Navy: Thunderous Fruits at the Beginning, Sweeping the Old Era

It's very good-looking, and it has the same novelty as when I first started chasing One Piece. I gave up One Piece when I saw Wano Country, because I am the main character controller. I used to think that Luffy was as wise as a fool. When I saw that, I felt deceived. The image of the protagonist was completely ruined in my heart, and I couldn't follow it anymore. In this book, the protagonist Roque can be said to be a well-established Dongda man. His ideas, methods, and character are all in line with my understanding of the outstanding young people of Dongda. The navy he leads has gone on a completely different path from the original work, and he has corrected the future for several characters, a suitable future.

It's good-looking. The author is an experienced author. I guarantee it. In order to prevent five stars from not being included in the rating, I gave it four stars. If the author needs it, I will change it Keep up the good work, we all have a bright future I raised a Pikachu ／| /＼7 ∠＿/ / /│ / / / │Z ,＜／ /`ヽ │ヽ / Y` // ｲ●､●⊂⊃/ ()へ|＼ ｰ ､_ ィ │ ／／ / へ / ﾉ＜| ＼＼ _ﾉ(_／ │／／ 7|／ ＞―r￣￣`ｰ―＿ Like and touch

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very young and passionate, the Thunder Fruit is written very realistically, and the fighting scenes are exciting, (definitely not a gimmick) [Cool] I admit that I spoke too loudly

It's a very nice pirate fanfic, and I respect the author who loves the original work and loves life. Why is the rating only 5.7? Is it being suppressed? Come on, there will always be people who like to support you

Don't engage in mindless fun, focus on growth and layout. The protagonist moves from a boy on an empty island to the stage of the old era step by step. He interacts reasonably with classic characters such as Xia Qi, Whitebeard, and Rocks. The world view is highly restored and is suitable for readers who like steady pirate fan fiction.

I have read Chapter 31 so far, and as far as the beginning is concerned, it is a perfect work. The character design of the protagonist and the plot arrangement at the beginning are really silky smooth, like eating Dove. Born in Kongdao, he doesn't have a bitter and resentful background, and he doesn't pretend to be humorous. It's very refreshing to watch. The Thunder Fruit is developed perfectly, skipping the initial weak stage and allowing readers to step directly to the climax. The first step in the plot to enter the lower realm is to directly talk to Beehive Island, which is very exciting. A cannon is fired directly at the beginning. The character of the protagonist, whether talking to Rocks, Roger or Garp, is very human-like. Normal people would want to kill the other person when they meet, even if you know that the other person is a bad guy, but the problem is that the interests are not on you, and there is not so much suffering and hatred. In fact the protagonist is a very sober and mature character. And the background of this story is very good. It was a turbulent era, an era when everyone could succeed in anything. As far as the beginning is concerned, the protagonist is already the top occupier in the sea, and the following should be the layout, and then overthrow the world government, or use Luffy's energy to overthrow it, which is nothing more than pushing the timeline back a few decades. But from the beginning, it is a very good piece of work that catches the eye.

The author's restoration of the details of the original work is amazing! The setting of the sky island, the hidden plot of the Rocks Pirates, and the extension of the domineering system can be seen in every detail. Readers who like to delve into the world of One Piece will definitely be impressed by the details of this book.

I have only read more than 150 chapters so far. This novel started to get on the right track from the Valley of the Gods. I feel that the author made this dumpling just for this dish of vinegar. The length of the previous chapters of the Valley of the Gods can only be said to be normal, but the subsequent chapters begin to show his own thoughts. For me, fan fiction can be divided into three stages. First, it has enough logic and literary talent to write its own style. Second, it can reflect the author's personal will and resonate with readers. Third, it attracts complete strangers to read the original work. Most of Tomato's fanfics can't even reach the first stage, but this one is already on the way to the second stage. The only pity may be that the author has half a grasp of the plot and rhythm. At first glance, it seems that he has written a lot, but in fact not much is attractive. Summary: Come on, I hope you can write better. What this novel gave me was that at a dinner party, he first served a bowl of brown rice, which was tasteless and unappetizing; then he finally served a side dish to appetize (that is, the dozen or so pictures of the Valley of the Gods), and then started serving meat dishes directly. Let's not talk about the color, aroma and taste of the dishes. Isn't the order of serving them wrong? Besides, after the meat dishes have been served, why do you keep serving the meat dishes? After reading more than 200 chapters, I started to feel "bored". I can't say it's not written well, it's just that the food started not to my liking. Four stars because of the difficulty of writing.

