Continuation: [Heart Fruit Power User] [Trickster] [Participate in the Valley of the Gods] [The absolute second in command of the Rocks Pirates] [The initiator of the top war (pirate version)] [Rocks's brother-in-law] [I will try my best to illustrate the characters who appear]
All this bad fate started when Rocks met Ruifeng's sister in advance.
"Ruifeng, from now on your name will be Rocks D. Ruifeng."
One day, Rocks found a young man with black hair blowing on the rocks at the beach.
"My name is Rocks D. Gibek," he added. "Our names are so special."
"Rocks, what do you think we are going to sea for?"
"Call brother."
"Tsk~"
Locks looked at the vast ocean in front of him, and he opened his arms as if he wanted to embrace the entire ocean.
"King of the World!"
——
"Hey! Ruifeng, I'll take you to where the Tianlong people live and take you to see among the flowers."
"Ha... It's really crazy, Rocks."
After that, the Navy had a pattern of three generals and two civilian generals, and then the Navy abolished the position of civilian general.
——
The light in the civilian general's eyes quickly dimmed.
Ruifeng slowly withdrew the long sword. He looked at the fallen figure of the general, the smile on his face did not change at all.
"After all, I am very 'weak'... I can only use more 'little tricks'."
——
Ruifeng launched a war on top!
Ruifeng raised his hands flat:
"Come on, gentlemen!"
Let's put on a good show that never ends!
Stage a never ending...
Masquerade! "
Reader comments
I will write more interesting things, major events will happen, but the reasons are different from the original plot, and the results will naturally be different, but I will not change the general trend, just like Roger's execution, Roger "doesn't die" and cannot start the Age of Discovery, and the plot direction will collapse. I believe that I am right about it. The direction of the story will change, but I follow the writing principle of not changing the general trend and making big changes in small things. If you can accept my principle of writing books, my story is pretty good. If you can't accept it, it doesn't matter. I'm glad to meet you here.
Okay, okay, the protagonist has a mind fruit and can control his will, so can he control a devil fruit? After all, fruits have wills, and can the protagonist Poseidon become a high-end version of Neptune?
Come on, author, it's only a few hundred thousand words. It's normal to have a low score. I won't give too high a score when reading a new book. I feel that your ability can be used as Professor To be honest, it's rare to see an author like you who talks to readers in a hurry. At least it proves that you really write with your heart. If other authors don't use AI to fool people, I think they are noble [face covering]
The division of combat power and characters are great. It is the third masterpiece of One Piece that I have read on Tomato. By the way, I would like to ask how to deal with Charlotte Lingling. I feel that this character needs to be dealt with as the number one talent of Pirates.
It has a great sense of graphics, I wrote the plot myself, the style of painting is very close to that of One Piece, and the current logic is very reasonable.
The fruit development is also very diverse. I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. Currently, there are Shadow Corps from Jackie Chan, Monster from King of Masks, and Shadow of the Secret Adam.
As long as it doesn't lose its originality later on, it will be one of the few fine works in fan fiction.
Absolutely a good book, pretty good among Pirates fandoms. This is the first time I have encountered such a good new book in this period [Adoration][Admiration]
I hope the author will continue to update. The only problem is that the update is too slow. I believe in the author and keep going! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Have nothing to do on Thursday? Why don't you join me in raising jellyfish in the comment area and earn 0 yuan a day, just to sting the author's butt?
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Yes, I like it very much. They are all written based on the latest situation, which is very good. Now I want to know whether Rocks of the Valley of Gods can survive, or does he have to die? , Or in other words, after his death, will the Rocks Pirates fall apart or will Ruifeng take over again?
It's much more cheerful than the previous book, which lost its fighting power just as I was writing it. The protagonist seemed invincible, and it made my balls hurt to read it! This book is quite enjoyable for the time being, mainly because of the storyline. It feels like I'm not reading a book, but watching a second-generation anime! Come on, author, I hope you write better and better!
Turns out to be a eunuch
Hao Shu, Hao Shu, I highly recommend it, brothers, this is an old author, there must be nothing wrong with his writing, and he also listens to advice very much [Learned it] [Please update]
So funny! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !
Good looking, very hardworking, professional, roll [like]
It seems pretty good so far, I hope nothing bad happens.
I wrote it with my head in mind, you can give it a try (referring to the new chapter of the comic)
It's beautiful and very graphic. I recommend updating a few million words before finishing it!
It can be seen that the author wrote this book very carefully
And the writing is wonderful enough. It's really interesting to read.
