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It was my first time to write a book seriously. As for the reason for writing a book, it was actually very simple, because I could not find similar books. I wanted to read a book that combined different worlds, western fantasy, magic, lilies, stickers, battles, gods and demons, and other attributes together. But I couldn't find anything satisfactory, so I had to write it myself. I uploaded it to Tomato at first, actually to listen to the book. Later, when I saw the comments from readers, I had a strong desire to see everyone's comments. With this mentality, I signed the contract. As a new author and still self-produced, my writing must have many shortcomings, such as the beginning is cliche, the rhythm of the plot is not well controlled, the details of the setting are not logical, and so on. They even get complained about because the beginning is too typical, the writing is formulaic, and the narrative at the beginning is messy and so on. I humbly accept these criticisms, and will change them when I think of a suitable optimization plan, but I don't really have any good ideas at the moment. After all, there are not many ways for humans to travel through time. All I can do is to try my best to bring some good experiences to readers in the subsequent plots. The above is my book review for the first volume. I don't care whether you praise or criticize it. As long as you feel happy after reading it and leave me a sincere evaluation, I will be satisfied. In the end, the score I gave myself was absolutely full marks. After all, I wrote it word by word. The first volume has been completed. Please give me some ratings and book reviews. Thank you readers for your support.

Hello, people, you can take a look at this book. There is nothing too surprising. The subject matter is good and the content is quick. Although my princess has not been on QWQ yet.

It's okay, the post is well written, and the plot progress is relatively steady. But from the perspective of Western fantasy novels, I personally think it's a bit forced (it's just my humble opinion, it can't be put on the table, you can just watch and play, if you don't agree, just think I'm talking nonsense). On the one hand, the description of society in the context of the ancient West is not strong enough and the sense of history is not strong; on the other hand, the various characteristics under Western fantasy are unsatisfactory. Well, this novel feels like a magical urban novel (campus novel) to me, with a somewhat strong modern style. It would be better if more words were written to describe the strict hierarchy around us (or the superior treatment and intrigues of princes and nobles), as well as the macro world view, such as title distinction, kingdom ZZ, distribution of forces, details of various Western fantasy creatures (such as dragons, elves, orcs, etc. Classic images), magic classification (grading), continent environment, information about strong men, brave demon kings (this may or may not be present), etc... It would be better...

I really like this setting when I give it five stars, but it's actually a bit hard for me to accept how a good hand of cards could be played so badly. That pure-blooded vampire is the heroine, right? Lu Xi was beaten so badly that he died without even being beaten, and was dismissed with a light agreement. Isn't this plot really human? I really doubt whether this book has the M attribute. Of course, those who pursue detailed analysis of battles and emotions may be disappointed. The author does not put too much emphasis on these areas and prefers to narrate the story with a fast pace. Most of the plot is sorting out the emotional line after Lu Xi comes through. However, now the author should be writing the story line of the maid, and there is less writing on the princess. Overall, this book is barely readable and suitable for quick reading.

The post is really good, every character has its own characteristics and I like it very much. Sophia is really cute and cute when she is with her. When she wants to suck blood, she is a white and black dumpling. When she is with the princess, she is really sweet. I feel that every sentence is flirting and very offensive. The only reason why it is missing one star is that I feel cheated. The protagonist is not the main attacker at all. When he is with the princess, he is always the sufferer. When he is with Sophia, he is also the main sufferer and occasionally attacks. I was quite looking forward to it when I saw that the protagonist is the main attacker. Also, the first sacrifice was a little poisonous.

It's a good novel about hundreds of queens. The setting is novel and the writing is acceptable. However, the ending ends hastily (it's considered unfinished, I guess). Personally, I feel that it should be able to write more (the post-daily life after the main plot and the post results of each character). It's a good read. Right (just read it without thinking) The logic is barely self-consistent (the author is very smart. If the hole buried in the front cannot be filled, he will find another way to remove the people who buried the hole, so that no one knows where the hole is, and it will be filled in, such as the agreement between Lucifer and the protagonist, etc.) Summary, after a hundred years, the writing style is acceptable, daily posts, the ending is sloppy, non-toxic and readable If the ending was not sloppy or if some extra daily extras were filled in later, the score could be higher. But after all, it is self-produced, so we can't ask the chef too much about what to eat at home. Overall, it's pretty good.

