A new book, just released, with low ratings.
Demining: Do not read if you have high logic requirements. It is not written exactly according to the history books, it is fictitious. I'm a newbie, the author has a glass heart, if you don't like it, please don't hurt me.
[Young General in Fresh Clothes and Angry Horse] vs [Time Travel Girl from a Medical Family]
Gu Qiyao, who was dressed in the Han Dynasty, landed at the border fortress where rivers of blood flowed. The moment the Xiongnu butcher knife fell, an arrow shot through the air. The young general came like a god from heaven and pulled her back from the edge of hell.
He brought her, a woman of "unknown origin", back to the military camp. She used her medical skills to bring the dead back to life in exchange for her foundation.
She innovated horse gear for him, established a medical administration for him, and used her knowledge that spanned a thousand years to become the strongest support behind him.
Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty wanted to marry him privately, but he sternly refused because "the Huns have not been exterminated, and there is no way for them to live at home."
No one knew, and when there was no one around, Huo Qubing trapped her in his arms and said in an aggrieved tone: "It's not that I don't want to start a family, it's the one I want to marry... Who won't give me the right to marry."
However, there is always a huge stone in Gu Qiyao's heart - the fate of his death at the age of twenty-four in the history books.
When the horn of the decisive battle in Mobei sounded, she held his hand tightly, just as she held each other's fate tightly.
"Huo Qubing," she said with a firm look, "I have the final say on your life."
This time, she not only wanted to change her fate against fate, but also wanted to be his only wife in history.
Reader comments
It's still good-looking so far, and the heroine's emotional handling is very delicate, but General Huo's emotions are a little abrupt. In addition, I'm curious, the heroine has her own family in modern times, will she really give up her family and modern convenient life because of an idol? To me, when the parents are still alive, if there is a choice, if the female protagonist chooses to give up her parents and choose the male protagonist, it will feel too paper-based. Many authors will choose to have the female protagonist and the male protagonist travel through modern times in the extra story, or after the male and female protagonists die, the modern female protagonist returns to their own timeline, and then the male protagonist travels to modern times, looking forward to the author's handling.
The overall theme is not bad, and the early writing is very good, but it may be a bit immature. For example, every picture will have something like, "The sunset lengthens the shadow~", "Open the tent and look at the sky dyed red by the sunset in the distance... Huo Qubing..." It's like this. It may be a bit... Immature, but some of the plots are good and the logic is good. The editing is okay. The author may have too many plots in the TV series, and too many words that change the scene. Maybe he wants to express the artistic conception, but it is a bit too much. Almost every picture has an elongated figure. The battle is easily over, and the emotional advancement is a bit fast... I only speak for myself. Overall, it is good and can be watched.
There are also black cloaks and there are too many black figures.
The writing is very detailed and very immersive. I couldn't help but bring in Peng Yuyan and Liu Shishi. I don't know if you have watched Pocahontas. The prototype of Wei Wuji played by Peng Yuyan is Huo Qubing, while Liu Shishi has played a character with a similar personality. It is so beautiful [shy][shy]
It's this kind of historical-themed novel. It's really great that the author can write it like this [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] (Affirmation from liberal arts students)
This character description really brought out the Huo Qubing in my heart.
The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very smooth and smooth. It is very comfortable and does not make people feel too abrupt.
The images of other characters are also very three-dimensional. I like the writing style of the whole article very much. The description of historical events is also very good. The battlefield and battle scenes are very good. Keep up the good work. The author is very [like] [like] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
I am very lucky and happy to come across a novel about Huo Qubing. It reminds me that the first time I learned about Huo Qubing was in the comic strip published by Yashe many years ago. Later, when I grew up and studied history, I felt that his life was very exciting, but I also felt sorry for him. I have always regretted his early death, maybe because I was jealous of the talent. I hope he will have a happy ending this time.
Thanks to the teacher for his thoughtful creation, the image of Huo Qubing, a young man in bright clothes and an angry horse, emerged before my eyes. The character of the heroine is also great. The interactive distance between the two is just right. I like the narration of the story line and the rhythm of the flowing water very much. It's been a long time since I encountered a novel that made me read it patiently. There was no skipping chapters at all. Hahahaha, I couldn't bear to leave it. Come on, teacher, I'll update it for the New Year's Day [Attention][Attention][Attention]
Very nice, I like it very much. This is what Huo Qubing looks like in my impression. The heroine and Huo Qubing also interacted very well. I like this kind of long-lasting love. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will keep following up. [Admiration] But don't stay up too late and stay healthy. [Blowing kiss]
I hope Huo Qubing and the heroine can have a good ending. It is best to let Huo Qubing and the heroine go to modern times to meet their parents. Finally, there will be a grand wedding. [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Love][Love][Love]
The heroine is well portrayed, her character is very modest, self-reliant, and she also knows a little bit about boxing. The hero's words do not deviate too much from history, and many of them are still in line with ancient times. I personally think it is quite good-looking, not too sadistic, more everyday, and a little passionate. [Eating Melon]
The logic is much more rigorous than many time travel stories I have read, and the super-era products created are not that outrageous. Come on, author!
