Open the Door! I Am Your Captain Ah Wei!

Yes, I like the relationship part better, it's pure love! [Note] Mudd! The clean cousin didn't want it, but found a widow, speechless!

I've read part of it, and let's talk about it briefly. Generally speaking, it's pretty good. The shortcoming is that the emotional aspect is not very good, and I like to pull back and forth. How can I put it, the pulling is okay, but using misunderstandings to pull the male and female protagonists back is a bit like the flavor of early novels. Also, the description of some characters is a bit out of the scope of the movie. It may be that my understanding is different from the author's, but overall it is worth watching. Finally, here is some advice. Since you are cheating, let the protagonist become stronger. You don't need to rely on others. Accept what a woman says when you meet her. You don't have to force yourself. Just focus on one and don't refuse or take the initiative. In this way, there will be no conflict if you focus on cultivating Taoism. Finally, cheers to the author, writing a book is not easy, I hope it will get better and better.

It's pretty good\(//∇//)\, and it's considered a masterpiece among zombie novels. As long as you don't make a mess of combat power, emotions, and merit points later on, and keep going at this pace, it's basically the same. It's like this in Tomato [like]. Finally, I want to ask, is it a single female protagonist or multiple female protagonists? Currently I see Liu Ruyan, will Ren Tingting accept it in the end? It's best to have pure love, just Liu Ruyan is enough. If you add other things, it's better to be reasonable and reasonable. Don't be distracted by looking at women, otherwise it will appear that the protagonist's feelings are very cheap.

As a bookworm who has read more than 5,000 hours on Tomato and rarely gives ratings, let me comment on this novel objectively! First of all, I personally like this novel very much, because I like the theme of zombie movies, and this novel is very in line with my expectations. After all, I have long been tired of reading the Long Aotian type. Secondly, the plot of this novel has very good coherence, and there is no sense of disconnection at all. The plot is well described, the characters are vividly described, and there are no problems with the writing. Finally, I hope the author will stick to it, because I am looking forward to whether this novel will bring me bigger surprises after the side plot ends! I wish Xiaoli's new book a hit, I will always support you! Ignore those idiots who only use negative reviews to vent their emotions.

It's rare to see Chuan Cheng Awei's books, and I'm quite interested in them. The cautiousness in the early stage of writing and the desire for merit points are described in great detail. Don't pay too much attention to Heizi's evaluation. Remember to update more [laughs] [shy]

After reading the existing chapters, it's actually pretty good and not as bad as the comment section said. Although the protagonist is indeed late in cultivation, he doesn't suffer much. It's a bit novel for half an ordinary person to rely on knowing the plot to plot against zombies in Jiu Shu's novels, which generally start semi-invincible. The character portrayal of the original characters is very good and has some details. Generally speaking, it can be regarded as an average Jiu Shu novel on Tomato. You must write down your prison work.

The plot is ok and engaging. The protagonist has an ordinary person's level of thinking, which is okay (it's not completely bad, and it's thankless to be the master who died), but it's disappointing. Even Ren Tingting should not touch it [facepalm], but I still accepted it after reading the author's comments.

Dear gentlemen, please use your fortune fingers and give me a five-star review. Thank you all [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] The rating was a little low when it first came out, but it will increase in the future. Thank you again to the gentlemen who have always supported Xiaoli for your company so many days and nights...

Very interesting, the plot is smooth and not exaggerated

To evaluate it objectively, because I was too deep into the movie and added the system and cultivation settings, it lacked the realism of fist-to-flesh punching in the movie, and it was very out of touch. Of course, this is also a common problem in fan fiction, where the sense of substitution is not strong. This type of fan fiction is not easy to write. The movie is too profound, making it difficult to get involved and get involved in the drama. However, I respect the author's efforts.

It's pretty good. The way the characters speak is pretty good.

The writing is good, and the plot of Ren Tingting feels good. Human nature is selfish. Since there is a system, any woman will only affect the speed of drawing the sword. If you don't have the ability and money, finding a woman will only harm yourself and others.

It's okay so far

I have seen more than 20 pictures, and they are not poisonous at the moment. You can take a look.

It's beautiful and well written, keep up the good work.

Support you

After seeing Chapter 59, look again

Brat, stop being a eunuch, come on

Not bad, worth a look

Make more funny plots.

Very good. Keep up the good work.

The author is not a eunuch

I'm afraid the author doesn't know what it means to communicate in a shallow and deep way [Thinking]

There are not many books that describe Ah Wei, but this book is pretty good about Ah Wei.

The content is exciting and good. I just hope that the protagonist can quickly practice and become a monk. Also, does the main character have multiple female protagonists?

The plot is okay, but the description of the girl is a bit uncomfortable, delicate and so on.

Real and objective, multi-dimensional description, clear structure The overall look and feel of this book is very good, and it reads very smoothly without feeling boring at all. The character of the protagonist is carefully created, his personality is distinct and three-dimensional, and his actions are logical, making it easy for people to like him. The rhythm of the story is just right, the plot advances naturally and smoothly, the large and small plots are well connected, and the foreshadowing is cleverly arranged, which always arouses the interest of reading. The interactions between the characters are delicately depicted, the overall worldview is complete and full, and there is no logical breakdown. The writing style is easy to understand, and the descriptions of various scenes are full of atmosphere and have a strong sense of substitution. Whether it is daily scenes or big scenes, they are all written with a sense of picture. There was no frustrating plot throughout the whole process, and it was very enjoyable to watch. The subject matter is interesting and the content is substantial. It is worth updating slowly. It is recommended for fans of the same genre to read. I look forward to the author steadily updating more exciting content. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

It's pretty good. If you don't like it, you don't have to watch it. Don't slander it.

It's interesting to read this novel

If you don't accept this, what can you do if you don't accept that? Hurry up and change the outline and give me a big collection [shy]