[The WW division has just started, and the three unit stories have been completed]
Pure Love Zerg 1v1, contains a variety of flavors for you to choose from, sweet cookie bedtime stories~
The new marshal of the empire met a male insect in the wasteland.
He is tall and tall, with jet-black hair flying in the violent snowstorm on the Mulinde border, and a pair of golden eyes as cold as a snake.
He should step forward and protect the fragile male insect from the star beast tide back to the main star——
"Stay away, pretty."
The male insect was agile and agile. He jumped up lightly and punched the star beast's spine downwards with two fists. With a wave of his hand, he violently suppressed the army female team that was supposed to rush forward to save him.
What kind of male insect is this?
The marshal was stunned.
Very capable, very flamboyant, young, unscrupulous, and rampant.
Until this male insect held his hand, kissed him, and escaped from Wen's home planet with him.
The marshal was shocked to realize——
It seems like I have been tied up on a pirate ship by a perverted male insect that is always pressing down on me and sucking him non-stop!
Showing off the power of force is explosive, I am unhappy and no one can live longer. The young master has a bad temper, an SS-level male insect
Unit article, there is also a cheerful and harmless white-cut black male x a coquettish spirit full of evil
Gentle, calm, easy-going and peaceful insect x ambitious and arrogant general (ing)
Playboy sweet-talks male insect
Desireless, aloof beauty x cold male insect x old-fashioned, shy and thin-skinned former marshal of the empire (completed)
Reader comments
The reason for giving five stars is that there is no need to give four stars. It is a very typical cool story and setting. At least Mr. Xie's article is a typical bking, with a good life that makes people jealous. Typical fast food be like. But this thing is a common problem, so four stars are not necessary.
The writing style is somewhat overrated for its sophistication, but at least it's not that novice.
, The writing style is sophisticated, the tone is sweet, the protagonist has a sharp tongue, the supporting characters also have a sharp tongue, they are in the same vein, there are many CPs, the wife is lively, cheerful and cute, the wife has great praise [laughing] but it is a bit short and concise
It seems to be pretty good at the moment. One point will be deducted for writing. Sometimes after describing character number one, character number two will be mentioned, and then suddenly a new paragraph will be written using the pronoun "he" and it will be number one. The reading is not smooth. There are also some adjectives that are used, but I feel that they do not describe anything, but overall it is good. I will come back and change the rating if it becomes smoother later.
Hahaha, I quite like my wife's writing style. It has a sense of translation. Maybe it's due to the word order and word choice. Moreover, Escher's character is like a little bug that I like very much. I have been criticizing little females for a long time. A gentle and gentle kitten with a little bit of my own personality is quite good.
Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can't help but express my feelings. It's super, super, super, super, super super. It's so beautiful, and the setting inside is so delicious. It's so sweet. This book made me like the Zerg setting, which rarely reads Zerg books. [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS] Extremely delicious [love][love][love][love]
Very cute article
It's basically tied. From my personal point of view, the characters and plot are very interesting, but the wording and sentence making are a little less smooth, and sometimes the personal reference is a bit confusing, which makes people feel confused. However, it is obvious that the author has made great progress from the beginning to the present. Looking forward to the author's more exciting follow-up [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]
I haven't read much yet, but the story is quite attractive to me. The descriptions in some places may need improvement. Take the chapter in which King Lin is put on trial after injuring a male insect for Saveri as an example. I always feel that it is better to first introduce King Lin's similar gangsterism to Mr. Jun, and then write about King Lin's performance at the trial scene, which is more suitable for the plot of Xie.
Beautiful, beautiful! (。・ω・。)ノ♡ Although a bunch of people appeared out of nowhere at the beginning (I can't quite remember), which made me a little confused, and some of the attributive words were too long, but it was still acceptable, mainly because it looked really good! The author, I declare to you ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
I like it very much, it's a typical Zerg novel, redemption style, logic and so on, and there's nothing wrong with the characterization. The author is also very good and lovely and deserves support. The plot feels good too [please update]
Come on come on! French fries went well too
It's a very cute article, it would be even better if the "people" could be replaced by "worms" [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
I like it🥰I like the characters of Escher and Xie Lanyang and the story between them (。・ω・。) I look forward to the story of the first two couples in the introductionᕕ༼•̀•́༽ᕗ
It's so beautiful and the writing is very good. Every pair of CPs is cute.
