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Not to mention the high productivity of more than ten chapters a day, it must be praised! The writing is also good, the emotional scenes are generally enjoyable to watch, and the male protagonist is not a coward for both red and black. For this reason, I must praise it. It is the only Conan novel that I like the heroine Xiaolan [like] (the other one is about swapping bodies next door [laughter])

Good. The advantages are many. There are also many shortcomings. The protagonist's love for the little angel is too sudden. As for the dog-licking protagonist mentioned in the comments, it is indeed a bit. Even this Xiaolan is a bit unworthy of the protagonist's love. Of course, the protagonist's methods are sometimes not bright, but this is good. Not perfect is what makes a human being. The most important thing is that this Xiaolan is no longer the same Xiaolan. I didn't see that brave, fearless, warm, powerful and decisive little angel at all. I only saw Xiaolan who was indecisive, timid, even weak and unable to take care of herself. And the little angel is not only powerful with his physical skills, but also with his heart. This is precisely the most important reason why I like little angels. This book does not reflect Xiaolan's skills at all, nor is she mentally strong. But the description of Kogoro Mouri is pretty good. And not completely brainless.

Top-notch writing, super delicate emotional lines, if you want to watch emotional dramas, this is the book! ! The protagonist has a hook, but it is very reasonable, and the hook is not very present, which does not affect the reading experience at all. Moreover, the description of the characters is meticulous, and the author understands love. The career line is also written in a reasonable manner, completely consistent with the protagonist's ideas and development path, without any deviation, and it is obvious that the author has checked a lot of information, including humanities, law, and politics. It is substantial but not bloated, and professional but not showy. The story line is detailed and appropriate. It is not a complete Conan text about the case, but a very reasonable modification of the original case. Such modifications are both familiar to fans of the original work and very fresh. It is a gift from the author to fans of the original work. In short, the writing is delicate, the content is solid, fascinating, and extremely beautiful! It would be better if the punctuation marks could be properly marked. The upper and lower quotation marks are always reversed.

Not bad, not bad, you can read it, come on, author. At first, I only read a few dozen chapters and felt that the plot and writing were good, and the updates were numerous and fast. Why was the score so low? Then I gave it a five-star rating. Until I saw the author writing more emotional scenes, I knew it was time to leave. [Face-palming][Face-palming] Female authors always write emotional dramas that they think are good-looking and that touch male readers. In fact, male readers just feel disgusted🤢 and abandon the book after reading it.

This book is really good to read. Each character is portrayed in a very three-dimensional way, and there is no irritation in the whole process. And now there are more than 220 chapters. I was so excited to read it, and suddenly I found that the author was typing more than a dozen chapters a day. I haven't seen such a productive author in a long time [crying] and I just started to like it like crazy.

It's very interesting to watch, but I feel like the main character is a bit too licky, and Conan is also in the way. I want to see Xiaolan chasing her husband in the crematorium [Adoration] This chapter is a bit outrageous. Xinlan even came to take a bath together. This is really abstract, and the two people have been in close contact. The author also wrote it. To be honest, I feel that I really can't accept it if I put myself in it. It's too curious. The protagonist is too licking. In the end, Xinlan still contacts like this. It doesn't look like the kind of paranoid love described.

The treatment of Bellmode is the point I am most dissatisfied with in this article. From the titles of "angel" and "cool guy", it can be seen that she is more touched or cares about Xiaolan who saves people in the theater instead of Shinichi. For the original work, Shinichi is the protagonist after all, and is Belmod's great hope for the organization's tendency to destroy, which is understandable. But Belmode in this article, like the original work, completely ignores Xiaolan's dedication to fulfill her filial piety for Kudo Shinichi, which I can't understand at all. I have always hoped to see Belmode take action to resolve the plot of the darkened Conan against Xiaolan, but unfortunately it did not happen. But other than that, I still like this book. Thank you for your work.

Okay, it definitely looks good. As a little bookworm for more than 10,000 years. I don't usually look at this, but I accidentally saw it yesterday afternoon. Then I have been reading until now. Cui and Cui should hurry up with the author. I want to see the follow-up.

The beginning is very engaging and makes me want to read a similar novel where the protagonist travels back to the 70s and 80s. [Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] The protagonist is about to start competing for business with Shinichi! [Laughing] I'll comment after watching the follow-up. [Sending Hearts][Love] Beautiful! ! ! The love line progresses very naturally🥰Love love love [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] The protagonist not only robbed Conan of his job but also robbed Lan [laughing] [sending heart] [like]

The emotions are written particularly delicately, especially the emotional transformation of the heroine Xiaolan. Xiaolan is such a good person, there is no need to live in waiting, deception, and pain. She is her own protagonist. She deserves all the beauty, all the company, and all the preference. But I have to say that Kudo's companionship for more than ten years cannot be separated or removed. It is just a matter of distinguishing the red line between friendship and love.

