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The characters are all in line with the design and are high-quality fan fiction. The only flaw is that Itachi and Ace chase Blackbeard and walk through the islands that Luffy has walked backwards. There is not only one route for the return of the Grand Line, but it has to be the one that Luffy has walked through. It is a little bit. And the solution used is basically the same as the original work. It feels like the original protagonist has been robbed of his luck. Itachi saved the Empress' sister, and then the Empress fell in love with Itachi. Ace carried Itachi on his back to climb the snowy mountain to find a doctor. It was a complete copy of the original plot. I like Luffy very much, so I couldn't bear this behavior that robbed Luffy of the highlight of the original plot.

I hope there won't be a female protagonist (it's not impossible if Izumi comes)

It's really well written! ! ! Originally, I thought that Itachi's character and personality would not be able to be integrated into the pirates. Who knew that the author controlled it very well. The Itachi and Ace Whitebeard in the novel felt like they were actually reading the original work. The picture is full of charm. Please update it quickly! ! ! !

It's good-looking, very good-looking, Uchiha Itachi's image has not collapsed, and his relationship with Ace is deep. And the author wrote about the emotional aspect of Uchiha, which is very good.

Not much to say about combat power, settings, etc. In this novel, I saw the story of two worlds burdened with various problems and longing for redemption, and the story of mutual redemption. I think this is enough. I'm not a Itachi fan, but Itachi made me feel uneasy when I watched Naruto. I'm not an Ace fan either, but Ace also made me uncomfortable when I watched One Piece. Nine times out of ten, life is unsatisfactory. After seeing too many BAD ENDs, I like HAPPY ENDs when reading novels. I felt really happy when I saw the story of mutual redemption in this book.

At present, the author's skills are clear. There is no obvious problem with the perfect character design. The next step is to write the plot with the white group and the performance of the one-on-seven combat power, and how to deal with Itachi's setting of the eternal kaleidoscope. I think the most reasonable way is to find Beggar Punk. I have seen a story about Wang Wen and Wang Wen Pirates before, and it was very good with the same approach but the same effect.

The subject matter is novel, the description is vivid, and the change of the protagonist can be clearly seen. It is a book with potential [Like][Like][Like]

Thatchi is still weak. The front is very good, but Itachi's strength is a bit beyond my expectation. It feels a bit weak. Is it because the strength of Naruto and One Piece cannot be compared or because Itachi's strength at this period is like this. Looking at the long review, some people said that he and Ace have gone through Luffy's journey. The empress fell in love with Itachi, so I didn't continue reading. I can't accept that the highlight of the original protagonist was taken away. If you don't mind this, you can continue reading. The praise is still very high.

It is an excellent book. The characters are very well created. It also restores the different personalities of the pirates and Itachi as much as possible. The plot is reasonable and has no poisonous points. The transition between the old and new eras is well described! Looking forward to future plot

The bond between Itachi and Ace is sincere and unobtrusive, a journey of Itachi's redemption, a wind from the ninja world blowing towards the pirates, how far will it fly? Orochimaru is the observer of Sasuke's wind in the ninja world, and we are the witnesses of Itachi's wind in the pirate world, and the author is undoubtedly the best writer

Personally, I think the author should give the white group a captain? If Itachi is not suitable, you can let Ace be the heir. After all, Ace is already the invisible prince. It is estimated that Whitebeard wants Ace to be the heir. The other captains should also be vaguely aware of this matter. The pirate team does not need to change its name, but it still needs a captain. Ace is actually quite suitable. Itachi would also be good as a Rayleigh-style deputy.

The writing is so good. Although I have not read One Piece, the characters written by the author are very immersive. Sometimes I even want to cry. I have already fallen in love with Whitebeard. The score of this book cannot be so low!

It's really good to watch, the plot is very exciting, not OOC at all, it's emotional and fleshy, everyone seems to have come alive from the book, I'm really looking forward to the subsequent plot, so! ! ! ! ! ! Author, when are you going to be resurrected? ! ! ! _(:3∠❀)_

I like this article very much, but I think the author can slightly change the number of times he uses kaleidoscope, because Itachi is the type with a high IQ and will not use skills so casually.

The writing is very nice. If you can't use necromancy, then Uchiha Itachi hides in the crow's eyes and the other god cannot be used, then a very powerful skill is missing. Then, Itachi's eyes are not eternal. If you use your eyes too much, you may go blind. And more importantly, the blood stain disease must be cured. Because the battery life of ferrets is relatively poor, you can try to create a fantasy beast species, strengthen the body, and become a Pro max healthy ferret. Then I couldn't even imagine who among the pirates could play his particularly sinister skills. 1. Ichenami 2. Izanagi 3. Shiquan Sword Hachisha Mirror

It is not inferior to Sister Juan's double divine power, and even has the potential to surpass it in some aspects. It is indeed very beautiful and fits the character very well. The combat power system seems to be pretty good now, and I look forward to the update.

The story is very interesting. The protagonist does not interfere too much with Luffy's plot. It has its own original plot. The original characters are also well created. The bond between the protagonist and Ace is also very burning. It is considered a masterpiece among Pirates fans. Come on, author! Five-star gift [sending heart] [sending heart] [sending heart]

Very good fanfic

Wow, it's really awesome. It's really cool for me to see.

It looks good and fits my understanding of Itachi. I hope it can keep it up.

The writing is really beautiful. This is the most beautiful book I have ever read◇

The author has an accurate grasp of the character's personality and behavior, and the fights are not like other fans who only call out names. The protagonist's combat power is not outrageous, and there are traces of upgrades. I read it in one sitting, a good Tomato Shao fan novel.

The author writes very well. I have never watched Naruto. I just went to Douyin to search for Uchiha Itachi's character introduction before watching it. The characters written by the author are very full of personality. At least in my opinion, I have the desire to continue reading [Like]

It's very beautiful, the characters, especially the emotions, are well drawn. It's not really a god-level fanfic, but it gives people who have also read Sea of ​​Fire hope to save those regrets. In my opinion, it is definitely a good book that suits my taste.

Super pretty! Come on

Real or fake? Today is the fifth update to buy gifts. You must buy gifts.

Okay, cure my picky eater

It's very beautiful. The author should keep updating it [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

My God, it's so beautiful. It completely matches my imagination. I can't get enough of it. Come on, author. I like One vs. Seven and Ace so much. The characters are so perfect. This plot is really awesome! So cute

It's pretty good-looking, and there aren't any confusing emotional lines. The description of One Dozen Seven-Sang is very good, my wife is waiting for you to come back! I really want to know the future of Itachi-Sang! I will introduce everyone (Hokage's bond) to Ace Luffy and the others.