Written for myself, a novel manuscript I wrote when I was twelve years old [Sweet Pet of Master and Disciple + Redemption through Books + Cultivating Immortals and Farming + The Darkening of a Yandere + 1V1HE]
Shi Luo travels into a fake novel, and his mission is to help the beautiful and powerful protagonist counterattack to regain his luck.
Unexpectedly, I failed to break through at the beginning and almost burped, but I found a poor little guy in the snow who was even worse than myself.
Shi Luo maintains the character of a profound immortal: "Why cry, there is no future! Master will teach you how to farm."
While others were cultivating immortals, she farmed, while her disciples were cultivating her to fish, and she just used her own formation to plant barren hills into a paradise that the world of cultivation envied!
She thought she was playing a leisurely game of farming and raising cubs, and she always protected her little apprentice behind her.
Until the entire world of cultivation came to the door with red eyes, saying that her apprentice was possessed by a demon and wanted to kill him to achieve enlightenment!
Shi Luo pointed at Bai Jia and cursed: "Demon, your sister! Zhengdao, your uncle! He is still a child!"
The next second the system screamed: [Warning! Chu Tinglan's blackening value is 100%! The protagonist has counterattacked and turned into a villain, and the plot has completely deviated! Please host escape immediately!
Shi Luo: "..." Well, is it still too late to run away now?
The little pitiful old man wiped away his tears and trapped her in his arms with a chuckle, his eyes filled with bone-gnawing madness:
"Master, where are you going? Do you think your disciple... Is not serving you well enough?"
Shi Luo: ... Damn, what a wolf cub!
Later, a taboo spread in the world of cultivation:
It is better to provoke the King of Hell than to provoke the crying little disciple of Jinghan Xianzun's family.
If you hurt him, the Immortal Master will let you know that the elixir and spirit plant can save lives or kill them, and the ancient formations can trap people and even hurt people's hearts.
And if you hurt the Immortal Lord... Chu Tinglan will smile and let the entire world of cultivation be buried with you.
Reader comments
I came here from the author's book "Queen of the Top". The novel is overall very good and makes people want to read it. The female protagonist is very strong and will never suffer any injustice. The male protagonist is the kind of person who is always protected by the female protagonist. I haven't finished watching it yet, and I hope Mo Yuan is doing well.
It's okay. You can read it when there is a book shortage. There are some minor flaws, but it's still acceptable.
There are many comments about a book, and it is hard to imagine that this is a story that the author thought about when he was 13 years old. Except for the feeling that the pace is a bit fast at the end, as if he is in a hurry to finish, the rest of the writing is really good.
The writing is wonderful, not rigid or too verbose, and the points are very accurate. I recommend reading it.
It's pretty good, but it feels a bit logically confusing, but it's still watchable. The male and female protagonists are okay in the early stage, but it feels weird in the later stage. That's my personal feeling. The ending is he.
It's very beautiful [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] This is a very special thing I saw Master Wen [Adoration]
I came here from the author's book "Queen of the Top". The novel is overall very good and makes people want to read it. The female protagonist is very strong and will never suffer any injustice. The male protagonist is the kind of person who is always protected by the female protagonist. I haven't finished watching it yet, and I hope Mo Yuan is doing well.
It's okay. You can read it when there is a book shortage. There are some minor flaws, but it's still acceptable.
There are many comments about a book, and it is hard to imagine that this is a story that the author thought about when he was 13 years old. Except for the feeling that the pace is a bit fast at the end, as if he is in a hurry to finish, the rest of the writing is really good.
The writing is wonderful, not rigid or too verbose, and the points are very accurate. I recommend reading it.
It's pretty good, but it feels a bit logically confusing, but it's still watchable. The male and female protagonists are okay in the early stage, but it feels weird in the later stage. That's my personal feeling. The ending is he.
It's very beautiful [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] This is a very special thing I saw Master Wen [Adoration]