I think it is a good book. I feel that General Huo's character is well grasped. The female protagonist also has a great personality. She is strong, kind, independent, smart, and brave. I really think this book is quite good, but there are a few plots that may be a little embarrassing to read, but overall the plot of this book is quite good. When I read novels, I always focus on the female protagonist to observe the shaping of the male protagonist (I am not a dream girl) , I will never be able to read a book if the male protagonist or the plot are not well created, but this one has the desire to continue reading, and both the male protagonist and the plot have a certain appeal (I am not a dream girl). Recently, I have stopped reading, so I read other novels. Recently, my taste in novels has become more and more discerning and I often can't finish the book, but I can still read this one when I look back, so I feel that this book is quite good.
This is the first time I have read a novel with an ancient figure (Huo Qubing) as the protagonist. Although I cannot say whether the content of the article is completely consistent with the historical authenticity, but from the perspective of reading this novel, this is a really good novel. (Only personal opinion)
The author is great and writes really well. I don't know how to praise this book enough. Although he has not finished it yet, he has truly written about the delicate feelings between men and women, and the author also describes the details very well. Not a deal. It is a detailed and profound description so that readers can easily get involved. It's really, really well written. Highly recommended to see. 😍
It's very good to read. I read the latest chapter in one breath. I really hope that the heroine and Huo Qubing will be together for a long time. Even if there are regrets in history, I chose to forget it temporarily because of reading this book. In the process of reading this book, I also slowly healed the unwillingness and sadness I felt when I learned about Huo Qubing's death when I was watching the TV series Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty when I was a child. I would like to thank the author again for bringing me this spiritual journey [heartfelt]
The writing is beautiful and fresh, rich in philosophy and thought-provoking. The structure is clear and neat, without giving people a refreshing feeling.
There is a strong sense of fate, and it feels like I have really seen the young general from thousands of years ago across time and space.
It looked so good. The author's writing and plot can keep up with it. The pace is not sluggish. The heroine is really charming. I hope the author can keep making more movies! I will keep watching! !
The author's writing is smooth, delicate and vivid, the characters are rich, the group portraits are well drawn, and the logic is super perfect. I haven't read much yet, but it's really a stunning article. I look forward to the follow-up emotional line [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
I think the author's writing is really good. In my opinion, the introduction of sand table deduction should have put a lot of thought into it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
It's very interesting, the logic is very rigorous, the heroine is well written, she is kind, smart and humble, each character is very full, the heroine and Huo Qubing are also very close to each other, a long-lasting love, the author must continue to write [Please update][Please update]
It's okay, although the description of the heroine's skills is not very rigorous.
I have a very rigorous grasp of many historical details. I can slowly practice my writing skills, but I am willing to pay close attention to the historical details and describe in detail what was in the Han Dynasty. There are not many authors left, come on, come on.
It's very beautiful. The author is very careful and hopes that the ending will be he.
Beautiful, so beautiful!
The writing is really good
Nice! Love watching! The author adds more [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
The more you look at it, the more fascinating it becomes
It's still good-looking so far, and the heroine's emotional handling is very delicate, but General Huo's emotions are a little abrupt. In addition, I'm curious, the heroine has her own family in modern times, will she really give up her family and modern convenient life because of an idol? To me, when the parents are still alive, if there is a choice, if the female protagonist chooses to give up her parents and choose the male protagonist, it will feel too paper-based. Many authors will choose to have the female protagonist and the male protagonist travel through modern times in the extra story, or after the male and female protagonists die, the modern female protagonist returns to their own timeline, and then the male protagonist travels to modern times, looking forward to the author's handling.
The overall theme is not bad, and the early writing is very good, but it may be a bit immature. For example, every picture will have something like, "The sunset lengthens the shadow~", "Open the tent and look at the sky dyed red by the sunset in the distance... Huo Qubing..." It's like this. It may be a bit... Immature, but some of the plots are good and the logic is good. The editing is okay. The author may have too many plots in the TV series, and too many words that change the scene. Maybe he wants to express the artistic conception, but it is a bit too much. Almost every picture has an elongated figure. The battle is easily over, and the emotional advancement is a bit fast... I only speak for myself. Overall, it is good and can be watched. There are also black cloaks and there are too many black figures.