I finally finished reading it. It's very good, although there are still some flaws. For example, Xie Mu's favorability level is almost full after he saves the United States as a hero and touches his head a few times. Isn't it a bit too easy to conquer? And the worst thing in the whole drama is Hall. Originally, he and his sister had a deep love for each other, but he was unintentionally seduced by Illya, which caused the brother and sister to break up. Later on, he always thought it was his fault and felt guilty. If he knew the truth and his sister had exchanged souls, wouldn't this turn into something dark?

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Run forward, facing cold looks and ridicule How can you feel the vastness of life without going through hardships? Destiny cannot make us kneel down and beg for mercy Even if blood is spilled all over my arms Where is the world full of flowers? If it really existed then I would definitely go I want the highest mountain to stand there Don't care if it's a cliffhanger Live hard, love hard, even if your liver and brain are ruined Don't ask for anyone's satisfaction, just be worthy of yourself Regarding ideals, I never choose to give up Even in the gloomy days Run forward, facing cold looks and ridicule How can you feel the vastness of life without going through hardships? Destiny cannot make us kneel down and beg for mercy Even if blood is spilled all over my arms Keep running with pure pride How can you see the sparkle of life if you don't persist to the end? It's better to burn than to linger For the beauty in my heart Don't compromise until you get old

The author's writing is very good. The last one I read that was so good was Aiina's. I can feel that the author may have borrowed a little bit, but he wrote his own style. Lu Xi's attack and defense are still much better than those next door who always cos0. Five stars for you /ᐠ - ˕ -マ Ⳋ

We need more Lily all, reject the random stew behavior, support the single-arrow heroine, and Lily wakes up! Lily wakes up! Lily wakes up! [Anger]

Support support support

When I was woken up by the alarm clock in the morning, I told the bed, "I'll get up in five more minutes." Bed: "Are you lying? Last time you said 5 minutes, but I stayed with you until noon!" Me: "It's true this time! I swear on my phone!" The mobile phone said quietly next to it: "Don't get involved with me. Last night you said, 'Brush videos for 10 more minutes before going to bed.' I stayed up with you until two in the morning. Do I still believe you?"

The characters are delicate, most of them are vividly drawn, and the book is pure white, making it a fine book. If you want to faint, you can go to the group

Should I be happy or sad? There is interesting content but I discovered it too early, so there isn't much. Youyou Cangtian, give me more

The pace is fast, not bad

The formula is easy to use

Thanks for the good reviews, please post more [adoration][adoration][air kiss][air kiss]

Is this book really good? How is it possible?

It's good to read, but Chapter 79 is not enough, not enough at all. Whether it's true or not, please give me one more chapter. I'm dying. Please, I feel like there are ants crawling on my body. I feel like my whole body is shaking and I can't breathe. Just give me one more chapter. Please, really, I swear I will never touch this kind of thing again. I really can't bear it anymore!

The posts are great, I hope you don't enter a dark room.

The style of this title reminds me of an ancient book called The Last Blood Hunt [laughter]

It can be seen that the inspiration comes from lovers, it's very beautiful

Personally, I think it looks better, and the emotional lines are well written. Come on and write (ง•̀_•́)ง

I don't understand (Fenghua accent) that such a good novel has such a low rating! ? [Angry] Let me explain in advance, I have been reading for a long time. I have only been reading for a while, so my reading time is displayed so short.

This is a true and objective book review with a clear structure and substantial content that can help many book lovers: This book is super good!

It feels okay, to be honest

I tied it in one breath, it looks great

Lily is beautiful, hehe₍˄·͈༝·*₎◞ ̑̑

Beautiful and well written