After Lily Potter gave birth to Harry, she had a daughter as well. The girl had the same golden-brown eyes as her father and the same red hair as her mother. Born frail, she was named Chloe by her mother, meaning “tender shoot” and “new life,” as well as symbolizing tremendous vitality.
The writing is quite good. Those who like HP fan fiction can read it. It contains the author's own unique thinking and novel creativity. The protagonist is also well-shaped and the character traits are well-developed. The protagonist is not raised very high all at once, but the growth process of the protagonist is slowly written out. But the ending is a bit rushed. I hope the author can improve it later, such as the final ending of Draco and Severis.
Recommended Recommended😘
It's quite nice to watch, the setting is good, and there are no major flaws. It's just that the sentence pattern "It's not... But..." Is used too much. There are also many similar meanings. Especially starting from Chapter 6, it's a bit annoying to hear the sentence "It's not..." From time to time while listening to the book.
It's not clear, the character's name is wrong, it's said that the heroine looks like Lily and has brown eyes and hair, and Cedric's death was not mentioned at the cemetery.
It's actually pretty good, but it's so confusing. Lupin's patronus around chapter 4 is wrong🤔I don't know what happens next.
It's pretty good-looking, I personally think it's pretty good
The writing is quite good. Those who like HP fan fiction can read it. It contains the author's own unique thinking and novel creativity. The protagonist is also well-shaped and the character traits are well-developed. The protagonist is not raised very high all at once, but the growth process of the protagonist is slowly written out. But the ending is a bit rushed. I hope the author can improve it later, such as the final ending of Draco and Severis. Recommended Recommended😘
It's quite nice to watch, the setting is good, and there are no major flaws. It's just that the sentence pattern "It's not... But..." Is used too much. There are also many similar meanings. Especially starting from Chapter 6, it's a bit annoying to hear the sentence "It's not..." From time to time while listening to the book.
It's not clear, the character's name is wrong, it's said that the heroine looks like Lily and has brown eyes and hair, and Cedric's death was not mentioned at the cemetery.
It's actually pretty good, but it's so confusing. Lupin's patronus around chapter 4 is wrong🤔I don't know what happens next.
It's pretty good-looking, I personally think it's pretty good