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I will write more interesting things, major events will happen, but the reasons are different from the original plot, and the results will naturally be different, but I will not change the general trend, just like Roger's execution, Roger "doesn't die" and cannot start the Age of Discovery, and the plot direction will collapse. I believe that I am right about it. The direction of the story will change, but I follow the writing principle of not changing the general trend and making big changes in small things. If you can accept my principle of writing books, my story is pretty good. If you can't accept it, it doesn't matter. I'm glad to meet you here.

Okay, okay, the protagonist has a mind fruit and can control his will, so can he control a devil fruit? After all, fruits have wills, and can the protagonist Poseidon become a high-end version of Neptune?

Come on, author, it's only a few hundred thousand words. It's normal to have a low score. I won't give too high a score when reading a new book. I feel that your ability can be used as Professor To be honest, it's rare to see an author like you who talks to readers in a hurry. At least it proves that you really write with your heart. If other authors don't use AI to fool people, I think they are noble [face covering]

The division of combat power and characters are great. It is the third masterpiece of One Piece that I have read on Tomato. By the way, I would like to ask how to deal with Charlotte Lingling. I feel that this character needs to be dealt with as the number one talent of Pirates.

It has a great sense of graphics, I wrote the plot myself, the style of painting is very close to that of One Piece, and the current logic is very reasonable. The fruit development is also very diverse. I don't know if it's a foreshadowing or something. Currently, there are Shadow Corps from Jackie Chan, Monster from King of Masks, and Shadow of the Secret Adam. As long as it doesn't lose its originality later on, it will be one of the few fine works in fan fiction.

Absolutely a good book, pretty good among Pirates fandoms. This is the first time I have encountered such a good new book in this period [Adoration][Admiration] I hope the author will continue to update. The only problem is that the update is too slow. I believe in the author and keep going! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

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Yes, I like it very much. They are all written based on the latest situation, which is very good. Now I want to know whether Rocks of the Valley of Gods can survive, or does he have to die? , Or in other words, after his death, will the Rocks Pirates fall apart or will Ruifeng take over again?

It's much more cheerful than the previous book, which lost its fighting power just as I was writing it. The protagonist seemed invincible, and it made my balls hurt to read it! This book is quite enjoyable for the time being, mainly because of the storyline. It feels like I'm not reading a book, but watching a second-generation anime! Come on, author, I hope you write better and better! Turns out to be a eunuch

Hao Shu, Hao Shu, I highly recommend it, brothers, this is an old author, there must be nothing wrong with his writing, and he also listens to advice very much [Learned it] [Please update]

So funny! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! !

Good looking, very hardworking, professional, roll [like]

It seems pretty good so far, I hope nothing bad happens.

I wrote it with my head in mind, you can give it a try (referring to the new chapter of the comic)

It's beautiful and very graphic. I recommend updating a few million words before finishing it!

It can be seen that the author wrote this book very carefully And the writing is wonderful enough. It's really interesting to read. Highly recommended

It keeps up with the real time and the pictures are very nice [laughs]

Very interesting and beautiful

Good-looking, good-looking, really good-looking

Come on come on come on come on

Come on ah ah ah ah ah

Good book, worth reading

Very pretty, very delicate

It's pretty good, but the word count is a bit short.

It feels good and the characters are distinct

So pretty, so pretty

Not bad, you can say that you have some brains.

The author is very particular. I am afraid that the author will judge the update due to poor judgment, so I specially give it a five-star rating, so please do not interrupt the update.

The first part is too ink-filled. Although it is indispensable, people who read fan fiction don't have much patience. The second part is good and can be read. It has potential.

Please give me some good reviews. It's hard to find a good book. Don't let it kill you [crying][crying][crying]