The protagonist is not Long Aotian, but uses wisdom and perception to break the situation within the system. It not only retains the background of the navy, but also writes a different sense of rebellion. The portrayal of Zefa and the three generals is particularly amazing.

A rare pirate fic that starts on an empty island. The protagonist has top-notch knowledge and skills, and won the Thunder Fruit in advance without any brainless crushing. It did not offend the aboriginal people of the original work, but instead reconciled the centuries-old conflict between Sandia and Sky Island. The Golden Bell section was written with warmth, the Sky Island Shell technology line was also very innovative, and the pace was gentle and not draggy.

The setting of this fan novel is novel and logical. The protagonist does not rely on mindless cheating, but uses fruit + domineering + sky island shell technology to steadily become stronger. He also promotes the development of Sky Island and mediates centuries-old conflicts. There are both passionate battles and warm daily life. The characters are not just human beings, and the more you watch, the more you become obsessed with it.

The core of teenage hot-blooded comics has always been to teach people the most precious things, those positive emotions, to teach people to be positive, to continue to work hard in the face of setbacks, difficulties and failures, and to be full of hope for every day in the future. I have read a lot of pirate novels, and the protagonist in this one has become my favorite protagonist. While showing off with strong strength, the most important thing is to pave the way for the future. Those seeds carefully planted will bloom the most beautiful, pure and unique flowers in the future. I hope everyone who likes the core of hot-blooded comics will have their own pure, beautiful and powerful core to spend a youthful life of their own.

There are plot details ahead, but fortunately it was explained clearly in time! The short comic story line is written since the Rocks era. It is a brand new story belonging to the protagonist! No fighting power! From start to finish! The protagonist expounds the concept of justice to the core, teaches by words and deeds, and changes many tragedies and makes up for regrets! Worth a look!

"And from this moment on, the butterfly's wings are already flapping. The story from now on will lead to a completely different world: You may see Shanks with his arms intact, Whitebeard who is old but still strong, Kaido and Lingling who are sympathetic to their siblings, Blackbeard who is ambitious but has never betrayed, Garp who puts family ties above justice, Zefa who has taken another path, and... The new "three generals". All of this is just because of the appearance of one person, which moved the first fulcrum of history. "

Although the thoughts of several characters have been changed, the overall plot has not changed. I have written more than 200 chapters, and I have been enlarging the plot, improving strength and prestige. If I fight against the Celestial Dragons later, there will definitely be many followers, and it will be more reasonable. According to this development, the protagonist can become a spiritual leader through combat power.

I have read a lot of One Piece fanfics, and basically all of them are at the upper limit. No matter how good the writing is, the writing, fighting scenes, and detailed descriptions are better, because within the framework of the world of One Piece, you can either be a pirate, write about girls, have invincible combat power, and defeat the Navy Celestial Dragons, or be a Navy and follow the plot, there is nothing new. It can be seen that the author is a fan of Lao Hai. He added his own ideas and integrated them into the plot. He is very powerful. Very recommended.

It's rare to see a pirate fanfic that focuses on the Rocks era and avoids the top-level war plot on the bad streets. In the early stage, the Sky Island Line was well laid out, and the section that resolved the conflict between Sandia and the Sky Island aborigines was very warm, and it broke away from the routine of simply fighting monsters and upgrading. Later, he arrived at Beehive Island and met a group of legendary pirates, and the conflict was full of tension. The only minor drawback is that some of the supporting roles are a bit shallow, but the main plot is complete and smooth, and it is worth checking out for fans of the game who like melee battles between heroes in the old era.

It's a very solid book among Pirates fans. The protagonist travels through an island and is born with knowledge. After taking the thunder fruit, he steadily becomes stronger. It's not exaggerated or embarrassing. The plot is just too slow. I hope it can be faster.

