Hollow Knight: Failed Vessel

As a Hollow Knight gamer, I'm curious about how to write a Hollow Knight fanfic? Because it is different from traditional novels, the audience of Hollow Knight is smaller and narrower. The author is very thorough in characterization. The story unfolds in two lines, divided into the white king and the protagonist. I am really looking forward to how the main line will develop in the future? To make up for King Bai's regret? Save Hallownest? As a container of failure, the protagonist escapes from the abyss and comes to Dezhen to study and forms a bond with the bone nail master. This is a sharp contrast to King Bai's predecessor, which leaves people with a sense of expectation. The shortcomings are that it is regrettable that the main plot is not clear enough at present, which makes people confused, and the direction of the protagonist is not clear enough. However, the interaction between the characters in the article is eye-catching. After reading it now, it prefers daily writing. Those who have cleared Hollow Knight can come here to check in. As long as it keeps updating, I think it's still worth a try.

Looks good! A large number of original plots show us a different and prosperous Hallownest. The protagonist is also very likeable, has strength, is willing to work hard, and has grown a lot in terms of mentality. The other supporting characters are also well portrayed. The only shortcoming is that when it comes to the plot involving King Bai, King Bai's words are weird, and there is always a feeling that "King Bai doesn't speak in this tone"

The plot is reasonable, no OOC, no poisonous points, the protagonist is a container, and the time period is when the seniors have just been trained. Overall, it is still very interesting. I just hope the author can be faster and stop being a eunuch.

In other words, there is no need to be so rigid. Just climb the wall with Mantis Claw, double jump with Emperor Wing, and sprint with Moth Wing Cloak. Let's face it, without having to consider gameplay, spells can be made better, and you have the ability to learn teleportation, blocking and other more incredible things. There are also those deep nest weaver skills. Senbei learned one, and you can do it too. Sword skills are definitely more flexible in reality. You can follow your own path, there is no need to be so rigid. Talisman involves soul and will, and the talisman slot is for gameplay considerations. In reality, it all depends on the carrying capacity. You have all the containers. You can install them all at will. You can even learn to rub a few yourself. If you are willing, you can also absorb souls. In reality, you don't need to consider balance. Kill the enemy, absorb relevant traits, and condense them into talismans (. After the void invasion in Spun City, the mobs learned a lot of skills without a teacher. You can also let the protagonist explore them. What a good template ( In reality, you don't have to consider gameplay, and you also have subjective initiative. There are so many changes you can make.

Nice! ! ! ! Finally, there is a description of pure containers. Other books just describe them, so leave this aside! There is actually a small interaction between Xiao Chun and Bai Wang here! ! ! (It's just that the appearance of the protagonist seems to be 100 million points popular)

Yes, the plot in the early stage is stable and focuses on developing one's own strength. The character setting is not OOC. Overall, it can be described as comfortable. I'm just curious about what the author will do when the climax of the plot of sealing the radiation is revealed in the middle of the plot? If this key point is written well, then this book can be improved to a higher level. If not, it would be a pity.

No kidding, anyone who has played Hollow Knight will think this book is good, reasonable, and really good! The plot is very new, and I am also very curious about Hallownest in its prosperous period, and I feel that it satisfies this! ! ! Highly recommended.

To be honest, this book, which I have been reading for a long time, is well written, but now that I have read the part about Soul Master, I feel there is a poisonous point: The portrayal of the protagonist in this article has always been good, but the protagonist has a bit too much compassion for the Madonna, and the overall feeling seems to be immature, like a child. For deeper discussions, it is a bit too immature. For example, the anger towards the White King and the argument against the Soul Master are a bit too dramatic, as if everyone is playing house with the protagonist. The White King basically does not have the feeling of a higher being, and the argument with the Soul Master makes the protagonist seem too Madonna-like. When I express my thoughts, I don't mean to criticize the shortcomings of this novel. I just want to share what I have discovered so far that can be further improved. I personally love this novel very much and like this novel very much because it is a novel with a very delicate plot and character portrayal among hollow fanfics. It is also one of the best hollow fanfics I have read so far.

The plot is relatively logical, and at least it is more comfortable to watch than most literary works (Hollow Knight is better written except for the cp text) [Like][Like][Like][Like]

Which is the most impure and failed container. But it is also the most successful and perfect Hollow Knight [Thinking][Thinking]

Is the author finished? It has been more than two months and there has been no movement at all.

It's so well written [laughs] I want to read it all the time. I'm looking forward to the protagonist meeting the White King in the competition! (˵¯͒¯͒˵)

The book is very interesting, but the author was imprisoned in the Black Egg Temple and had his blessing sealed away, so he probably won't be able to come out.

It's quite interesting. It's a rare Hollow Knight fanfic. The theme is the prosperity of Hallownest before the second plague. I'm looking forward to it.

The book is quite good, and it is very smooth to read without interruption. The additional content written by the author also takes over part of the plot of the original work well. I don't know what will happen when faced with pure people, but you must not engage in military superiority.

It's a very good Hollow Knight novel. I like the character creation and conversation in it. Of course, there is also the interaction with the little hornet ( =•ω•= )m. Overall, it is a good hollow novel. I feel that this is the only hollow novel that I can read like Holy Chao [smiles]

It's very beautiful. Shen Nong has eaten something good. The protagonist's personality is more like that of the Little Knight. Although the dialogue of the characters is more humane and lacks the loneliness of the original narrative, it can better reflect the vitality of Hallownest.

I came back to visit the grave [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying] Author woo woo woo

It's very interesting, but I don't know why the update was discontinued [crying] Anyway, it's a worth reading among the Hollow Knight novels.

This is the best Hollow Knight fanfic I have ever seen. It can be seen that the author has a very deep understanding of the original work. The book also includes some of the author's own insights. Now that many characters have appeared, I don't know how the author should end this story. Should he use his own power to change the original destiny of Hallownest and end it, or will he go on an adventure with Bumblebee in the spin network? All in all, I am very much looking forward to the subsequent plot development of this book [Blow kiss]

There is a kind of attraction after watching it in the early stage. The more you watch it, the more you want to continue watching it. The beginning is more eye-catching and not too boring. There aren't many bad points later on, but I just don't know why the rating is so low.

It's pretty good, but the author seems to have 1.4

Nice! What would Hallownest be like in its prosperous times? If the plague has not spread yet, what kind of communication is there between insects? The Hollow Knight has not yet grown up, can the protagonist change the ending of the seal? Expect! Looking forward to it!

It looks good, but author, please update it quickly! ! ! [Cry][cry][cry]

Well, there are no omissions or tampering in the game settings and details. The self-setting is also very reasonable. The time starts from the birth of the container. The plot progresses at a decent speed and is not too delayed. Come on, author.

It's super nice and great. It's my favorite among Hollow Knight. But the author hasn't updated it recently. I hope the author can be resurrected.

The plot is great! For example, when I first came into contact with the IP "Hollow Knight", I couldn't help but feel a little interested in the game. Nice writing! I hope I can see the protagonist team up with the "Little Knight" during the winter vacation. I wish this book will get better and better! Ouo

Go to the grave to pay tribute to the past

You've done a great job, you're beautiful and love reading a lot. As a container, you shouldn't be tired and finish the book in one go [laughing]

A very good Hollow Knight fanfic. The timeline is probably when the senior was just fished out of the abyss. The plot is also very interesting. I hope it will be a great success [top post][top post]