Very nice [Adoration] It's my type [Admiration]
It's good to watch. It's not the usual submissiveness of female insects to male insects. The plot is also very novel. I like King's Landing and Saveri very much. The characters are so interesting to me.
The reason for giving five stars is that there is no need to give four stars. It is a very typical cool story and setting. At least Mr. Xie's article is a typical bking, with a good life that makes people jealous. Typical fast food be like. But this thing is a common problem, so four stars are not necessary. The writing style is somewhat overrated for its sophistication, but at least it's not that novice.
, The writing style is sophisticated, the tone is sweet, the protagonist has a sharp tongue, the supporting characters also have a sharp tongue, they are in the same vein, there are many CPs, the wife is lively, cheerful and cute, the wife has great praise [laughing] but it is a bit short and concise
It seems to be pretty good at the moment. One point will be deducted for writing. Sometimes after describing character number one, character number two will be mentioned, and then suddenly a new paragraph will be written using the pronoun "he" and it will be number one. The reading is not smooth. There are also some adjectives that are used, but I feel that they do not describe anything, but overall it is good. I will come back and change the rating if it becomes smoother later.
Hahaha, I quite like my wife's writing style. It has a sense of translation. Maybe it's due to the word order and word choice. Moreover, Escher's character is like a little bug that I like very much. I have been criticizing little females for a long time. A gentle and gentle kitten with a little bit of my own personality is quite good.
Although I haven't finished reading it yet, I can't help but express my feelings. It's super, super, super, super, super super. It's so beautiful, and the setting inside is so delicious. It's so sweet. This book made me like the Zerg setting, which rarely reads Zerg books. [KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS] Extremely delicious [love][love][love][love]
Very cute article It's basically tied. From my personal point of view, the characters and plot are very interesting, but the wording and sentence making are a little less smooth, and sometimes the personal reference is a bit confusing, which makes people feel confused. However, it is obvious that the author has made great progress from the beginning to the present. Looking forward to the author's more exciting follow-up [The God of Bird Food][The God of Bird Food]
I haven't read much yet, but the story is quite attractive to me. The descriptions in some places may need improvement. Take the chapter in which King Lin is put on trial after injuring a male insect for Saveri as an example. I always feel that it is better to first introduce King Lin's similar gangsterism to Mr. Jun, and then write about King Lin's performance at the trial scene, which is more suitable for the plot of Xie.
Beautiful, beautiful! (。・ω・。)ノ♡ Although a bunch of people appeared out of nowhere at the beginning (I can't quite remember), which made me a little confused, and some of the attributive words were too long, but it was still acceptable, mainly because it looked really good! The author, I declare to you ദ്ദി˶˃ ᵕ ˂ )✧
I like it very much, it's a typical Zerg novel, redemption style, logic and so on, and there's nothing wrong with the characterization. The author is also very good and lovely and deserves support. The plot feels good too [please update]
Come on come on! French fries went well too
It's a very cute article, it would be even better if the "people" could be replaced by "worms" [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
I like it🥰I like the characters of Escher and Xie Lanyang and the story between them (。・ω・。) I look forward to the story of the first two couples in the introductionᕕ༼•̀•́༽ᕗ
It's so beautiful and the writing is very good. Every pair of CPs is cute.
Very nice [Adoration] It's my type [Admiration]
It's good to watch. It's not the usual submissiveness of female insects to male insects. The plot is also very novel. I like King's Landing and Saveri very much. The characters are so interesting to me.
Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking
It's very beautiful. The author's writing style is very good [sending heart] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]
So delicious😋Escher is just like fragrant and soft toast
Looks good! Xql is so cute, hey, author, come on
The writing style is NB, the author is great, very sweet, very sweet, but stupidly I can't understand this tone, mark it, bye
The plot is good, the characters are good, and it's good to watch
It's beautiful and beautiful. I like every couple of CPs. Come on, [Adoration][Adoration]