Mecha Girl Transformation: Picked Up by an Ice-Cold Commander from the Start

Apart from feeling aggrieved, unhappy, and having all the bad points and shortcomings of the second game, there are no major problems. Other places are surprisingly good...? It has potential, maybe we can look at it again, it's toxic, but it's not impossible. To be honest, if you remove the emotional aspects, commanders, controls, collars, conspiracy, etc. It would definitely be a hundred times better than now if it only retains the combat pleasure and step-by-step upgrades without messy things. But now, I can only say that Shennong is still not good.

It feels like the protagonist's teammates have been upgraded as if they haven't been. There is no improvement at all. The protagonist has to rescue every mission. It feels like it is not as good as being alone. There are too many detailed descriptions, which sounds a bit tiring. There are some minor irritations at the end, but I can barely watch it.

Personally, I think this novel is a novel with obvious advantages and disadvantages. It's because the author accidentally dropped the rice when he first started writing it and rolled it several times on the floor. It was still delicious after removing the dusty part.

@ Mo Mask bro likes the machine girl. Overall, it's pretty good. This kind of fighting is so fun. Please read a few more. I can't stop reading it (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧ The poisonous points are harmless, except for being a little aggrieved. Come and taste it as soon as possible [Blow kiss][Blow kiss][Blow kiss]

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It's a very good book. It's a battle story about a robot girl wandering on the edge of life and death, but I hope to add some daily life with the team members. When writing the emotional line, there was a little lack of foreshadowing [heartfelt]

It's simple, biased, and the writing is excellent. There are almost no descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's subjugation. It is a story about the transformation of a robot girl that is purely about fighting. The emotional line of this article is not very important. It can be said that there is no clear confession or confirmation of the relationship until the ending. It is quite complex emotions, similar to the relationship between the Pokémon next door and the trainer? Haha, overall the writing is really good, the battle scenes are full of descriptions, the world view is perfectly created, and every supporting character is very vivid. It is a pity that there is almost no description of the character's appearance. This is the failure of the beautiful girl series. There are no problems in other parts. It is worth watching. I am looking forward to the second part. I have followed it, although it is only 50,000 words so far. . .

It's not particularly poisonous, but the protagonist's system provides very little improvement under normal conditions. Can it be strengthened?

Laolu, what are you doing? [Crying][crying][crying]

The writing is good, the plot is smooth, and the characterization is okay. The early plot is a bit unclear and even a little frustrating (maybe because I read too many cool stories). The middle and later stages are okay. If the front can be drastically changed, it will be perfect. If you just look at the back, it is really good. I can give it a 7.6 Out of 10.