Pirates: the Ship Was Blown up by Luffy at the Beginning

For the growth type, it is indeed better to get the fruit in the small garden. There is nothing wrong with the plot closely following the original plot, but the protagonist is a bit too bold and will break into the trap even if he knows it is a trap. Generally speaking, there is no big poisonous point. There is also a bit of fun before getting the fruit, that is, the scene where the protagonist tears the fish gills with his claws, which is quite exciting. I hope the protagonist will develop more physical skills in the future plot, after all, he has the title of fighter. Give the protagonist more opportunities to express himself and become stronger. I haven't seen it in the Seven Waters City yet. I saw the amnesia Kaiba. Here, I feel that the protagonist is a deputy c. After a battle, complaining takes up a lot of parts.

In the early stage, it was purely complaining and did nothing, which is considered a small poisonous point. However, after you get over it, you can see the growth of the protagonist, slowly changing from being someone who can only watch from the sidelines to becoming one of the main characters. In my heart, I also changed from complaining in front of me to slowly integrating into the group. It's a good pirate fanfic.

I read the first 100 chapters and it was okay. But it's rare to travel back and forth without knowing the plot, and it feels like I'm watching the pirate version of Gintama, except that the male protagonist will be assigned a cadre when he's complaining and fighting, which is the same as the original. Why do you want something different? If nothing changes, I'm not sure the point of your coming.

Give it a five-star review first, and look at it later. It was pretty good that I acted as my mouthpiece before, it was quite funny. I think the flow with the boat is actually not very easy to write. If the strength is too strong, it will be easy to write it as a nanny or it will not be realistic. If you are too strong, you will easily be overtaken by Five Old Stars Im and others. If you are too weak, you will have to find the effect of the program. I feel like you found the effect of the program earlier. I hope that Judiciary Island will still have to show its claws and show its skills in the future. By that time, Luffy and the others had already been noticed and it wouldn't be too out of the blue. I stay tuned. If there are any questions later, I will give another 6 points

It is very consistent with the original work. Unlike other games that spoil the story and domineering settings in the early stage, the characters are still interesting to grow through adventures little by little. I hope not to add original things indiscriminately in the future.

Although the protagonist has almost integrated into the battle, the style of painting is still a bit different from the Straw Hats [smirk] [smirk]

This is an ordinary novel, the protagonist's strength is not exaggerated, and it is unremarkable.

It's okay. Although the previous ones are basically complaints, at least it has established a character.

I think it's very beautiful

I want to know if the heroine is Nami Is there a female protagonist?

Overall, it's pretty good to watch, but the protagonist doesn't feel like the protagonist at the beginning. I personally feel that the author describes Luffy more than the protagonist [thoughts]

Good, good, good

Originally, I read the comment section, thinking that I could finally see what I wanted to see without changing the plot too much, but the protagonist's sense of presence was too low in the early stage [Thinking] Okay, okay, this is what I finally want to see since Little Garden! I hope the author will work hard [sending heartfelt wishes]

Yes, it's pretty.

I like it very much. Come on, author.

The protagonist is my pure mouth substitute

It's very heavy, but I like it

It's really good to watch. I think I'm really looking forward to the plot of the war and the reunion with Shampoo. I'm really looking forward to it.

The narrative is good, but the writing still needs improvement (only my personal opinion)

It's okay, not ugly, and not particularly good-looking. The protagonist is very distinctive. Martial arts fans complain that Yakuza is not a stallion. For the sake of faster and more updates, I give it a five-star rating.

It's perfect, all the details are written down, it's very smooth, and it's very comfortable to watch.

Personally, I think it's quite to my liking, but it's a bit of a drama to always use a chivalrous tone to interpret The Strong Man of the Sea. Overall, I still like to watch it.

The protagonist has made significant progress

How many heroines are there?

The back is okay, but the front camera looks too much like it was written by AI. I guess the low stars are all poisoned by the front.

Can you add a weapon to the protagonist?