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It's very good. I read the latest chapter in one go. I've been looking for pirate articles recently, and this is the only one I read in one go. Everyone has their own character and story, some of which fit the original work, and some of which fit the original work but with part of their character or direction changed, which is great. The colorful group portraits will not overshadow the protagonist's brilliance. [Like] I would like to give some advice to the author. If you have time, you can write a few more sentences about the various arrangements, backup plans, and plans of the protagonist in the article. I feel that this will make it clearer.

It avoids the over-the-top plot of many fandoms and directly writes about Rocks' peak period. The perspective is very novel. The Sky Island line is completely laid out, the idea of ​​developing Thor's abilities is reasonable, the rivalry scenes between the major veteran players are atmospheric, and the updates are stable, making it suitable for slow pursuit.

Normally I would not be in a hurry to evaluate fan fiction, especially when the original work is not finished yet, but this book is really exciting to read, it is beautiful, very beautiful, and so is the author, who has mastered the core of AI drawing [Like][Like][Like] I see people below are getting anxious. Some Pirates fans are like this. Either they only have debates in their minds, start discussing the value of fruits, and start discussing whose combat power is so and so. The combat power system of Pirates has collapsed in the early and mid-term. Let me put it bluntly, this is to fill up the space for second creation, okay? If the second creation does not change it, it will disrespect the original work. Or the three views follow the pirates, and they really only learned the unfavorable values ​​​​from One Piece, and they are proud to scold the AI ​​here. What is actually the case? They still only write articles criticizing AI, but they don't tell where they know it's AI. They can always tell it's AI at a glance, but they don't explain things that can be seen at a glance. To put it bluntly, they just find another reason to criticize the author.

It's really beautiful, the writing is delicate and respects the original work, and every character is very true to his or her personality! The thunder fruit is really cool! It really gets better and better later on, especially the author's pictures, which are so awesome!

A very different pirate novel, worth reading For example, when you watch One Piece, it usually involves joining Luffy or joining the navy. Anyway, the big time is usually close to Luffy. Even if it is done earlier, it will still be invincible on the original basis. The biggest point is that the whole process looks like a different One Piece. He talks about not killing Zefa, turning into a must-kill Zefa, and Akainu changing from the age of hatred to kindness. He has changed some of the more important protagonists. In this case, the look and feel will be different, and it is very strange. For newbies, this is very difficult, because they have to ensure that the character deviates from the original plot while also keeping up with the original general plot. Personally, I don't feel like it's a random rush, but a pirate story with flesh and blood and real emotions. I originally thought it was a random change, but I didn't expect that the changes were well-founded and very interesting. I've seen more than 200 pictures from the first one. It's very interesting and I'm fascinated by it. Newbies who haven't watched One Piece can also watch it. The plot is not very interesting, and you can basically read it. I can recommend it.

I have read all four of the author's One Piece books, and I still support them.

Personally, I think the naval story is very good, and Zefa's bond with Akainu and Kizaru is also handled very well. What surprised me the most was that I actually won Barrett [Adoration] Can you please do it faster and more every day? [Smile] I have to raise books again [Smile] [Smile]

It's so good-looking and reasonable. The protagonist Rock has eaten the Thunder Fruit for 6 years and stayed on the Sky Island for 6 years. At the age of 16, his body has not fully grown. He does not know the Armed Color, and the Overlord Color has not awakened. He does not know the various high-level applications of the Armed Color and the Overlord Color. He just went to Qinghai from the Sky Island, and he crushed the Golden Lion. He is only a little weaker than the peak Rocks who is about 40 years old. It is incredible, it is incredible.

I feel that the Split Fruit is a very, very potential fruit. The initial ability can only split oneself. After awakening, can't it be used to split others? WOC, use it to show off, play as a Su Nuo, make a gesture to others, and then say "Explanation", the opposite side will split, as if receiving a slash, it is so cool.

How can I put it this way? It is a good book in the One Piece series. It has clear fruit abilities and distinct characters. It does not blindly pursue mindless fun. It can be said that it is the best One Piece novel I have read so far. It is very worth appreciating.

Emmmmm. . . Not bad, I can keep watching [eating melon]