Highly recommended
It keeps up with the real time and the pictures are very nice [laughs]
Very interesting and beautiful
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
Come on come on come on come on
Come on ah ah ah ah ah
Good book, worth reading
Very pretty, very delicate
It's pretty good, but the word count is a bit short.
It feels good and the characters are distinct
So pretty, so pretty
Not bad, you can say that you have some brains.
The author is very particular. I am afraid that the author will judge the update due to poor judgment, so I specially give it a five-star rating, so please do not interrupt the update.
The first part is too ink-filled. Although it is indispensable, people who read fan fiction don't have much patience. The second part is good and can be read. It has potential.
Please give me some good reviews. It's hard to find a good book. Don't let it kill you [crying][crying][crying]
I will write more interesting things, major events will happen, but the reasons are different from the original plot, and the results will naturally be different, but I will not change the general trend, just like Roger's execution, Roger "doesn't die" and cannot start the Age of Discovery, and the plot direction will collapse. I believe that I am right about it. The direction of the story will change, but I follow the writing principle of not changing the general trend and making big changes in small things. If you can accept my principle of writing books, my story is pretty good. If you can't accept it, it doesn't matter. I'm glad to meet you here.
Okay, okay, the protagonist has a mind fruit and can control his will, so can he control a devil fruit? After all, fruits have wills, and can the protagonist Poseidon become a high-end version of Neptune?
Come on, author, it's only a few hundred thousand words. It's normal to have a low score. I won't give too high a score when reading a new book. I feel that your ability can be used as Professor To be honest, it's rare to see an author like you who talks to readers in a hurry. At least it proves that you really write with your heart. If other authors don't use AI to fool people, I think they are noble [face covering]
The division of combat power and characters are great. It is the third masterpiece of One Piece that I have read on Tomato. By the way, I would like to ask how to deal with Charlotte Lingling. I feel that this character needs to be dealt with as the number one talent of Pirates.
It has a great sense of graphics, I wrote the plot myself, the style of painting is very close to that of One Piece, and the current logic is very reasonable. The fruit development is also very diverse. I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. Currently, there are Shadow Corps from Jackie Chan, Monster from King of Masks, and Shadow of the Secret Adam. As long as it doesn't lose its originality later on, it will be one of the few fine works in fan fiction.
Absolutely a good book, pretty good among Pirates fandoms. This is the first time I have encountered such a good new book in this period [Adoration][Admiration] I hope the author will continue to update. The only problem is that the update is too slow. I believe in the author and keep going! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]
Have nothing to do on Thursday? Why don't you join me in raising jellyfish in the comment area and earn 0 yuan a day, just to sting the author's butt? ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ଳ~ ~ଳ ଳ~
Yes, I like it very much. They are all written based on the latest situation, which is very good. Now I want to know whether Rocks of the Valley of Gods can survive, or does he have to die? , Or in other words, after his death, will the Rocks Pirates fall apart or will Ruifeng take over again?
It's much more cheerful than the previous book, which lost its fighting power just as I was writing it. The protagonist seemed invincible, and it made my balls hurt to read it! This book is quite enjoyable for the time being, mainly because of the storyline. It feels like I'm not reading a book, but watching a second-generation anime! Come on, author, I hope you write better and better! Turns out to be a eunuch
Hao Shu, Hao Shu, I highly recommend it, brothers, this is an old author, there must be nothing wrong with his writing, and he also listens to advice very much [Learned it] [Please update]
So funny! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !
Good looking, very hardworking, professional, roll [like]
It seems pretty good so far, I hope nothing bad happens.
I wrote it with my head in mind, you can give it a try (referring to the new chapter of the comic)
It's beautiful and very graphic. I recommend updating a few million words before finishing it!
It can be seen that the author wrote this book very carefully And the writing is wonderful enough. It's really interesting to read. Highly recommended
It keeps up with the real time and the pictures are very nice [laughs]
Very interesting and beautiful
Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking
Come on come on come on come on
Come on ah ah ah ah ah
Good book, worth reading
Very pretty, very delicate
It's pretty good, but the word count is a bit short.
It feels good and the characters are distinct
So pretty, so pretty
Not bad, you can say that you have some brains.
The author is very particular. I am afraid that the author will judge the update due to poor judgment, so I specially give it a five-star rating, so please do not interrupt the update.
The first part is too ink-filled. Although it is indispensable, people who read fan fiction don't have much patience. The second part is good and can be read. It has potential.
Please give me some good reviews. It's hard to find a good book. Don't let it kill you [crying][crying][crying]