Fantasy: When You Are Born with Qi at the Beginning, Your Breathing Will Become Stronger

The plot is okay, especially the part where the protagonist is treated as a bad guy in the rain, which has a martial arts feel. If you want to write a story without a heroine, I can give you a suggestion: don't describe the girl's appearance too much. The kind of writing that makes the country beautiful will be cheap but others will read it.

Personally, I think it's average to above average. It doesn't look frustrating, nor is it particularly outstanding. To put it simply, the most basic trick is immortality + automatic cultivation. The effect of immortality is to resurrect with full blood after death. The resurrection time seems to be controllable, and it comes with super recovery power. There is also a simple way to gain special energy by losing blood. The special energy can be stored and the amount of burst can be controlled. As of Chapter 75, nothing particularly powerful has appeared in other dungeons. In terms of character, the protagonist tends to be kind. The old man who raised the protagonist has always set an example and done good deeds. Before he died, he also hoped that the protagonist would help others within his ability. However, the person who deserves to be killed is indeed not merciless, and he will not be kind to himself for no reason. However, when someone comes to the protagonist for help, the protagonist will most likely not refuse. As of Chapter 75, the detective was a bit embarrassed and asked the protagonist for help. However, in Chapter 75, the protagonist also lost his temper. For the sake of the villagers, in addition to the reward, he also asked for a larger storage instrument, so he agreed. I don't know if there is a female protagonist. The current intention of the protagonist is to be single, but there is a female genius who is a Xuanwu Dharma minister in the government, and there is a female fox demon beside her (currently she can transform, but except for the ability to transform when she first broke through, she has never transformed once, and she has always been in the fox state)

Not bad, but when will the protagonist find the volcano? The upgrade speed is very fast, and the kill is very strong, but there are some places that just don't feel good. Because no matter how strong the protagonist is, he will always encounter events that far exceed his current strength, resulting in a tough fight in the end. As soon as the protagonist leaves the novice village, he immediately encounters a world-destroying event that is approaching step by step. As soon as he encounters an event, a high-level villain cadre pops up and directly summons meteorites to smash the protagonist into a roadside. I wonder if the protagonist can't always rely on resurrection, at least he must have some counterattack ability, right? It was an event that destroyed the world so early, so I'm curious about how it was written in the later period, and whether one entry every year also disappeared, and there are no new entries later.

It was well written to see a fox kill someone. If the fox is killed, then the Haechi should also be killed. After all, Haechi also eat humans. Why is it only 5.9? If the quality can maintain above 9 points, there will be no problem! [The masterpiece of bird food][Has been planted][Please update][Add one to the bookshelf]

Personally, I think it looks good. I think the foxes can be brothers. Evil people use children to make elixirs. Prison foxes kill evil people for cultivation. It's like punishing evil with rewards. Emmm, I think it's a good description of good retribution and evil punishment. There may be some poison, but I haven't tasted it. It should be within my tolerance.

The overall description is quite good, but the world view is slightly lacking and needs to be filled in. Moreover, the protagonist's martial arts skills are a bit scattered. The official organization looks like a weakling, which does not meet the official definition, but Shuhuang can still take a look.

I feel like the writing is okay, the screen is large, the content is stable, the visual clarity is average to above, the content is the kind that requires hundreds of chapters, and the summary can be read

So far it looks pretty good

The writing is pretty good, keep it up 👍

Immortal and invincible

Just this strong mouth!

This book is not bad

It's actually an adaptation of Yong Jie Wu Jian [awkward laugh]

It's pretty. Come on.

Why does it feel like there is no end to eternity? [Face covering] Add more updates

This is not a synthesis. It should be called a lottery. If you put in any five, you can randomly draw one.

I am Wuji Empire Wuwei Houyue Mountain

It's okay, but there are a lot of small flaws. Let's improve it slowly. It's good for passing the book shortage.

It looks good, but where did the author go? Come back soon

Bull Demon, is the ancient secret realm going to be called Huiyang Realm?

The protagonist has a positive outlook on life, surpassing 90% of the protagonists in other books.

This feels so much better

It's okay, much better than some books.

It's quite good-looking, and the protagonist's combat power is within a reasonable range.

Not bad, the hook is strong enough, and the plot is normal

The background of the novel is Eternal Knot, which is similar to the background of the game, but the main character has clear love and hatred, revolving around good and evil, grudges and grudges. It starts slowly and makes people feel happy when reading.

Not bad, not bad at all, you can watch it

Personally I think it's good. . Even if it's slow to warm up and push slowly, it's still fine.

The content is big, the content is detailed, the performance is stable, the growth is stable, and it looks good!