Longmen Police Chronicle

The writing is really good, the author. . Although it doesn't follow the main plot, I feel like every character is brought to life. . . The fight scenes are written with a sense of déjà vu as if they were watching a Jackie Chan movie. . . I like you! ! Come on, brother who writes articles [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][sending heart][adoration]

A Hong Kong police film with a first-person world view of Arknights

The writing is really good, the writing style has a sense of immersion, and the plot also has its own concepts and ideas. The emotions are not overdone. This kind of fanfic is not embarrassing and not childish to read, which is very commendable.

The current viewing experience is good. The description of the Hong Kong gangster film is very appropriate, the narrative is clear, and the case has a sense of progression. However, every time the protagonist is alone with Chen, especially when the relationship heats up, unexpected events always interrupt him😡 Gua! I want to see the main character and Chen dating Zouya! (

The carefully polished work can be regarded as an Arknights fanfic that incorporates some personal settings that have been sacrificed for the plot. The specific characters that appear in the play include: Jiang from Longmen, the mixed-blood animals other than Sakaz, the disappeared Jiu (probably to rationalize Chen's position), the new generation of Longmen who are unfamiliar with each other, Tallulah who has not been mentioned, etc... (There are some good things that I have not mentioned, keywords: ABCD [sneaky smile]) Taken together, it can form a logical and self-consistent, there is no strange power and confusion, and there is no sensationalism. This is an article that is more biased towards different daily work. There are still many foreshadowings for the protagonist. For example, the interaction with the elder brother after arriving on the island is also part of what I am looking forward to. I hope the author will continue writing. This is one of the few Arknights fanfics that I can calm down and read, and delve into the follow-up plot and specific details.

I have read a lot of Porridge fans on Tomato. This book is by far one of the most comfortable to read. The plot design and character descriptions are very delicate. From many details, I can see that I have carefully polished the work. Especially many of the novels nowadays have an indescribable AI flavor, but this one does not. It gives me the feeling of chasing Porridge fans on Mao Station four or five years ago. I miss it very much. I like this novel very much and hope to continue writing it. Come on author, thank you for telling a good story

Arknights is a top-notch work by fellow fans. It has a very authentic Hong Kong film feel. The author's writing style is like memories. It's so beautiful. Don't interrupt like other works. I will keep watching it [crying] [crying] [crying]

It's surprisingly good-looking, and it can be said that it has a bit of the flavor of old police stories, although this is a police story. The protagonist of this book is a person with upright views. As of now, he does not have a harem and investigates cases honestly. He can be said to be a dutiful people's policeman. The relationship with Chen Sir also gradually developed. It was not love at first sight, but like a long stream of water, just the accumulation of bits and pieces in life. Come on.

It looks good and the writing is good, mainly because the plot of the case is very Hong Kong style, the writing is good, there is a female protagonist, and the emotional description of Lao Chen (it is just the emotional description of the plot of the case, it is more like the two protagonists). The proportion is not large, but the descriptions are interspersed in the plot. It seems that nothing has happened, but there is a sense of tacit understanding of an old couple. All in all, it is a novel that I like very much. (Please comment more or else this book will be lost. Please save the author! I don't want the author to stop updating!)

I read it all the way through. The writing is really good, several cases are very exciting, and the supporting characters such as the director and Li Zhaoyang are also written in a three-dimensional way, and the characters stand out. As for the emotional line, I personally like it better. It develops smoothly, and the protagonist and Chen's casual actions are also comfortable to watch. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

The book is a good book, and there is nothing wrong with its logic, but it is just too depressing, too depressing, too depressing! Chapter 10 was able to go to the hospital four times, which vividly demonstrated the customs and customs of the continent of Terra. Dragon Gate is as chaotic as the United States. There are all kinds of plots and battles, and the protagonist has little fighting power in the early stage, which is quite frustrating. But the writing is okay and the logic is smooth, but it's just too tiring and boring to read. It's awesome. The author who is in the third year of junior high school can write like this. It's really invincible. It's pure talent. Later on, the protagonist's strength improved, and his relationship with the heroine also improved significantly, which was sweet and sweet. Overall, it looks a lot better from behind. It's not so depressing anymore. Worth a five star hope to stick with it. [Adoration]

You said that the protagonist can sleep alone and get up and kill three of them when they are attacked. Then will Chen be taken down directly during the night attack? [Laughter] The book is very good, with a twist, warm and rhythmic but not just candy-filled. It's so delicious.

