's a very plain and happy article. Thank you for writing it. However, as it is, I think there can be less content in the game, but it still depends on the author's intention [Sending Hearts]

There is passion and warmth, and the bond between humans and Pokémon is particularly well described. Trainers will reflect on their own command and will also conceive of special training methods for Pokémon. The overall rhythm is slow rather than fast. The trainer is responsible for Pokémon.

It's very nice, warm and flowing. It's not an invincible system, but the language is a bit thin. I feel like some places could be expanded on, with more description, psychology and dialogue. Now it feels like an outline.

Okay, but it's a little late to collect the Pokémon. You can't participate in the Aiyou Tournament according to Masamune's configuration, right? Pokémon recovery can be arranged earlier. There should also be more types of Pokémon attributes.

I really like this book. It's like the life I imagined in the Pokémon world. Every Pokémon around me is a family member chosen by myself. It's super warm. The gorgeous contest and gym battle are both well written. Come on, don't finish it. This is the most important spiritual support for me when I come back from school. I think about this book every day at school [blowing kiss]

It's very everyday and heart-warming, the Pokémon in the team are all good-looking, and the descriptions of battles and gorgeous contests are also good. The writing style is relatively immature and a bit awkward in some places. The writing style could be improved.

Yes, the narrative is delicate and the plot is reasonable. Compared with those system streams, it is a little less arrogant and more warm.

It's beautiful (｡ò ∀ ó｡) Thank you to the author✧⁺⸜(●˙▾˙●)⸝⁺✧

I finally found a good Pokémon article, good luck to the author🦆~

This novel is a masterpiece in the Pokémon literature. Readers who like to read Pokémon should not miss it [Blow Kiss] Reading this book is like drinking fine wine

It's very nice to look at rather than systematic, and I like all the elves in it. It would be even better if there was a pickpocket cat.

The writing is okay, but there is too little. I wonder if there is a female protagonist?

Come on, I like it very much

It looks good, I like it, I love it very much [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

Come on, very good

It's very beautiful, but can there be more of it [smile]

An ordinary healing system, not dark, no class oppression, no knowledge blockade, no indiscriminate killing of Pokémon ᴖᗜᴖ

It seems very good so far, the protagonist is well portrayed, and the plot is more everyday

It's okay, I can't say what's bad about it, but it's just weird [shy] It's good to pass the time [shy][shy]

Good looking. Hang in there.

This book is good-looking and the author is also very active. Brothers and sisters, you can click in and take a look.

Very wrong, I like it very much

Not bad. Nice. Come on! Come on, author!

Looks good, come on! The author is great

I like this (Suki Sagumi)

Beautiful. So beautiful

Author: How much more can be seen? I can't see enough now [I understand]

The content is very good. I hope you can give it a try.

The book is very good, there is nothing toxic about it so far, but why is the rating so low?

The warm article [sneaky smile] is much better than the beast control. It's a pity that the Pokémon traffic is not large.