It's okay. In the early stage, the protagonist should be wearing a suit, and then there is a super AI system that does not require energy. From having nothing to selling fish, forging personal identities, and then becoming an elite detective. In terms of character design, the protagonist tends to be absolutely rational, relies on strategy, has a dark personality, and only believes in his own absolute sense of control. At present, it seems that it should be a single heroine, Xiaolan, poaching Kudo Shinichi's corner, and the process of robbing Xiaolan, and also wrote some emotional scenes. It looks a bit cold and dark, but depending on my personal preference, I think the writing is pretty good.

Emmm, I personally think it's pretty good, maybe it won't reach a very high score, but around 8.5 Should be fine. I don't know why the score is so low. Here are a few minefields: 1. Dark text, from the beginning, pig's feet are just to survive, and then become "ambitious" and start the pace of domination. It feels like the type of cool writing 2. The author's introduction of "multiple women" doesn't feel very appropriate. At the beginning of the article, I felt that the author wanted to go to a single girl (Lan), and then about 200 chapters (I forgot the specific part), he started to collect the harem (the beginning of the change is synchronized with the change in the first point). But Lan has always been the "pure land" in the protagonist's heart, and this is true throughout. Some of the other women are careless, some are just acting on occasion, and some are emmm, you know. 3. The writing of emotions is very distinctive, and the analysis of micro-expressions of each character is a major feature. The writing is OK, but there are some small problems with the numbers? I don't know if it's a little ingenuity on the part of the author or something else. Overall, you can read it, it's not bad, the title is not bad, I don't understand why the score is so low [Thoughts]

It can be said that the author's level of describing emotional writing is higher than that of ordinary romance novels, and it is really immersive. At the same time, apart from the emotional writing, some of the author's conceptions of Conan's worldview are very good and worth reading. [Love]

Why are there only two hundred chapters instead of five hundred? Answer me! Author!

I originally wanted to give you 4 stars because you smell so good, brother. But after all, it's rare to get a different Conan fanfic in a few years. There's really nothing to say about the writing style. That cover and title. Almost missed. Fortunately, it has been promoted on my homepage for a long time.

The best Conan fanfic I have ever read

In fact, most people who read this kind of book have a positive view of Conan. It is true that not everyone can accept that you ruined their family. So my focus was basically on the business part, and I skipped the crime-solving and emotional scenes.

It's really good to watch, but it ended quickly. I may not be able to write the rest of the plot. The whole process is exciting and high-energy in the middle and late stages. However, the progress is a bit too fast. The protagonist's personality is a bit poisonous. He turns dark so fast that it even feels like the protagonist is a madman. The plus of Ke Xue's world is soaring.

Money is really easy. Xiaolan won 10 million yuan after tax due to her lucky aura. In Conan's first case, the girl was kidnapped and received 100 million yuan. Although I can explain it, I still can't stand it anymore.

It's definitely not a perfect score. Everyone's preferences are different, so it's always a bit unsatisfactory. The author wrote more than a hundred chapters in four or five days, which is very impressive. You can only read novels that break through the plot, rather than knowing the process just by looking at the title of the book. It is much better than writing based on formulas. Demon Lord never has to care about other people's feelings, he just walks wherever he wants! [Laugh]

The masterpiece is easy to misunderstand. The further you get to the back the more interesting it becomes. And the feelings are really delicate. The author of this novel is clearly portraying Professor Moriarty in the Heisei era. This is a collision of extreme brainpower between red and black.

What kind of pure love does Dark Haven have? Of course it wants everything.

The book is very interesting. Although in the later stages, the content is no longer within the framework of Detective Conan. However, this kind of content that transcends the original plot is not redundant. Instead, it is like the aftertaste after the climax, which shocks people's hearts in waves. The author has a very strong understanding and grasp of human nature, and the shaping of each character is also very full. This is not an easy task. Thank you for your hard work, author! [Love][send heart][send heart][love]

I'll give you full marks as long as you grab the orchid. Is Kudo Shinichi worthy of others?

Have you recorded it? Brother! (Looking at the camera) (turning back sharply) Fei Fei Fei Fei Fei Fei Fei is a very good book! !

It's okay so far

It's pretty good. I was a little bit licky in the early stage, but then I let myself go.

Full marks in the front, but suddenly in the middle, "Brother, you smell so good" came here. I didn't just write it once or twice. I don't know what the mentality is 😰 Is the author a female?

It's very beautiful. Why is it only 6 o'clock?

The writing is okay, with a few flaws and it's not considered dark writing.