This is the first time I am immersed in a first-person novel. The descriptions are very delicate and warm, and the knife also makes me feel comfortable reading it (please beg the author to stop being a eunuch and slow down the update) [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's pretty good. The overall look and feel is pretty good. It should get better as the writing progresses (waiting for the main plot, integrating the sports plot, it should be very exciting). Don't stop before writing it. The overall logic of the plot is sound, but occasionally there are areas that cannot withstand careful scrutiny and need to be repaired (let's finish it first and then talk about it) Ah, yes, I forgot to add a sentence, please come on, author💪[Note]

The description of the characters' psychological activities and actions is quite natural, the rhythm of the plot advancement is very good and very smooth, the advantage of the first person is used very well, there is no common sense of isolation, and the subject matter is very interesting. A rare high-quality work, more like an original than a fan When reading, the picture is very strong, and a movie is playing in my mind. Just like the Hong Kong police and gangster films made in the early 1990s and 1990s. You wrote them well.

Without the setting of Arknights, this would be a good police novel, but what you can see in this novel is: the border police of the Dragon Kingdom grinding their weapons; the dragon gods and goddesses will be smoked by fire; the underworld lady who is molested by the gangsters; the outstanding graduates of the Guard Academy who do not know the rough stone skills; the former prince of the Yan Kingdom and the governor of Longmen is afraid of the capital of his country; the Rat King knows that foreign gangsters have received murder commissions from Longmen but has done nothing. None of them can give you a different kind of surprise. [Cover face]

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I have never played Zhou. This is the first Zhou book I have read. To be honest, I really don't understand the plot of the game. You can understand it after reading this book. It is also a good book if you read it directly as an urban suspense. It is like a Hong Kong-style police movie. Come on, author. I also want to see the ancestor of the protagonist and Chen Sir [I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying][I'm almost crying]

As an outsider (I only know the IP address of Arknights), I can quickly relate to the plot. The plot is mainly developed in the style of a Hong Kong police and gangster film, and the fight scenes are exciting. The current logic is reasonable and the writing is good. I look forward to the author's follow-up.

This book is written in a very novel way, not in the traditional third person, but in the first person. However, the plot is very comfortable to watch, and the inner details of the protagonist are well written. And there is a degree of relaxation, sweetness when it should be sweet, and knife when it should be sharp. Although there are some small details, they are innocuous and it is an excellent book.

A good-tasting police film based on the Arknights worldview

This book is really good to read. Although it is in the first person which I am not used to, it handles the plot very carefully. But being good is not the end. I hope the author will continue to work hard and become another Tomato fanfic.

As a rare cp book by Chen that makes people not angry at the time, it is still worth reading. The author's writing is good, and the plot arrangement is also very reasonable. The overall evaluation is from a large cup to an extra large cup. Pure love! My pure love! Oh ~ This is what I want to see...

Cool! Strength! Ba! OK! This is what I want to see!

The book is well written. It felt a bit messy at first, but the more I read, the better. The story became compact and the pace became faster. The author is writing this book in the style of a Hong Kong movie. The author must continue to write more.

The writing is delicate, the characters are very vivid, and basically non-toxic, and the content is also very interesting. There are no big problems with the portrayal of the protagonist, and there won't be any changes. However, the pace is too fast. Can you write more emotional scenes? There's not enough food in prison [crying]

This book is so good and I like it very much [Like][Like][Like][Like] I'm quite curious about the protagonist's identity [what]

Although there are still a few chapters left to read, what I have read has broken my limitations on the plot and allowed me to perfect the character image of Chen Huijie. Apart from the feeling that it is a bit unclear from the main timeline, it is quite good. One person can be more healthy if I recommend it [Adoration]

A very good novel, looking at this land and this city from the perspective of an ordinary person, using a uniform to fulfill his responsibilities. The style is lighthearted and joyful, and the logic is rigorous. The ridicule in the article is not only the true feelings of the characters, but also the beauty of the article. In short, no matter how you put it (Fenghua accent), it is a very good novel, which made my heart spin.

Not bad. It feels like watching a Hong Kong movie~(￣▽￣~)~ Haokande different batches