The writing is very detailed and very immersive. I couldn't help but bring in Peng Yuyan and Liu Shishi. I don't know if you have watched Pocahontas. The prototype of Wei Wuji played by Peng Yuyan is Huo Qubing, while Liu Shishi has played a character with a similar personality. It is so beautiful [shy][shy]
It's this kind of historical-themed novel. It's really great that the author can write it like this [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] [Like] (Affirmation from liberal arts students) This character description really brought out the Huo Qubing in my heart. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also very smooth and smooth. It is very comfortable and does not make people feel too abrupt. The images of other characters are also very three-dimensional. I like the writing style of the whole article very much. The description of historical events is also very good. The battlefield and battle scenes are very good. Keep up the good work. The author is very [like] [like] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]
I am very lucky and happy to come across a novel about Huo Qubing. It reminds me that the first time I learned about Huo Qubing was in the comic strip published by Yashe many years ago. Later, when I grew up and studied history, I felt that his life was very exciting, but I also felt sorry for him. I have always regretted his early death, maybe because I was jealous of the talent. I hope he will have a happy ending this time. Thanks to the teacher for his thoughtful creation, the image of Huo Qubing, a young man in bright clothes and an angry horse, emerged before my eyes. The character of the heroine is also great. The interactive distance between the two is just right. I like the narration of the story line and the rhythm of the flowing water very much. It's been a long time since I encountered a novel that made me read it patiently. There was no skipping chapters at all. Hahahaha, I couldn't bear to leave it. Come on, teacher, I'll update it for the New Year's Day [Attention][Attention][Attention]
Very nice, I like it very much. This is what Huo Qubing looks like in my impression. The heroine and Huo Qubing also interacted very well. I like this kind of long-lasting love. I hope the author can continue writing, and I will keep following up. [Admiration] But don't stay up too late and stay healthy. [Blowing kiss] I hope Huo Qubing and the heroine can have a good ending. It is best to let Huo Qubing and the heroine go to modern times to meet their parents. Finally, there will be a grand wedding. [Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Ask for attention][Love][Love][Love]
The heroine is well portrayed, her character is very modest, self-reliant, and she also knows a little bit about boxing. The hero's words do not deviate too much from history, and many of them are still in line with ancient times. I personally think it is quite good-looking, not too sadistic, more everyday, and a little passionate. [Eating Melon]
The logic is much more rigorous than many time travel stories I have read, and the super-era products created are not that outrageous. Come on, author!
I think it is a good book. I feel that General Huo's character is well grasped. The female protagonist also has a great personality. She is strong, kind, independent, smart, and brave. I really think this book is quite good, but there are a few plots that may be a little embarrassing to read, but overall the plot of this book is quite good. When I read novels, I always focus on the female protagonist to observe the shaping of the male protagonist (I am not a dream girl) , I will never be able to read a book if the male protagonist or the plot are not well created, but this one has the desire to continue reading, and both the male protagonist and the plot have a certain appeal (I am not a dream girl). Recently, I have stopped reading, so I read other novels. Recently, my taste in novels has become more and more discerning and I often can't finish the book, but I can still read this one when I look back, so I feel that this book is quite good.
This is the first time I have read a novel with an ancient figure (Huo Qubing) as the protagonist. Although I cannot say whether the content of the article is completely consistent with the historical authenticity, but from the perspective of reading this novel, this is a really good novel. (Only personal opinion)
The author is great and writes really well. I don't know how to praise this book enough. Although he has not finished it yet, he has truly written about the delicate feelings between men and women, and the author also describes the details very well. Not a deal. It is a detailed and profound description so that readers can easily get involved. It's really, really well written. Highly recommended to see. 😍
It's very good to read. I read the latest chapter in one breath. I really hope that the heroine and Huo Qubing will be together for a long time. Even if there are regrets in history, I chose to forget it temporarily because of reading this book. In the process of reading this book, I also slowly healed the unwillingness and sadness I felt when I learned about Huo Qubing's death when I was watching the TV series Emperor Wu of the Han Dynasty when I was a child. I would like to thank the author again for bringing me this spiritual journey [heartfelt]
The writing is beautiful and fresh, rich in philosophy and thought-provoking. The structure is clear and neat, without giving people a refreshing feeling.
There is a strong sense of fate, and it feels like I have really seen the young general from thousands of years ago across time and space.
It looked so good. The author's writing and plot can keep up with it. The pace is not sluggish. The heroine is really charming. I hope the author can keep making more movies! I will keep watching! !
The author's writing is smooth, delicate and vivid, the characters are rich, the group portraits are well drawn, and the logic is super perfect. I haven't read much yet, but it's really a stunning article. I look forward to the follow-up emotional line [flying kiss] [flying kiss]
I think the author's writing is really good. In my opinion, the introduction of sand table deduction should have put a lot of thought into it [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]
It's very interesting, the logic is very rigorous, the heroine is well written, she is kind, smart and humble, each character is very full, the heroine and Huo Qubing are also very close to each other, a long-lasting love, the author must continue to write [Please update][Please update]
It's okay, although the description of the heroine's skills is not very rigorous.
I have a very rigorous grasp of many historical details. I can slowly practice my writing skills, but I am willing to pay close attention to the historical details and describe in detail what was in the Han Dynasty. There are not many authors left, come on, come on.
It's very beautiful. The author is very careful and hopes that the ending will be he.
Beautiful, so beautiful!
The writing is really good
Nice! Love watching! The author adds more [flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]
The more you look at it, the more fascinating it becomes
Don't say much, you'll know after seeing it
Show them all to me! ! ! ! So pretty! ! !
Good looking. Cheers, author.
Super cool, cheers to the author!
Quite historic