星铁：踏上列车，帕姆说我好烧

I think the plot of this book is really interesting. I looked at the negative reviews in the comment area, and they all said that the protagonist was weak in the early stage. I don't deny it, but I like the protagonist's character and style of doing things, and his strength is gradually improving. I personally also like the feeling of gradually getting stronger. Although the plot of Ompharos currently does not include the protagonist group, the author's characterization and daily life of the protagonist are very interesting, and I like it very much. This is purely a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, you are right whatever you say.

I can give it a 9.5 Rating, which is a very good book. I don't like books that forcefully add drama in the name of "whole work" or "fun person". Looking at it now, the humorous plot arranged in this book is quite appropriate. Seriousness and humor are both distinct and complementary, making the world depicted in the whole book more vivid and three-dimensional. Of course there are a lot of minor flaws, but this is a tomato. Generally speaking, this is a rare and "serious" novel. There is no work for the sake of work, no work for the sake of pleasure, and no torture for the sake of torture. Assuming that the author publishes the book on a paid platform and has more time to polish it, it should be able to sell well. But after writing so many words on this platform, the rating is unexpectedly low. I read it faster in the early stages, and the content in the early stages was indeed a bit bland, which may be the reason for the low rating. From the middle to the later stages, I can clearly feel the improvement. Now I'm about 2/3 of the way there. Come on!

The characters are well written. Regardless of the changes made to the original plot after the protagonist traveled through time, there are no big problems overall. There are only minor problems, such as the lack of Xing's plot. Of course, this is not a problem. After all, it is a fan work. Compared with other fan works, there are no extremely OOC or unreasonable plots. There are not too many ups and downs in the plot. It is a very smooth development, which is very good.

I think this book is quite good and the setting is quite interesting. In terms of plot, it doesn't completely follow the main line, which is better than some people have always followed. The main reason is that Starry Sky gives too much in reality, which is a bit nonsense. Some people say that the protagonist is too cowardly. This is because you have never seen a more cowardly character. I have been reading novels since 19 years old, and I have read everything I see now. Compared to those poisonous ones, this is considered good. And besides, what other good books do you want, Tomato? I really want to see someone with brains go to the starting point

Hao Chi😋, ten or even nine points of deliciousness, the author will update quickly. Ounegai, if there is no update, Vadasi will be broken [cry][cry][cry][cry]

Has the author rested enough? Get up and continue writing.

After reading so many fan stories, I learned one thing: the first thing an ordinary protagonist does when he travels to Bengtie is the first thing he needs to do when his life is not in danger. That is to call the mythical star god and step into the mysterious destiny. If there is no myth to cover it up, otherwise the secret of this world traveler will not be kept at all. Aha, he can see it in an instant, and the other star gods can look at the protagonist's memory at will.

I think it's pretty good. I caught up to date all at once. I think the overall score should be 8.0 Or above even if it's not 9.0. I'm a little confused. Anyway, I think it's pretty good-looking. The protagonist is weak in the early stage but it's okay. I like Xiao Sanyue, but Xiao Sanyue doesn't know. I talked to Xia Die in Ompharos. The explanation is a kind of self-evasion similar to self-destruction. I think it's okay. You can watch it. If you don't like it, skip the next link and watch it. It won't be a big problem.

It's pretty good. It makes me feel that this is what real ordinary people look like when they enter the game world.

The author is great, no need to say more A lot of negative reviews think that the protagonist is ordinary in the early stage, but after watching it, I feel much more comfortable.

Big cheers for the author! I'm optimistic about you!

Not bad, give the author a five-star review

The protagonist has independent opinions, upright views, and a strict moral bottom line. Just because of these three things, I want to read this book.

I think this book is pretty good, because I just enjoy reading novels. As long as it's not too brainless, I can accept it. I have also read everyone's comments. How should I put it? I can only say that my thoughts and opinions are different. I don't think there are many bad things. I have been reading this book, and I just feel that the protagonist's improvement in strength is quite reasonable. After all, you shouldn't take novels too seriously. This is purely a personal opinion, and not the comments before these, please don't comment.

Come on, the more you look at it, the better it will be. I'm optimistic about you.

Haokang, the author can cure it with tonic medicine After finishing the review, I was surprised to find that this book had such a low rating. I read the reviews carefully and found that many of the two-star reviewers said that the protagonist was too bad. But I looked through the table of contents again and found that in chapter 35, the protagonist embarked on a fateful journey. The kind of person who has the best combat power in the first three chapters should be the invincible flow... And there is a saying that the One Star Iron fandom is not very suitable for the invincible flow. Now it has not even reached version 4.0. If you really want to be invincible, you will be stabbed in the back by Lao Mi. Most of this book follows the plot, and there are some small copies added by the author in the middle (there are currently two), which allow us to see the other adventures of the four children on the train (but I personally feel that the copies are not very well written?). The rest is a relatively normal Star Iron fanfic, but what interests me is that the author talks about Tibao in the early stage of the Fire Chasing Journey. This is something I have not seen in the Star Iron game plot (the plot has been briefly mentioned), and I am looking forward to it.

I don't know why the rating is so low, but it is a novel worth reading. There are basically no poisonous points in the whole book. The author is not just repeating the plot. It will become more and more exciting after reading it. It's just a pity that I won't talk about it later.

As far as it goes, this book is great, so go ahead, author!

Not to mention anything else, the interpersonal relationship between the protagonist and the train crew is very well written. It is a complete friendship between the train family and the relationship between the characters is also well written.

A very good book, but the score is a bit low

Very heartwarming story

Personally I quite like it

It's pretty. Come on.

The characters in the previous plot were quite vivid, but when they arrived at Xianzhou, they turned into pseudo-human beings. Was they taken away by Aha? Immediately, my temperament changed into that of a Holy Mother.

Interesting, support the author to continue writing

A very good novel[OK]

Nothing more to say, just a five-star review.

The plot behind it is good, I love watching [Chigua]

It's very well written, I hope I can finish it

Finished reading, it's very interesting