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He struggled through Causeway Bay for ten years, and then time traveled to Luffy.
From then on, the style of the Straw Hats changed drastically.
"Zoron, why do you keep your hand when you kill people?"
"Kerby, do you want to be in the navy and be a kid? Choose one of the three swords, six holes or sinking the sea to feed the fish."
Reader comments
This book gave me the feeling that the water stopped while I was taking a shower, my cellphone ran out of battery when trying to make a reservation, I lost my instant noodles packet, I couldn't find my socks when I went out, I found I didn't bring my school bag when I went to school, I copied the wrong answers when I copied my homework, I forgot to bring paper when I went to the toilet...
The above are all bullshit, people's words are beautiful🤓
Okay, okay, it feels very good, it can be said to be a good One Piece fanfic [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
This book is much more interesting than the messy pirate fanfics on the list. I have seen more than 60 of them so far. If there are any bad points later, I will change it later, but now it feels quite good. It feels like a very new type of pirate fanfic. This is how it should be written. It's much more interesting than those fan fictions that always follow the outline of One Piece
This is the best fanfic that has been released recently. Those who say they follow the original work, I ask you, do those who follow the boat also follow the original work? There is no change at all. He will go to whichever island the original work goes to. It's just that there are more people on the boat. The same is true for this book, but Luffy has become a pheasant. Why not Chen Haonan, because I feel that the Luffy in the author's works is more like a pheasant.
A good novel, the rhythm of the article is good, the unique style also fits the world view, I personally think it is worth recommending [Like][Like][Like]
I hope the author can bring this novel to an end without any interruptions or eunuchs. This five-star review is my greatest support and encouragement to you [love]
Straw Hat Hall... I really look forward to how cool it will be for a real ruthless person to be the protagonist of an anime.
Very interesting Luffy, looking forward to the follow-up plot
It's pretty good. The characters in this book are more in line with the original work and have their own unique style. Although they are a little OOC at times, they all write the same story and don't go too far. I suggest you don't look at the protagonist through the filter of truth, goodness and beauty, and don't think of the protagonist as Luffy. When you see the not-so-kind scenes, it makes sense to think that the protagonist is a young and Dangerous boy who has traveled through time.
It doesn't look good from behind, drag it
In anime articles, most of them make the protagonist look like an NPC, but there are very, very few that look like a human being.
It's very interesting. The author writes well and it's interesting to watch. Come on!
It is a very interesting book. It can be said that it opens a new track and opens its own society in the world of pirates. It is a perfect combination of the underworld and One Piece.
Apart from anything else, the Cantonese translation has good reviews [Chigua]. The ideas are big enough and the writing is good. Not brainless
Interesting, mind-blowing
I quite like the magic modification
It's quite good. It's good to read it as a magically adapted version of the original work.
It's very interesting, I think the plot can even follow this style. Hahahaha, keep writing!
It's so interesting and the plot doesn't look awkward
Very interesting. Although I don't know much about Hong Kong gangsters, the author's writing is very good and I don't have dyslexia.
Six-sixty-six, a different Luffy, looking forward to the day when he becomes the leader of the Grand Line [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]
It's interesting, it's very imaginative
It's okay, but there are still some shortcomings
I suggest that the slogan of the association is (humanity, justice, etiquette, loyalty and obedience)
What's going on? I just remember that I was raising books after seeing the empty island. Can anyone tell me why I was raising books?
It's so beautiful, and the abilities of each fruit are very novel.
Haokan showed me a different pirate. This is a pirate.
Very good, the underworld is flying, the ideas are very strange, a different road
It's a very good book, very passionate, no need for brains, a different kind of refreshing article. If you can feel the excitement, this is a good book and you will be motivated to read it. If you can't feel it, it will be inexplicable.
Come on, author! This is the second time I've seen the best pirate fanfic. (The first book is Whitebeard [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] from the starting point)
Anyway, it's quite funny and quite crazy.
Hong Kong Chinese version, only every corner is different from the original work
This book gave me the feeling that the water stopped while I was taking a shower, my cellphone ran out of battery when trying to make a reservation, I lost my instant noodles packet, I couldn't find my socks when I went out, I found I didn't bring my school bag when I went to school, I copied the wrong answers when I copied my homework, I forgot to bring paper when I went to the toilet... The above are all bullshit, people's words are beautiful🤓
Okay, okay, it feels very good, it can be said to be a good One Piece fanfic [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]
This book is much more interesting than the messy pirate fanfics on the list. I have seen more than 60 of them so far. If there are any bad points later, I will change it later, but now it feels quite good. It feels like a very new type of pirate fanfic. This is how it should be written. It's much more interesting than those fan fictions that always follow the outline of One Piece
This is the best fanfic that has been released recently. Those who say they follow the original work, I ask you, do those who follow the boat also follow the original work? There is no change at all. He will go to whichever island the original work goes to. It's just that there are more people on the boat. The same is true for this book, but Luffy has become a pheasant. Why not Chen Haonan, because I feel that the Luffy in the author's works is more like a pheasant.
A good novel, the rhythm of the article is good, the unique style also fits the world view, I personally think it is worth recommending [Like][Like][Like] I hope the author can bring this novel to an end without any interruptions or eunuchs. This five-star review is my greatest support and encouragement to you [love]
Straw Hat Hall... I really look forward to how cool it will be for a real ruthless person to be the protagonist of an anime.
Very interesting Luffy, looking forward to the follow-up plot
It's pretty good. The characters in this book are more in line with the original work and have their own unique style. Although they are a little OOC at times, they all write the same story and don't go too far. I suggest you don't look at the protagonist through the filter of truth, goodness and beauty, and don't think of the protagonist as Luffy. When you see the not-so-kind scenes, it makes sense to think that the protagonist is a young and Dangerous boy who has traveled through time. It doesn't look good from behind, drag it
In anime articles, most of them make the protagonist look like an NPC, but there are very, very few that look like a human being.
It's very interesting. The author writes well and it's interesting to watch. Come on!
It is a very interesting book. It can be said that it opens a new track and opens its own society in the world of pirates. It is a perfect combination of the underworld and One Piece.
Apart from anything else, the Cantonese translation has good reviews [Chigua]. The ideas are big enough and the writing is good. Not brainless
Interesting, mind-blowing
I quite like the magic modification
It's quite good. It's good to read it as a magically adapted version of the original work.
It's very interesting, I think the plot can even follow this style. Hahahaha, keep writing!
It's so interesting and the plot doesn't look awkward
Very interesting. Although I don't know much about Hong Kong gangsters, the author's writing is very good and I don't have dyslexia.
Six-sixty-six, a different Luffy, looking forward to the day when he becomes the leader of the Grand Line [laughter] [laughter] [laughter]
It's interesting, it's very imaginative
It's okay, but there are still some shortcomings
I suggest that the slogan of the association is (humanity, justice, etiquette, loyalty and obedience)
What's going on? I just remember that I was raising books after seeing the empty island. Can anyone tell me why I was raising books?
It's so beautiful, and the abilities of each fruit are very novel.
Haokan showed me a different pirate. This is a pirate.
Very good, the underworld is flying, the ideas are very strange, a different road
It's a very good book, very passionate, no need for brains, a different kind of refreshing article. If you can feel the excitement, this is a good book and you will be motivated to read it. If you can't feel it, it will be inexplicable.
Come on, author! This is the second time I've seen the best pirate fanfic. (The first book is Whitebeard [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss] from the starting point)
Anyway, it's quite funny and quite crazy.
Hong Kong Chinese version, only every corner is different from the original work