Uchiha Itachi Aboard Whitebeard's Ship

The characters are all in line with the design and are high-quality fan fiction. The only flaw is that Itachi and Ace chase Blackbeard and walk through the islands that Luffy has walked backwards. There is not only one route for the return of the Grand Line, but it has to be the one that Luffy has walked through. It is a little bit. And the solution used is basically the same as the original work. It feels like the original protagonist has been robbed of his luck. Itachi saved the Empress' sister, and then the Empress fell in love with Itachi. Ace carried Itachi on his back to climb the snowy mountain to find a doctor. It was a complete copy of the original plot. I like Luffy very much, so I couldn't bear this behavior that robbed Luffy of the highlight of the original plot.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist (it's not impossible if Izumi comes)

It's really well written!!! Originally, I thought that Itachi's character and personality would not be able to be integrated into the pirates. Who knew that the author controlled it very well. The Itachi and Ace Whitebeard in the novel felt like they were actually reading the original work. The picture is full of charm. Please update it quickly!!!!

It's good-looking, very good-looking, Uchiha Itachi's image has not collapsed, and his relationship with Ace is deep. And the author wrote about the emotional aspect of Uchiha, which is very good.

Not much to say about combat power, settings, etc. In this novel, I saw the story of two worlds burdened with various problems and longing for redemption, and the story of mutual redemption. I think this is enough. I'm not a Itachi fan, but Itachi made me feel uneasy when I watched Naruto. I'm not an Ace fan either, but Ace also made me uncomfortable when I watched One Piece. Nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory. After seeing too many BAD ENDs, I like HAPPY ENDs when reading novels. I felt really happy when I saw the story of mutual redemption in this book.

At present, the author's skills are clear. There is no obvious problem with the perfect character design. The next step is to write the plot with the white group and the performance of the one-on-seven combat power, and how to deal with Itachi's setting of the eternal kaleidoscope. I think the most reasonable way is to find Beggar Punk. I have seen a story about Wang Wen and Wang Wen Pirates before, and it was very good with the same approach but the same effect.

The subject matter is novel, the description is vivid, and the change of the protagonist can be clearly seen. It is a book with potential 👍👍👍

It is an excellent book. The characters are very well created. It also restores the different personalities of the pirates and Itachi as much as possible. The plot is reasonable and has no poisonous points. The transition between the old and new eras is well described! Looking forward to future plot

The bond between Itachi and Ace is sincere and unobtrusive, a journey of Itachi's redemption, a wind from the ninja world blowing towards the pirates, how far will it fly? Orochimaru is the observer of Sasuke's wind in the ninja world, and we are the witnesses of Itachi's wind in the pirate world, and the author is undoubtedly the best writer

Thatchi is still weak. The front is very good, but Itachi's strength is a bit beyond my expectation. It feels a bit weak. Is it because the strength of Naruto and One Piece cannot be compared or because Itachi's strength at this period is like this. Looking at the long review, some people said that he and Ace have gone through Luffy's journey. The empress fell in love with Itachi, so I didn't continue reading. I can't accept that the highlight of the original protagonist was taken away. If you don't mind this, you can continue reading. The praise is still very high.