[The fourth natural disaster, Schrödinger's heroine, farming and players' daily life]
Three years after traveling back in time, Li Lin, who had made a name for himself in the dungeon as a mysterious businessman, finally gathered enough materials to build a rebirth point.
From now on, the fourth natural disaster from Blue Star will sweep across the world, and he can also use the player's east wind to get rid of the restriction of being unable to leave the dungeon.
Li Lin was imagining when he saw a player slashing at him with a sword...
Imperial soldier: "Oh no, Marshal! Our vanguard was attacked by a group of goblins riding elf deer!"
Imperial Marshal: "Do you want to hear what you are talking about? A goblin riding an elf deer?"
...
Player A: "Your mercenary group is clearly called Elf Sword, why are they all goblins?"
Player B: "Ahem, too many people have died recently, and the resurrection of elves is too expensive. Let's use Goblins first."
...
Reader comments
I suspect that you wrote it with AI, but you also made some typos. I feel that you may have used a little AI assistance. There are contradictions in some places. Issues about whether the languages are interoperable are sometimes patched, and sometimes the languages are clearly not interoperable but the issue is simply ignored.
NPCs with level 5 language translation capabilities can only barely understand the Chinese spoken by players. Players have not learned the imperial language, but they can communicate normally with ordinary adventurers.
I remember that players could only transform into monsters, and those in the strategy team were even goblins. How did they get out of the dungeon? The author's side description is based on thick armor, but the protagonist only brought a simple armor back to the camp to sell. Even if it was worn, the empire should have strict inspections to prevent intelligent monsters from sneaking into the empire, but the two of them went out easily.
As for some small details, I think AI assistance should be used or the author is not rigorous about the setting of his book. I will give one more star for the purpose of encouragement.
It feels very interesting to me when I see it so far. There is no big poisonous point, and there is no plot where the game suddenly affects reality. Players who want to maintain comparison are creatures who like to have fun. It is good for the national level to basically use the game as a laboratory to conduct experiments that are difficult to implement in reality. The above content is only my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it😔
Sacrificing a little nun may be a little annoying in the early stage, but generally there is no big problem. The writing style of the book is a bit too real like Sword of the Dawn and this game. Also, these dozens of chapters are definitely written by humans, and typos often appear. A suggestion here is to throw the nun's body out and tell outsiders that she is gone, and then let the new consciousness that inherits the nun's life experience use the new body. This is a matter of opinion and wisdom. The above is the evaluation of an 800-hour book lover.
I didn't expect that there were so few ratings. This book is actually the author's first book. After finishing it, I can only wait for the serialization of qaq. Overall, the development and logic of the plot are pretty good, and the writing is also okay. It's not boring to read. Although there are some emotional lines, they are not all negative and are still within an acceptable range. Looking forward to subsequent updates, no need to be a eunuch woo woo woo
A paragraph is too long
I always have a feeling of déjà vu
I'm dying of trouble with naming names. Can you recommend some good online names? Otherwise, I'll have to start with the readers [crying]
Very pretty. It is also very interesting in the theme of the 4th natural disaster.
As a non-templated fourth natural disaster article, it is already very good.
Okay, well written
It's very nice to watch and the players are very fun.
I think the front part needs to be changed. The author is the woman. In the end, for example, she copied a body or something. Otherwise, the front part is really a bit too shocking. Really, I feel that you wrote the back part very well, but the front part is the most difficult to tolerate. It just ruins the first impression. The back part is so beautiful. Come on, author😋😋😋
If you can't find a book to read, you can read it
Personally I feel good about it, but I don't know why no one is watching it.
As a fourth natural disaster article, it's quite normal.
It's a very good novel. It's a bit poisonous to read.
The story is interesting and makes you want to read it. But I finished reading the new book very quickly. Good luck to the author.
It looks great, the writing is good, there are no big problems with the plot, and there is no need to abuse the protagonist. Very well written
It's pretty good and very delicate, but I prefer the excitement of combat. Come on!
The writing is okay, probably because there were no updates before so no one commented.
I suspect that you wrote it with AI, but you also made some typos. I feel that you may have used a little AI assistance. There are contradictions in some places. Issues about whether the languages are interoperable are sometimes patched, and sometimes the languages are clearly not interoperable but the issue is simply ignored. NPCs with level 5 language translation capabilities can only barely understand the Chinese spoken by players. Players have not learned the imperial language, but they can communicate normally with ordinary adventurers. I remember that players could only transform into monsters, and those in the strategy team were even goblins. How did they get out of the dungeon? The author's side description is based on thick armor, but the protagonist only brought a simple armor back to the camp to sell. Even if it was worn, the empire should have strict inspections to prevent intelligent monsters from sneaking into the empire, but the two of them went out easily. As for some small details, I think AI assistance should be used or the author is not rigorous about the setting of his book. I will give one more star for the purpose of encouragement.
It feels very interesting to me when I see it so far. There is no big poisonous point, and there is no plot where the game suddenly affects reality. Players who want to maintain comparison are creatures who like to have fun. It is good for the national level to basically use the game as a laboratory to conduct experiments that are difficult to implement in reality. The above content is only my personal opinion, please don't comment if you don't like it😔
Sacrificing a little nun may be a little annoying in the early stage, but generally there is no big problem. The writing style of the book is a bit too real like Sword of the Dawn and this game. Also, these dozens of chapters are definitely written by humans, and typos often appear. A suggestion here is to throw the nun's body out and tell outsiders that she is gone, and then let the new consciousness that inherits the nun's life experience use the new body. This is a matter of opinion and wisdom. The above is the evaluation of an 800-hour book lover.
I didn't expect that there were so few ratings. This book is actually the author's first book. After finishing it, I can only wait for the serialization of qaq. Overall, the development and logic of the plot are pretty good, and the writing is also okay. It's not boring to read. Although there are some emotional lines, they are not all negative and are still within an acceptable range. Looking forward to subsequent updates, no need to be a eunuch woo woo woo
A paragraph is too long
I always have a feeling of déjà vu
I'm dying of trouble with naming names. Can you recommend some good online names? Otherwise, I'll have to start with the readers [crying]
Very pretty. It is also very interesting in the theme of the 4th natural disaster.
As a non-templated fourth natural disaster article, it is already very good.
Okay, well written
It's very nice to watch and the players are very fun. I think the front part needs to be changed. The author is the woman. In the end, for example, she copied a body or something. Otherwise, the front part is really a bit too shocking. Really, I feel that you wrote the back part very well, but the front part is the most difficult to tolerate. It just ruins the first impression. The back part is so beautiful. Come on, author😋😋😋
If you can't find a book to read, you can read it
Personally I feel good about it, but I don't know why no one is watching it.
As a fourth natural disaster article, it's quite normal.
It's a very good novel. It's a bit poisonous to read.
The story is interesting and makes you want to read it. But I finished reading the new book very quickly. Good luck to the author.
It looks great, the writing is good, there are no big problems with the plot, and there is no need to abuse the protagonist. Very well written
It's pretty good and very delicate, but I prefer the excitement of combat. Come on!
The writing is okay, probably because there were no updates before so no one commented.