Navy: The Rumble-Rumble Fruit from the Start, Sweeping the Old Era

It's very good-looking, and it has the same novelty as when I first started chasing One Piece. I gave up One Piece when I saw Wano Country, because I am the main character controller. I used to think that Luffy was as wise as a fool. When I saw that, I felt deceived. The image of the protagonist was completely ruined in my heart, and I couldn't follow it anymore. In this book, the protagonist Roque can be said to be a well-established Dongda man. His ideas, methods, and character are all in line with my understanding of the outstanding young people of Dongda. The navy he leads has gone on a completely different path from the original work, and he has corrected the future for several characters, a suitable future.

The writing is very good, the protagonist is very young and passionate, the Thunder Fruit is written very realistically, and the fighting scenes are exciting, (definitely not a gimmick) [Cool] I admit that I spoke too loudly

It's good-looking. The author is an experienced author. I guarantee it. In order to prevent five stars from not being included in the rating, I gave it four stars. If the author needs it, I will change it Keep up the good work, we all have a bright future I raised a Pikachu ／| /＼7 ∠＿/ / /│ / / / │Z ,＜／ /`ヽ │ヽ / Y` // ｲ●､●⊂⊃/ ()へ|＼ ｰ ､_ ィ │ ／／ / へ / ﾉ＜| ＼＼ _ﾉ(_／ │／／ 7|／ ＞―r￣￣`ｰ―＿ Like and touch

It's a very nice pirate fanfic, and I respect the author who loves the original work and loves life. Why is the rating only 5.7? Is it being suppressed? Come on, there will always be people who like to support you

Don't engage in mindless fun, focus on growth and layout. The protagonist moves from a boy on an empty island to the stage of the old era step by step. He interacts reasonably with classic characters such as Xia Qi, Whitebeard, and Rocks. The world view is highly restored and is suitable for readers who like steady pirate fan fiction. Not bad, not bad, it will be 600 chapters soon. I didn't expect to follow it for so long [eating melon]

I have read Chapter 31 so far, and as far as the beginning is concerned, it is a perfect work. The character design of the protagonist and the plot arrangement at the beginning are really silky smooth, like eating Dove. Born in Kongdao, he doesn't have a bitter and resentful background, and he doesn't pretend to be humorous. It's very refreshing to watch. The Thunder Fruit is developed perfectly, skipping the initial weak stage and allowing readers to step directly to the climax. The first step in the plot to enter the lower realm is to directly talk to Beehive Island, which is very exciting. A cannon is fired directly at the beginning. The character of the protagonist, whether talking to Rocks, Roger or Garp, is very human-like. Normal people would want to kill the other person when they meet, even if you know that the other person is a bad guy, but the problem is that the interests are not on you, and there is not so much suffering and hatred. In fact the protagonist is a very sober and mature character. And the background of this story is very good. It was a turbulent era, an era when everyone could succeed in anything. As far as the beginning is concerned, the protagonist is already the top occupier in the sea, and the following should be the layout, and then overthrow the world government, or use Luffy's energy to overthrow it, which is nothing more than pushing the timeline back a few decades. But from the beginning, it is a very good piece of work that catches the eye.

The author's restoration of the details of the original work is amazing! The setting of the sky island, the hidden plot of the Rocks Pirates, and the extension of the domineering system can be seen in every detail. Readers who like to delve into the world of One Piece will definitely be impressed by the details of this book.

I have only read more than 150 chapters so far. This novel started to get on the right track from the Valley of the Gods. I feel that the author made this dumpling just for this dish of vinegar. The length of the previous chapters of the Valley of the Gods can only be said to be normal, but the subsequent chapters begin to show his own thoughts. For me, fan fiction can be divided into three stages. First, it has enough logic and literary talent to write its own style. Second, it can reflect the author's personal will and resonate with readers. Third, it attracts complete strangers to read the original work. Most of Tomato's fanfics can't even reach the first stage, but this one is already on the way to the second stage. The only pity may be that the author has half a grasp of the plot and rhythm. At first glance, it seems that he has written a lot, but in fact not much is attractive. Summary: Come on, I hope you can write better. What this novel gave me was that at a dinner party, he first served a bowl of brown rice, which was tasteless and unappetizing; then he finally served a side dish to appetize (that is, the dozen or so pictures of the Valley of the Gods), and then started serving meat dishes directly. Let's not talk about the color, aroma and taste of the dishes. Isn't the order of serving them wrong? Besides, after the meat dishes have been served, why do you keep serving the meat dishes? After reading more than 200 chapters, I started to feel "bored". I can't say it's not written well, it's just that the food started not to my liking. Four stars because of the difficulty of writing.

The protagonist is not Long Aotian, but uses wisdom and perception to break the situation within the system. It not only retains the background of the navy, but also writes a different sense of rebellion. The portrayal of Zefa and the three generals is particularly amazing.

A rare pirate fic that starts on an empty island. The protagonist has top-notch knowledge and skills, and won the Thunder Fruit in advance without any brainless crushing. It did not offend the aboriginal people of the original work, but instead reconciled the centuries-old conflict between Sandia and Sky Island. The Golden Bell section was written with warmth, the Sky Island Shell technology line was also very innovative, and the pace was gentle and not draggy.