Luo Jing of Xuan Zhou Dynasty was undercurrents. The orphans of the previous dynasty, the crisis of Shen Yuan, the struggle for imperial power, the hypocrisy of the divine court... A huge net is quietly tightening.
A young man from An Ning, a small border town, was forced into this bottomless whirlpool.
When close relatives become pawns and trust turns into sharp edges, how will he use the coldest knife, the most elegant sword, and the most unpredictable game to fight his way through this man-eating world and uncover the shocking secrets buried?
This is the ultimate confrontation about betrayal and protection, lies and truth, personal will and the rules of the world...
Reader comments
The writing is really good, the writing is good and logical, the characters are vivid, and the plot is also very attractive. However, the male protagonist has not yet revealed his martial arts skills, which may not be so enjoyable, so this is a good book that not many people have read yet, but it is actually very well written.
It still feels like the problem of most novice writers: they have a lot of words but very little story. The core of the novel is always the story, the succession and transition, and the rest is the modification of the story. I hope the author will find the right focus and keep up the good work!
I have read more than a hundred chapters. The author's writing is flawless. The protagonist is a widower and has a very novel perspective. The description of the investigation and autopsy is very professional and the details are well handled. The heroine has the strength and brains to be real and not artificial. The only shortcoming is that the plot advances too slowly. I personally feel that there are too many foreshadowings before each key plot, which is specifically reflected in various foreshadowings, especially the background of the male protagonist. In some major events that are key to the plot, the male protagonist's behavior makes people think that he has a huge background, and there are also very unclear hints in the foreshadowing. To be honest, sometimes it makes me a little annoyed. But overall it is a very good work and should not be buried like this
I have read the latest chapter. Hey, why are the stories between the male and female protagonists always so sadomasochistic? When will they recognize each other? Is it still serialized? Why didn't I find this book when it was finished? It would be nice to have some sweet plots. I don't know what the plot is going to be like and how many words I need to write. The author has worked hard.
I read more than 200 chapters in one go. It was very exciting and I liked it very much. The foggy atmosphere created by the novel was very enjoyable to read. It is still in the preliminary stage, the world view is just unfolding, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is beginning to take shape.
In fact, the writing style is very good, but if you write about solving a case, you can solve the case first, and then write about the plot layer by layer. It always feels like too many other plots are interspersed before the case is solved, which is a bit confusing, but in fact, the middle plot is also very interesting, which is a pity.
Why does such a beautiful novel only have a score of 6.2? Did the author do something bad [note]
It's great and I love reading it. I'm looking forward to the bigger second book. It's as good as ever. Come on, please update.
It's well written. The author has his own logical thinking, but he takes it too much for granted.
There is a sense of immersion and no drama.
The writing is good, between the newbie and the old-fashioned boy. .
Although some aspects are still a bit green, I think this book is already considered a good one among Tomatoes. The author will keep up the good work.
Very beautiful, I like it very much, the writing and plot are very good, recommended
Very good, very good. Come on.
Believe me, a 25-year old bookworm, this book is worth reading
After watching it for a long time, I was in a trance.
Nice plot and interesting
After watching half of it, I still don't know whether there is force or not. How can I survive in this world of high martial arts without force?
Looks good, I don't know why the score is so low
Good-looking people are rich and wealthy people
Nirvana in Fire plus the feeling of celebrating more than one year
I have no culture and can't speak beautiful words. I can only say: good-looking, good-looking. [Cool]
As far as writing is concerned, it is already better than most.
It's okay, but there are a bit too many narrations.
The plot is a bit slow, but the writing is okay
As a bookworm of more than ten years, this book is worth reading.
Very good, the story moves forward step by step and is well-founded.
So far, it looks good. The plot has not yet fully developed. I look forward to the follow-up development [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]
He is young, thoughtful, connected, and talks slowly.
The writing is really good, the writing is good and logical, the characters are vivid, and the plot is also very attractive. However, the male protagonist has not yet revealed his martial arts skills, which may not be so enjoyable, so this is a good book that not many people have read yet, but it is actually very well written.
It still feels like the problem of most novice writers: they have a lot of words but very little story. The core of the novel is always the story, the succession and transition, and the rest is the modification of the story. I hope the author will find the right focus and keep up the good work!
I have read more than a hundred chapters. The author's writing is flawless. The protagonist is a widower and has a very novel perspective. The description of the investigation and autopsy is very professional and the details are well handled. The heroine has the strength and brains to be real and not artificial. The only shortcoming is that the plot advances too slowly. I personally feel that there are too many foreshadowings before each key plot, which is specifically reflected in various foreshadowings, especially the background of the male protagonist. In some major events that are key to the plot, the male protagonist's behavior makes people think that he has a huge background, and there are also very unclear hints in the foreshadowing. To be honest, sometimes it makes me a little annoyed. But overall it is a very good work and should not be buried like this
I have read the latest chapter. Hey, why are the stories between the male and female protagonists always so sadomasochistic? When will they recognize each other? Is it still serialized? Why didn't I find this book when it was finished? It would be nice to have some sweet plots. I don't know what the plot is going to be like and how many words I need to write. The author has worked hard.
I read more than 200 chapters in one go. It was very exciting and I liked it very much. The foggy atmosphere created by the novel was very enjoyable to read. It is still in the preliminary stage, the world view is just unfolding, and the relationship between the male and female protagonists is beginning to take shape.
In fact, the writing style is very good, but if you write about solving a case, you can solve the case first, and then write about the plot layer by layer. It always feels like too many other plots are interspersed before the case is solved, which is a bit confusing, but in fact, the middle plot is also very interesting, which is a pity.
Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good
Why does such a beautiful novel only have a score of 6.2? Did the author do something bad [note]
It's great and I love reading it. I'm looking forward to the bigger second book. It's as good as ever. Come on, please update.
It's well written. The author has his own logical thinking, but he takes it too much for granted.
There is a sense of immersion and no drama.
The writing is good, between the newbie and the old-fashioned boy. .
Although some aspects are still a bit green, I think this book is already considered a good one among Tomatoes. The author will keep up the good work.
Very beautiful, I like it very much, the writing and plot are very good, recommended
Very good, very good. Come on.
Believe me, a 25-year old bookworm, this book is worth reading
After watching it for a long time, I was in a trance.
Nice plot and interesting
After watching half of it, I still don't know whether there is force or not. How can I survive in this world of high martial arts without force?
Looks good, I don't know why the score is so low
Good-looking people are rich and wealthy people
Nirvana in Fire plus the feeling of celebrating more than one year
I have no culture and can't speak beautiful words. I can only say: good-looking, good-looking. [Cool]
As far as writing is concerned, it is already better than most.
It's okay, but there are a bit too many narrations.
The plot is a bit slow, but the writing is okay
As a bookworm of more than ten years, this book is worth reading.
Very good, the story moves forward step by step and is well-founded.
So far, it looks good. The plot has not yet fully developed. I look forward to the follow-up development [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out] [Punch Out]
He is young, thoughtful, connected, and talks slowly.