Quick Travel: Save the Paranoid and Gloomy Little Pitiful Person

Like it! ! ! ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨ I want to watch my husband eat oranges in bed🍊ദ്ദി˶>ᴗo)✧ Because I feel like Gong Bao Jiaojiao @ /ᐠ - ˕ -マ Ⳋ

The content and subject matter are very interesting. However, it is recommended that the author can mark how they like the boss Nian, that is, before he came, whether they liked the original owner or later [thinking]. But everything else is pretty nice [blowing kiss]

Wow, I'm finally here to write a book review (I personally pay more attention to the reading time, and I have been putting it off until now, hahaha). I have read several worlds, and I like the first one the best. I kept it immediately because I personally prefer attack and control, and I like to be favored and attacked. But overall, looking at all the worlds so far, this book is relatively neutral, and there is no outrageous plot. Everyone can come and taste it. The second world is sweet throughout! Hehe, I should be an earlier reader, so lucky! Every time I see someone liking and commenting, I am very happy that more and more people have read this book. The author is also very cute! I hope the traffic of this book will get better and better in the future.

I have just finished reading the first chapter, but I would like to give you some advice, that is, I feel that the ending is too sudden. For example, the end of the first chapter ends just after his part, which is very sudden. I feel that if I add a little more daily life, make an extra chapter or write a little more, I will feel better. It just jumped too suddenly. When I read the next chapter, I thought it was the content of the first chapter. I didn't even realize it, but I think the anchor wrote it very well, and the pulling was also very good, but I felt that the emotional transition between the attacker and the receiver was not that obvious, but it didn't hinder it. It was quite interesting. I just discovered that there is a sequel, isn't it going to end?

It's nice to watch, but overall I still prefer the first world. It feels like the first world makes people feel more paranoid and straightforward and pure love. The next two small worlds are also sweet, but they don't have the amazing feeling of the first world. I hope the teacher will continue writing. I wish the young couple a sweet life, and I wish the teacher safety and success. [Please update]

I just chased the third world to the place where the teacher updated it. It feels very good, especially the character design. I feel really good. I am going to see other worlds. First, I will give a five-star review [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart]

I just saw the update of the fourth world. The fourth world is different from the previous worlds. It was written when they first came into contact. The first three small worlds were basically written when the mission target had a crush on the protagonist. The small worlds are relatively short and I didn't see any surprises. It is suitable for passing the time. Personally, I think the fourth world is the best. Both the author's writing and the plot are getting better and better. I like it very much. It would be nice if it could be updated faster (Note: This is a small world 1v1, the CP of the whole book is not fixed, you can read it if you don't mind)

I think it's quite interesting, but I have a question: why did the protagonist seem to have no emotion at all towards the previous world in the next world, and was deleted by the system? Although it feels a bit abrupt, it's really pretty [sending my heart] It's really nice [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's great. I feel that the author's writing is very warm and the feelings are very delicate. He guides his lover to come to him step by step, in a gentle and warm way, and tells his lover in his own way that he will always be there and that he will always love him. He can repeatedly confirm that their love is gentle and firm. The author writes so well! ! ! So gentle! This book feels warm.

It looks good now, but I don't know if it will be like this later.

Very beautiful, very beautiful

Only the first world is okay, five stars for politeness, partial attack and retreat.

I really like the second world! Very well written [love] [love] Come on

It's my favorite type and character, and the emotions are very delicate. It really blew me away.

Normal fast rhythm, delicate emotions, inspiring people about love

Super super super super beautiful

After watching several worlds, I still want to ask: Brother Shen, aren't we straight men? [Full]

Happiness is countless small and specific moments

I like it, I like it, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good

The writing is very good and the content is very eye-catching. The characters of Shou Bao and Si Nian are also very good, no matter which small world they are in.

Recommended! ! ! ! ! Really pretty!